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  • curprev 17:2117:21, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,983 bytes +4‎ I turned the run-on sentence into two different sentences. In the first sentence, I had also removed the hyphen from "break-up" and "cover-up." Since breakup is a noun in this case, there is no need for a hyphen. Cover up would include a hyphen if it were a noun instead of being used as a verb. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 17:1717:17, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,979 bytes +96‎ I reordered the sentences to make it flow better. Before, it said that Dan and Vanessa found out about her identity. By putting both of them together, it makes the reader think that they found out in a similar way. However, they had found out by two separate people and maintained two separate opinions about Georgina. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 17:0317:03, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,883 bytes −1‎ "Confides" seems to have a better connotation than "confesses." Serena is asking for help but is also asking her friends to not say anything to anyone else. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 17:0017:00, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,884 bytes +61‎ I had added a colon to lead into the past incident to make it more clear to the reader that it was in the past. I split the next sentence into two since it was awkward and wordy. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 14:3714:37, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,823 bytes −8‎ I removed an unnecessary phrase at the beginning of the sentence. I then changed "6th" to "sixth" since the manual of style suggests to write out numbers 1-9. I changed "remember" to "recall" since it conveys the same meaning, but Chuck had accessed the memory rather than something kept in his memory. I finally changed "went to" to "abruptly left" to insinuate the mental state Serena was in when she saw Georgina last. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 14:2714:27, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,831 bytes +5‎ I omitted "again" since it is not mentioned in the paragraph that Georgina had called Serena before this sentence. I also changed "no wild partying" to " casual drink." This gives a similar impression and meaning, but it allows "wild" to only be associated with Serena's previous persona to give more emphasis on it. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 02:4402:44, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,826 bytes +4‎ I rephrased the sentence to increase the sentence's clarity and decrease the reader's confusion of the sentence undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 02:4202:42, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,822 bytes −4‎ I changed "ended up missing" to "misses" to have the verb in the present tense and reduce wordiness in the sentence. I also changed "her" to "the" since Serena does not own the SATs but it is rather a standardized test. undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 02:3502:35, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,826 bytes +21‎ I had reworded the sentence to make it more cohesive together and allowed for it to better flow together. I also included how the viewers in the show did not know the types of drugs used in Serena's drink at the dinner undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 02:1202:12, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,805 bytes +6‎ I added a restrictive clause to give more information about the high school which included its name undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 01:5801:58, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,799 bytes +12‎ I rephrased the relative clause to make it flow better within the sentence undo Tag: Visual edit
  • curprev 01:5201:52, 11 April 2023‎ Pst19 talk contribs‎ 28,787 bytes −13‎ I reduced wordiness by changing "used to party" to "partied." I had also removed a phrase that was not needed for the clarity of the sentence: "it was she." undo Tag: Visual edit

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