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Line 159: The introduction should be written in such a way that it is intelligible to the non-specialist. Right now it reads like a legal contract. A bit of plain English in the body of the article would be welcome as well.[[User:Wwallacee\|Wwallacee]] ([[User talk:Wwallacee\|talk]]) 08:04, 2 October 2008 (UTC) :Thanks for the input. Have a look at the opening sentence now. Please tell us what you think. [[Special:Contributions/Zain Ebrahim111\|Zain Ebrahim]] ([[User talk:Zain Ebrahim111\|talk]]) 09:11, 2 October 2008 (UTC) ~~Mr Ebrahim, why are you taking it on yourself to edit this page for others,~~ this article is a botch-ups. Let someone else have a go, they may do a better job! <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures\|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/89.194.192.239\|89.194.192.239]] ([[User talk:89.194.192.239\|talk]]) 06:30, 3 October 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> == First paragraph...==

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