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:{{DYK views|14,282|595.1|December 2021}} [[User:Theleekycauldron|theleekycauldron]] ([[User talk:Theleekycauldron|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Theleekycauldron|contribs]]) ([[Singular they|they]]/she) 01:17, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
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== could you help me out? ==
I'm looking to nominate [[SLAPP Suits]] for FA status; I think I'm almost ready to wrap up the peer review, but could you take a quick look-through and give some thoughts? It'd really be appreciated—thanks so much :D happy new year! [[User:Theleekycauldron|theleekycauldron]] ([[User talk:Theleekycauldron|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Theleekycauldron|contribs]]) ([[Singular they|they]]/she) 02:24, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
:And a happy new year to you too. Looking at the article it seems in good shape to me. The lead should be tweaked some, however--for an ~1800 word article with several distinct headings it should ideally be broken up into paragraphs; these don't necessarily need to mirror the exact structure of the article but that's a good way to begin; even if you don't add any more content to it, breaking up the single large paragraph would be a good idea. There's a [[MOS:SANDWICH]] issue in the "Episode" heading which could be resolved by moving either Oliver's portrait or the external video box--the latter might fit in the "Musical number" heading. It's mostly a point of preference but in terms of critical reviews I tend to prefer giving the critic's name as well as the outlet but that's just something to think about. I'm not known for FA-level prose so I can't really comment on it but it's always a good idea to get another pass over it by a copyeditor just to iron out any issues you might overlook in prose, at a minimum it's another pair of eyes before the nomination. Good luck. [[User:Grapple X|ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ]] [[User talk:Grapple X|ꭗ]] 15:14, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
::gotcha, gotcha, fair enough—thanks so much! [[User:Theleekycauldron|theleekycauldron]] ([[User talk:Theleekycauldron|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Theleekycauldron|contribs]]) ([[Singular they|they]]/she) 06:56, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
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