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31 March 2023
- 16:2616:26, 31 March 2023 diff hist −4 List of pornographic magazines Remove the link for Petite. The article with that title references a comedian. There does not appear to me an article for the magazine. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 March 2023
- 03:1403:14, 30 March 2023 diff hist 0 Thirty Meter Telescope conversation (communications between entities) => conservation (protection of artifacts, ecologically significant areas …)
2 March 2023
- 21:3821:38, 2 March 2023 diff hist +203 Talk:Dopamine →3-D model is incorrect: Reply Tag: Reply
- 21:3621:36, 2 March 2023 diff hist +230 Talk:Dopamine →3-D model is incorrect: Reply Tag: Reply
- 21:3221:32, 2 March 2023 diff hist +215 Talk:Dopamine →3-D model is incorrect: Further to this topic, I point out that the two representations are mutually inconsistent.
16 December 2022
- 00:2500:25, 16 December 2022 diff hist −4 Cleveland Elementary School shooting (San Diego) →Imprisonment: Style improvement related to previous exit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:2400:24, 16 December 2022 diff hist −2 Cleveland Elementary School shooting (San Diego) →Imprisonment: Changed "diagnosed as an epileptic" to "diagnosed with epilepsy". A person is not their disease. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 July 2022
- 20:3620:36, 27 July 2022 diff hist +29 Grammarly Style improvements. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3220:32, 27 July 2022 diff hist +1 Grammarly Changed a phrase to a clearer form. Tag: Visual edit
30 June 2022
- 15:2415:24, 30 June 2022 diff hist −1 REST Linguistic correction - every thing -> everything.
- 15:2215:22, 30 June 2022 diff hist +6 REST Linguistic correction - plural/singular mismatch.
22 March 2022
- 16:4916:49, 22 March 2022 diff hist +19 Seven Seas Cultural setting. "Long before the Oceans of the world became known" is very euro-centric. Transparently, coast people around the world were well aware of the ocean on their own coast.
24 January 2022
- 04:1504:15, 24 January 2022 diff hist −41 Hemispherical resonator gyroscope →Disadvantages: Refine first paragraph style and brevity.
- 04:1004:10, 24 January 2022 diff hist −5 Hemispherical resonator gyroscope →Disadvantages: "only few" perhaps intended to be "only a few" changed to "few" for style and brevity.
11 January 2022
- 18:0418:04, 11 January 2022 diff hist −10 Dynamic random-access memory Fourth paragraph: correction to previous edit.
- 18:0218:02, 11 January 2022 diff hist −191 Dynamic random-access memory Fourth paragraph revised to improve clarity and remove repetition.
3 January 2022
- 06:2506:25, 3 January 2022 diff hist −2 SATA →{{Anchor|mSATA}}Mini-SATA (mSATA): Word choice
30 December 2021
- 01:2701:27, 30 December 2021 diff hist −1 Gabriel Mac →Career: Misgendered correction. Tags: Manual revert Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 October 2020
- 20:2420:24, 2 October 2020 diff hist −1 UTF-8 →Codepage layout: Remove superfluous comma in "FE, and FF".
- 20:2320:23, 2 October 2020 diff hist −6 UTF-8 →Codepage layout: Removed "They" before FE and FF. Unnecessary and confusing.