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== CP133 2019 Group 3 proposed edits ==
Hello! I plan on making edits to this page within the next month in the sections of side effects, health benefits, and statistical trends. My main focus will be on updating some of the older referenced with more up to date and reliable sources. [[User:Krumpp|Krumpp]] ([[User talk:Krumpp|talk]]) 17:39, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Jason: Under “Methods” -> “Medications” -> “Nicotine Replacement Therapy”, we would like to replace the word “nicotine spray” with “nicotine nasal and oral spray” instead, so that people will be more informed regarding the drug delivery method being used. The citation will remain the same as the source also mentioned about both oral and nasal spray formulations. Source is its current one at [25]: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6353172/ [[User:Jwei3|Jwei3]] ([[User talk:Jwei3|talk]]) 05:13, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

Carmen: Under the section: “Substitutes for Cigarettes”, the wikipedia article makes the claim at the end of the first bullet point that NRT success rates are “evidently low; an estimate of 6.8% for patches and 7.9% for gums” and cited citation 115 which leads to what has been flagged as an “unreliable medical source”. I agree with this flag since it sites a website called “quitwithnerd” rather than published literature. I suggest remove this sentence and replacing it with the information from the source (below) stating that NRTs actually increase the rate of qutiting by 50-60%. This source comes from a published paper that compiled data from 136 studies gathered from the Cochrane TObacco Addiction Group trials.
Source includes: doi: 10.1002/14651858 [[User:Cleung160|Cleung160]] ([[User talk:Cleung160|talk]]) 05:42, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

Miranda: Under the section: Medications, when talking about the different types of NRTs it mentions the nicotine gum, inhaler, spray, etc and only lists local skin irritation and rarely non-ischemic chest pain as the only known side effects. This is untrue, as there are a number of different side effects specific to each formulation. For gum, one of the main side effects are mouth soreness and dyspepsia, the lozenge can cause nausea or heartburn, the patch can cause insomnia, and sleep disturbances in addition to a local skin reaction. The spray and the inhaler both cause local irritation
Sources include:
PMC 4465757. PMID 18617085. (2) doi:10.3322/canjclin.55.5.281. ISSN 0007-9235. PMID 16166074. [[User:Mwade94|Mwade94]] ([[User talk:Mwade94|talk]]) 05:11, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

Christina: Section: Pregnant women, It’s mentioned that smoking during pregnancy may lead to pre-term babies that are underdeveloped, have weaker immune systems, and may become smokers later in life. We would like to add that it due to underdevelopment and weaker immune systems, these children may later develop metabolic conditions such as diabetes, kidney diseases, and hypertension [1]. Additionally, smoking during pregnancy increases the chance of sudden unexpected infant death (SUID). According to a study published by American Academy of Pediatrics, the odds ratio of SUID ([aOR] = 2.44) doubled with maternal smoking compared to non smokers (aOR = 0.77) [2].
Sources include: 1. doi: 10.3390/ijerph10126485 and 2. DOI: 10.1542/peds.2018-3325 <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Jwei3|Jwei3]] ([[User talk:Jwei3#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Jwei3|contribs]]) 05:10, 17 October 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->[[User:Chrliao|Chrliao]] ([[User talk:Chrliao|talk]]) 05:19, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

== Within the year before they were surveyed in 2010, 52.4% of adult smokers had made an attempt to quit smoking. Overall, 68.8% want to stop. ==

According to a large survey of Americans in 2010,
:"... 68.8% of adult smokers wanted to stop smoking, 52.4% had made a quit attempt in the past year ...


Hi Poppy
http://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/preview/mmwrhtml/mm6044a2.htm?s_cid=mm6044a2_w


These article edits are well done. The recent revision adds new and current content, and improves organization of the topic, smoking cessation. New information on weight gain and treatment, new evidence on depression and anxiety, updated health effects and the number of US smokers using appropriate references citing the CDC, the National Institute of Health and systematic reviews. The format style of the references is appropriate. This edit improves organization and clarification by breaking down the “symptoms” Section into “withdrawl symptoms”
Morbidity and Mortality Weekly Report (MMWR)
November 11, 2011 / Vol. 60 / No. 44


These changes use neutral language, and this edit improves the organization, accuracy, and completeness of the topic.
Quitting Smoking Among Adults — United States, 2001–2010


A very minor suggestion is remove the citation error, marked in red on Reference 197.
The above-cited survey report by the [[CDC]] tracks many interesting statistics germane to this article.
[[User:Hardingla|Hardingla]] ([[User talk:Hardingla|talk]]) 15:57, 16 December 2022 (UTC)


:Thank you so much Lori! I plan on checking the citations in order to fix any errors, and do some reorganization as well. [[User:Krumpp|Krumpp]] ([[User talk:Krumpp|talk]]) 17:39, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
==Dead Reference==
Citation 108, attributable to:'Ossip-Klein DJ, McIntosh S, Utman C, Burton K, Spada J, Guido J (2000). "Smokers ages 50+: who gets physician advice to quit?" (PDF). Prev Med. 31 (4): 364–9. doi:10.1006/pmed.2000.0721. PMID 11006061.[permanent dead link]' is no longer accessible through the following web-link: http://cvhpinstitute.org/hls396/pdf/Smokers%2050+.pdf.


==Wiki Education assignment: PHMD 2040 Service - Learning==
I am proposing a functioning link source for the cited research. It can be found here in .pdf format, https://themarijuanafacts.com/smokers-ages-50-who-gets-physician-advice-to-quit/
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This author (myself) has been renamed due to too many other authors with the same name, and the book has been rebranded - the inside is virtually unchanged


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change ... Jason Wright (2013). Knowing How To Quit Smoking. 1. p. 38. ISBN 978-1494238452.
to ... Jason Blackwolf (2013). Fag Off!. 1. p. 38. ISBN 978-1695873896 [[User:ICaveBear|ICaveBear]] ([[User talk:ICaveBear|talk]]) 09:39, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
:[[File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg|20px|link=|alt=]] '''Not done:''' please provide [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|reliable sources]] that support the change you want to be made. Would have needed some sort of proof for this, though I can't see how the original book was notable enough to be suggested in Further Reading in the first place so have removed it. <!-- Template:ESp --> [[User:Cannolis|Cannolis]] ([[User talk:Cannolis|talk]]) 15:20, 30 September 2019 (UTC)


Hi, is there a reason that the medications are in a bullet list template? I find it makes it hard to edit, especially for newer editors. Would anyone disagree if I were to remove them from template and add as normal text? I will leave this up for at least a few days to see who is out there helping with this article. Thanks!


[[User:JenOttawa|JenOttawa]] ([[User talk:JenOttawa|talk]]) 19:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)


== Why are smokeless and tobacco free alternatives not included? ==
== CP133 Group 2 Peer Reviews==


There are smokeless and tobacco free products available in some countries now that can help in smoking cessation. They're like oral inhalers with essential oils. Even some health websites list them in cessation articles. They've been around for long enough that researchers have already published a paper on their use. Why aren't they added to the article?
Kaycee's Response: I think that the contributions made by Group 3’s members do improve the Wikipedia article. They added information such as important side effect information and special population considerations/warnings which are well supported from the resources the cited. They also did well with adding better sources to other editor’s comments making their work more valid compared to other less valid sources that were cited previously. I do believe that they met there proposed overall goals and executed them well.


PS: I didn't add it myself because wanted to discuss it here to find out if there's good reason for their exclusion from the article. [[Special:Contributions/124.253.200.201|124.253.200.201]] ([[User talk:124.253.200.201|talk]]) 11:11, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
Are the points included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely available? If not, specify
- In regards to one of Chrliao's sources for an edit she made adding in pregnancy information, although it was a good source, it is actually a primary resource article: "Maternal Smoking Before and During Pregnancy and the Risk of Sudden Unexpected Infant Death". However after asking other people outside of pharmacy school if they could look up the source, it seems like it is still accessible by the public so I believe it is still a good source that can be used. It may be good to also find a secondary source to cite as well to help meet wikipedia's citing requirements. [[User:Ksangustinnordmeier|Ksangustinnordmeier]] ([[User talk:Ksangustinnordmeier|talk]]) 20:40, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 00:40, 29 July 2024

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Hello! I plan on making edits to this page within the next month in the sections of side effects, health benefits, and statistical trends. My main focus will be on updating some of the older referenced with more up to date and reliable sources. Krumpp (talk) 17:39, 5 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Poppy

These article edits are well done. The recent revision adds new and current content, and improves organization of the topic, smoking cessation. New information on weight gain and treatment, new evidence on depression and anxiety, updated health effects and the number of US smokers using appropriate references citing the CDC, the National Institute of Health and systematic reviews. The format style of the references is appropriate. This edit improves organization and clarification by breaking down the “symptoms” Section into “withdrawl symptoms”

These changes use neutral language, and this edit improves the organization, accuracy, and completeness of the topic.

A very minor suggestion is remove the citation error, marked in red on Reference 197. Hardingla (talk) 15:57, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much Lori! I plan on checking the citations in order to fix any errors, and do some reorganization as well. Krumpp (talk) 17:39, 16 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 September 2022 and 1 January 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ninaanastasio (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Ninaanastasio (talk) 17:33, 19 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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— Assignment last updated by JustinxLane (talk) 19:04, 2 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, is there a reason that the medications are in a bullet list template? I find it makes it hard to edit, especially for newer editors. Would anyone disagree if I were to remove them from template and add as normal text? I will leave this up for at least a few days to see who is out there helping with this article. Thanks!

JenOttawa (talk) 19:42, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Why are smokeless and tobacco free alternatives not included?

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There are smokeless and tobacco free products available in some countries now that can help in smoking cessation. They're like oral inhalers with essential oils. Even some health websites list them in cessation articles. They've been around for long enough that researchers have already published a paper on their use. Why aren't they added to the article?

PS: I didn't add it myself because wanted to discuss it here to find out if there's good reason for their exclusion from the article. 124.253.200.201 (talk) 11:11, 25 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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