Sexual and gender-based violence in the 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel: Revision history

3 August 2024

• curprev 01:3201:32, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,395 bytes +6‎ Men were also raped par testimony from male rape victim "D." and reports.
• curprev 01:2001:20, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,389 bytes +5‎ important to note the consequence of the former to latter
• curprev 01:1801:18, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,384 bytes +27‎ adding these some of these victims were raped in Gaza
• curprev 01:1701:17, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,357 bytes +231‎ I kept it more concise and simple par MOS:LEAD, while keeping the contents of the source in question more transparent, using its specific language and conclusions. the "also discrited " implies these testimonies were discreded, which they were not.
• curprev 01:0501:05, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,126 bytes 0‎ Moved to more appropriate space
• curprev 01:0401:04, 3 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,126 bytes +136‎ Without having this in the lede, it is implied everything it heresy or "reportedly." We have direct testimony from victims, and this needs to be noted in lede.
• curprev 00:0300:03, 3 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 158,990 bytes +17‎ fix sentence Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:0100:01, 3 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 158,973 bytes +43‎ Added important info on Patten report, cited in Times reference Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:0000:00, 3 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 158,930 bytes −94‎ Edited to keep the lede as concise as possible Tag: Visual edit

2 August 2024

• curprev 23:5423:54, 2 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 159,024 bytes −1,352‎ Undid revision 1238257978 by Winter queen lizzie (talk) This is just making the lede unnecessarily lengthy again, the very problem that was being addressed, and repeats what is already the detailed overview of the CoI report later on the page. Keep it short and concise. If you want to extend it take to the Talk page for consensus. Tag: Undo
• curprev 23:4623:46, 2 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 160,376 bytes +1,352‎ Re-organized a bit and have a more accurate lede summary of the Un June report. Tag: Reverted
• curprev 23:2523:25, 2 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 159,024 bytes +361‎ source
• curprev 23:2323:23, 2 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 158,663 bytes +56‎ The June 2024 UN reports notes Israeli authorities did not cooperate, but Patten's report did have their cooperation. Important to note.
• curprev 23:2123:21, 2 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 158,607 bytes +24‎ calrifying this includes hostages
• curprev 23:1723:17, 2 August 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 158,583 bytes +135‎ The new lede doesn't make it fully clear that there has been victim testimony, so I am adding it in as it is an important part of the overall article.

1 August 2024

• curprev 16:5816:58, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ 158,448 bytes −19‎ Women are human :) Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 16:5516:55, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ m 158,467 bytes −1‎ Dummy edit to correct the preceding edit summary. Of course I meant "logical-chronological flow" and "@Pincrete". Apologies for as many as three typos in one line of text. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• curprev 16:5316:53, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ 158,468 bytes −779‎ Reworking the lead section again in an attempt at giving it a better logical-hcornological flow. Removed duplicated Hamas denial. Shortened parts about Patten's report – it felt out of proportion, let's just summarise its findings here. Rewording in a few places. @Picrete, thanks for the correction Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• curprev 16:4416:44, 1 August 2024‎ Pincrete talk contribs‎ 159,247 bytes +3‎ Although they use the present tense, in context what is relevant is denying in this instance
• curprev 15:5415:54, 1 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 159,244 bytes +11‎ fixed precise language used in the CoI report Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5115:51, 1 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 159,233 bytes −772‎ removed for repetition, already included in lede. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 15:5115:51, 1 August 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 160,005 bytes +4,377‎ Added CoI report to the lede, included removed parts from the lede to the relevant sections, fixed accuracy. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 06:4006:40, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ 155,628 bytes −1,075‎ The same already stated in the 2nd sentence of the lead Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 06:3906:39, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ 156,703 bytes −33‎ Not any more Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
• curprev 06:3606:36, 1 August 2024‎ Kashmiri talk contribs‎ 156,736 bytes −6,414‎ Significant trim to the lead to bring it to compliance with MOS:LEAD. Removed: reports of individual cases (it's not what lead is for!), quotes from individual journalists, unncessary details. Chronological order restored. Please read MOS:LEAD and don't clutter the lead with content that's not a summary of the body! Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 01:4001:40, 1 August 2024‎ Jamedeus talk contribs‎ m 163,150 bytes +26‎ script-assisted date audit and style fixes per MOS:NUM

27 July 2024

• curprev 21:3921:39, 27 July 2024‎ Alaexis talk contribs‎ 163,124 bytes −602‎ →‎Assessments of motivation: this has nothing to do with the topic of this article
• curprev 21:3721:37, 27 July 2024‎ Alaexis talk contribs‎ 163,726 bytes +3,528‎ Undid revision 1236921509 by Iskandar323 (talk) 100 words is not a large quote; the overview section is for the discussion of the motivation and general characteristics Tag: Undo
• curprev 07:0607:06, 27 July 2024‎ Iskandar323 talk contribs‎ 160,198 bytes −3,528‎ →‎Overview: Large quotes from individual sources and advocacy are not "overview" Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 07:0107:01, 27 July 2024‎ Iskandar323 talk contribs‎ 163,726 bytes +33‎ Lead too long Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• curprev 03:2603:26, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 163,693 bytes +42‎ Formatting and grammar. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 01:0801:08, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 163,651 bytes 0‎ Grammar and formatting Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:5200:52, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 163,651 bytes +4‎ Link to Azadeh Moaveni Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:5000:50, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 163,647 bytes +4‎ Link to UN Women Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:4900:49, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 163,643 bytes +3,617‎ Added additional reporting on the March UN report, how it came about and its scope Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:0900:09, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ m 160,026 bytes −1‎ Grammar and formatting fix. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 00:0700:07, 27 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 160,027 bytes −1,373‎ Removed repetition. Tag: Visual edit

26 July 2024

• curprev 23:5623:56, 26 July 2024‎ Raskolnikov.Rev talk contribs‎ 161,400 bytes −716‎ Fixed sentence. Quote is from the BBC, not the NYT or WaPo. Tag: Visual edit
• curprev 22:3122:31, 26 July 2024‎ Lf8u2 talk contribs‎ m 162,116 bytes +12‎ →‎Interrogations of Hamas militants: links to AI, HRW and PHRI
• curprev 22:2522:25, 26 July 2024‎ Lf8u2 talk contribs‎ m 162,104 bytes +1,106‎ →‎Interrogations of Hamas militants: Added important context and information to the section on the interrogations
• curprev 22:1822:18, 26 July 2024‎ Lf8u2 talk contribs‎ m 160,998 bytes −1,121‎ →‎UN report of June 2024: Relocating section to interrogation section Tag: Manual revert
• curprev 21:4921:49, 26 July 2024‎ Lf8u2 talk contribs‎ m 162,119 bytes +1,121‎ →‎UN report of June 2024: Added important context and information to the section on the interrogations Tag: Reverted
• curprev 20:3920:39, 26 July 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 160,998 bytes +554‎ →‎UN report of June 2024: Added an important detail on reporting on the nature of the crimes.
• curprev 20:3020:30, 26 July 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 160,444 bytes +9‎ →‎Testimony of Israelis: We now have testimony from victims, so it's important to put here.
• curprev 20:2820:28, 26 July 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 160,435 bytes +211‎ Added the important testimony and also split the paragraph, which was already a bit too long.
• curprev 20:2220:22, 26 July 2024‎ Winter queen lizzie talk contribs‎ 160,224 bytes +2,799‎ →‎Re'im music festival and vicinity: Added as it is an important development - first male rape victim to publicly come forward with his story.

25 July 2024

• curprev 17:5017:50, 25 July 2024‎ Omnipaedista talk contribs‎ 157,425 bytes 0‎ MOS:SECTIONORDER

20 July 2024

• curprev 16:1416:14, 20 July 2024‎ TRCRF22 talk contribs‎ 157,425 bytes +7‎ →‎Claims of "weaponization" and "mass" rape as pro-Israeli propaganda
• curprev 11:2011:20, 20 July 2024‎ Alaexis talk contribs‎ 157,418 bytes −593‎ →‎Claims of "weaponization" and "mass" rape as pro-Israeli propaganda: unreliable source, undue here WP:RSP

19 July 2024

• curprev 11:1611:16, 19 July 2024‎ TRCRF22 talk contribs‎ 158,011 bytes +175‎ →‎Claims of "weaponization" and "mass" rape as pro-Israeli propaganda