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**''28 stations are served by the Red Line and 24 stations are served by the Blue line with 15 stations served by both lines.'' - comma after Blue line. |
**''28 stations are served by the Red Line and 24 stations are served by the Blue line with 15 stations served by both lines.'' - comma after Blue line. |
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**You need to be consistent, is it "Blue ''l'''ine" or "Blue '''L'''ine"? |
**You need to be consistent, is it "Blue ''l'''ine" or "Blue '''L'''ine"? |
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*Tables look fine.--'''[[User:SRX|< |
*Tables look fine.--'''[[User:SRX|<span style="color:black;">S</span></font>]]<sub>[[User talk:SRX|<span style="color:blue;">R</span>]]</sub>[[User:SRX/Guestbook|<span style="color:black;">X</span></font>]]''' 15:40, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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::Figured the prose would be my downfall. Anyways, I made the changes you pointed out. The only thing I did differently was the reword on your fourth point as the Blue Line did not exist prior to the "extension," nor is it technically correct (8 miles, 7 cities traversed). I'm still thinking about better ways to phrase this mouthful. --[[User:Millbrooky|Millbrooky]] ([[User talk:Millbrooky|talk]]) 16:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
::Figured the prose would be my downfall. Anyways, I made the changes you pointed out. The only thing I did differently was the reword on your fourth point as the Blue Line did not exist prior to the "extension," nor is it technically correct (8 miles, 7 cities traversed). I'm still thinking about better ways to phrase this mouthful. --[[User:Millbrooky|Millbrooky]] ([[User talk:Millbrooky|talk]]) 16:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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:Just notify me when that sentence is fixed :)'''[[User:SRX|< |
:Just notify me when that sentence is fixed :)'''[[User:SRX|<span style="color:black;">S</span></font>]]<sub>[[User talk:SRX|<span style="color:blue;">R</span>]]</sub>[[User:SRX/Guestbook|<span style="color:black;">X</span></font>]]''' 18:31, 31 October 2008 (UTC)}} |
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*'''Support''' - meets WP:WIAFL.'''[[User:SRX|< |
*'''Support''' - meets WP:WIAFL.'''[[User:SRX|<span style="color:black;">S</span></font>]]<sub>[[User talk:SRX|<span style="color:blue;">R</span>]]</sub>[[User:SRX/Guestbook|<span style="color:black;">X</span></font>]]''' 21:48, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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*'''Support''' Overall, it looks good. But I think the image should be larger as it is hard to see.—< |
*'''Support''' Overall, it looks good. But I think the image should be larger as it is hard to see.—<span style="color:blue; font-family:Papyrus; font-size:medium;">[[User:Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">Chris!</span>]] <sub>[[Special:Contributions/Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">c</span>]][[User talk:Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">t</span>]]</sub></span> 19:14, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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Also "An extension to Lambert-St. Louis International Airport ''opened'' a year later." should be ''was opened'' —< |
Also "An extension to Lambert-St. Louis International Airport ''opened'' a year later." should be ''was opened'' —<span style="color:blue; font-family:Papyrus; font-size:medium;">[[User:Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">Chris!</span>]] <sub>[[Special:Contributions/Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">c</span>]][[User talk:Chrishomingtang|<span style="color:blue;">t</span>]]</sub></span> 19:16, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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::Done. I revised the image to make the text larger and I increased its size on the page from 300px to 420px. --[[User:Millbrooky|Millbrooky]] ([[User talk:Millbrooky|talk]]) 21:31, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
::Done. I revised the image to make the text larger and I increased its size on the page from 300px to 420px. --[[User:Millbrooky|Millbrooky]] ([[User talk:Millbrooky|talk]]) 21:31, 31 October 2008 (UTC) |
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