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== Peer Review of Initial Contribution ==
Great progress on the article so far and I believe that the plans for further improvement will truly improve the quality of the article. Overall the additions do a great job of clarifying and expanding on certain points that were vague. The content is written from a neutral point of view and is, for the most part, backed up by reputable sources. I recommend adding a citation after every line to clearly indicate where each statement was found. Going forward, I think that restructuring the article by arranging the regional sections geographically and making the history section more coherent are a good plan. Perhaps you could also add a section on dialogue and viewpoints surround freedom of movement if there is any. Looking forward to your future edits!
[[User:GHumphrey97|GHumphrey97]] ([[User talk:GHumphrey97|talk]]) 03:40, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
== Improvement Project ==
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