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Well, please expand and update it sooner rather than later. Right now it is all [[WP:OR|Original Research]], and rather frivolous at that. The lede makes a claim that there is a concept within "Human rights" that can be referred to -- interchangably it seems -- as a Freedom of movement, mobility rights or as the right to travel. Then it claims that this right/freedom/concept is "expressed" in the [[Universal Declaration of Human Rights]]. And then it dumps the raw text of Article 13, for no apparent reason other than to function as a filler. I don't see much that is worth saving here. [[user:Heptor | <font color = "#000040"><b>H</b></font><font color = "#400000">eptor</font>]] [[User_talk:Heptor | <sub><small><font color = "#400000">talk</font></small></sub>]] 22:13, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
* We don't withdraw from important topics merely because they are broad and abstract, and therefore difficult to write about. We move forward with improving them. "Freedom of movement" gets over one hundred thousand Google Books hits, and "right to travel" gets over eighty thousand, so there are plenty of sources to work with. [[User:BD2412|<font style="background:gold">'''''bd2412'''''</font>]] [[User talk:BD2412|'''T''']] 01:13, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
Pardon the sarcasm, but most scholars argue that it is far better to publish nothing at all than to publish something of rubbish quality. Especially when that something is wrong and misleading. That being said, I think the lede has been improved significantly, and it is actually quite good now. Many thanks to BD2412 and Jadeslair. [[user:Heptor | <font color = "#000040"><b>H</b></font><font color = "#400000">eptor</font>]] [[User_talk:Heptor | <sub><small><font color = "#400000">talk</font></small></sub>]] 20:33, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
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