User contributions for 37.152.231.109

21 November 2020

• 10:3310:33, 21 November 2020 diff hist −194‎ Brawn GP ‎ →‎Sale to Mercedes-Benz and legacy: improved dreadful writing and removed pov
• 10:1910:19, 21 November 2020 diff hist +6‎ Argentine Grand Prix ‎ →‎Absence: Fixed basic errors Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:5505:55, 21 November 2020 diff hist −722‎ Coluche ‎ Removed or rewrote text of appallingly low quality, obviously added by people who do not speak English
• 05:5005:50, 21 November 2020 diff hist +11‎ Deux heures moins le quart avant Jésus-Christ ‎ write like adults please
• 05:4805:48, 21 November 2020 diff hist −73‎ Mark Capes ‎ improved poor writing
• 05:4605:46, 21 November 2020 diff hist −10‎ List of solved missing person cases: post-2000 ‎ →‎2020s: fixed clueless writing
• 05:4005:40, 21 November 2020 diff hist −177‎ Steve Fossett ‎ →‎Recovery of wreckage and remains: original research
• 05:3905:39, 21 November 2020 diff hist −94‎ Steve Fossett ‎ →‎Disappearance and search: latitude and longitude not relevant here
• 05:2005:20, 21 November 2020 diff hist −2‎ Matthew Smith (games programmer) ‎ →‎Early life

20 November 2020

• 23:1423:14, 20 November 2020 diff hist −8‎ Government shutdowns in the United States ‎No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:3015:30, 20 November 2020 diff hist −17‎ Cairngorm Plateau disaster ‎ →‎Aftermath: if Britain's worst, then Scotland's worst by definition
• 15:2915:29, 20 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ Cairngorm Plateau disaster ‎ style
• 13:4613:46, 20 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ 2016 United States presidential election recounts ‎ →‎Reactions: grammar
• 06:0306:03, 20 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ Swedish Grand Prix ‎ →‎The 1978 race and the Brabham "fan car"
• 06:0306:03, 20 November 2020 diff hist −1,288‎ Swedish Grand Prix ‎ →‎Official names and sponsors: removed extremely boring list. Official names of individual events should be given in the event's own article but have zero value in this format. Tags: Reverted section blanking
• 06:0006:00, 20 November 2020 diff hist −230‎ Swedish Grand Prix ‎ →‎The 1978 race and the Brabham "fan car": writing was awful. improved significantly, cut the rambling, made direct and neutral

19 November 2020

• 23:2323:23, 19 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ Michael J. Fox ‎ →‎Early life: style
• 19:1419:14, 19 November 2020 diff hist +34‎ 2016 ATP World Tour Finals – Singles ‎ Fixed up appalling mess which did not even state which event it was about.
• 19:0619:06, 19 November 2020 diff hist −16‎ Piers Courage ‎No edit summary
• 14:4814:48, 19 November 2020 diff hist −6‎ No Woman, No Cry ‎ →‎Fugees version
• 14:4714:47, 19 November 2020 diff hist +10‎ No Woman, No Cry ‎ →‎Writing credit: fixed poor, NPOV-violating writing
• 14:4414:44, 19 November 2020 diff hist −112‎ No Woman, No Cry ‎ →‎Lyrics: remove serious insults to the reader's intelligence, made even worse by grammar errors
• 12:2512:25, 19 November 2020 diff hist −22‎ 2020 Belgian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race: one can see that people who don't speak English have been at work here
• 11:4611:46, 19 November 2020 diff hist −34‎ Renault in Formula One ‎ →‎2019 season: fixed cluelessness
• 10:5210:52, 19 November 2020 diff hist −10‎ Palmaris longus muscle ‎ →‎Evolution: whether it is simple or complicated is completely irrelevant to anything
• 10:5010:50, 19 November 2020 diff hist −181‎ Palmaris longus muscle ‎ →‎Evolution: removed uncited speculation
• 10:4910:49, 19 November 2020 diff hist +2‎ Palmaris longus muscle ‎ →‎Carpal tunnel syndrome & palmaris longus variants
• 10:4210:42, 19 November 2020 diff hist −9‎ Welsh Dragon ‎ →‎Owain Glyndŵr
• 10:4010:40, 19 November 2020 diff hist −10‎ Lake of Menteith ‎No edit summary
• 05:1005:10, 19 November 2020 diff hist −104‎ 2002 Formula One World Championship ‎ removed some nonsense text. the driver's championship was a battle for first place, as all championships are.
• 04:3904:39, 19 November 2020 diff hist −23‎ Ethiopian Airlines Flight 302 ‎ grammar

18 November 2020

• 23:3523:35, 18 November 2020 diff hist −16‎ Norwegian Law (Israel) ‎No edit summary Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:0918:09, 18 November 2020 diff hist −7‎ Singapore Grand Prix ‎No edit summary
• 18:0718:07, 18 November 2020 diff hist −1,361‎ Singapore Grand Prix ‎ →‎Formula One: rewrote some atrocious text, full of grammar and style errors, opinions, and unencyclopaedic tone.
• 16:4816:48, 18 November 2020 diff hist −75‎ Guillermo Landa y Escandón ‎ fragments -> paragraph
• 16:4416:44, 18 November 2020 diff hist −32‎ Rose Leslie ‎ →‎Early life and ancestry
• 14:1914:19, 18 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Singapore Grand Prix ‎ →‎2009: Improved grammar and clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 14:1514:15, 18 November 2020 diff hist +122‎ Singapore Grand Prix ‎ →‎2008: Previous was ungrammatical and did not explain what the controversy was Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:3512:35, 18 November 2020 diff hist −114‎ Open Water (film) ‎ →‎Sequels: previous was ungrammatical, and absence of sharks is irrelevant
• 12:3112:31, 18 November 2020 diff hist −201‎ Open Water (film) ‎ →‎Plot: not part of the plot.
• 12:3012:30, 18 November 2020 diff hist −151‎ 2014 Australian Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race: removed some opinions. winning the race in 2013 does not mean Raikkonen should have done better than he did in 2014
• 12:2712:27, 18 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ Kevin Magnussen ‎No edit summary
• 12:2612:26, 18 November 2020 diff hist +5‎ 2014 Australian Grand Prix ‎ proper tone
• 10:2410:24, 18 November 2020 diff hist −18‎ 1958 Monaco Grand Prix ‎ →‎Race report: use direct language, not clichés or idioms
• 10:2210:22, 18 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ 1958 Monaco Grand Prix ‎ Fixed appalling English
• 10:2010:20, 18 November 2020 diff hist −13‎ 1958 Moroccan Grand Prix ‎ Tidied up
• 10:1710:17, 18 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Stuart Lewis-Evans ‎ →‎Career: Fixed link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:1610:16, 18 November 2020 diff hist −35‎ Ain-Diab Circuit ‎ Neutral Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:5407:54, 18 November 2020 diff hist −25‎ Piper Perabo ‎ paragraphs consist of more than one sentence.
• 06:1606:16, 18 November 2020 diff hist −75‎ Joffrey Baratheon ‎ →‎Development and reception: previous was completely incoherent