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There should be something about where he is being detained..the article gives the bail amount not whether or not it has been paid..I`m assuming he`s been moved at least once to a cell somewhere unless he`s bailed out..anyone ? [[Special:Contributions/2600:1702:2340:9470:BD16:B8DD:4AA6:F27C|2600:1702:2340:9470:BD16:B8DD:4AA6:F27C]] ([[User talk:2600:1702:2340:9470:BD16:B8DD:4AA6:F27C|talk]]) 21:49, 22 June 2020 (UTC) |
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:Absent mention of release the reader will assume he still in the clink. I never understand the preoccupation with recording where exactly people are being held. I don't think he's allowed many visitors so it's not clear what readers will do with such information. [[User:EEng#s|<b style="color: red;">E</b>]][[User talk:EEng#s|<b style="color: blue;">Eng</b>]] 22:04, 22 June 2020 (UTC) |
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::It`s in every Wikipedia article I`ve ever read about someone who has been arrested...personally I thought he was out on bail..people are already going on about his treatment..I assume he`s still in jail ? [[Special:Contributions/2600:1702:2340:9470:E464:AE25:80FC:8AF7|2600:1702:2340:9470:E464:AE25:80FC:8AF7]] ([[User talk:2600:1702:2340:9470:E464:AE25:80FC:8AF7#top|talk]]) 21:56, 24 June 2020 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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:::Certainly the controversy about the conditions of his confinement ''does'' belong. [[User:EEng#s|<b style="color: red;">E</b>]][[User talk:EEng#s|<b style="color: blue;">Eng</b>]] 22:02, 24 June 2020 (UTC) |
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::::It doesn`t say anything about where he is..only that he`s been transferred to a state facility..doesn`t say which one..no one knows where he is..I surely don`t...it`s not like there is any real chance of him being lynched [[Special:Contributions/2600:1702:2340:9470:ACBA:5CDD:5E2:89D3|2600:1702:2340:9470:ACBA:5CDD:5E2:89D3]] ([[User talk:2600:1702:2340:9470:ACBA:5CDD:5E2:89D3|talk]]) 23:15, 30 June 2020 (UTC) |
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== Length of restraint incorrect == |
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Length of restraint incorrect
According to sources the time in restraint was 7:46 not 8:46. This should be corrected as soon as possible as the current article is no longer accurate.
https://nypost.com/2020/06/17/derek-chauvin-knelt-on-george-floyds-neck-for-746-prosecutors/ https://minnesota.cbslocal.com/2020/06/17/prosecutors-derek-chauvin-had-knee-on-george-floyd-for-746-not-846/
Stayfree76 (talk) 16:54, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
- Erledigt Thanks for the information and for providing a link (we don't use the New York Post as a source, but the AP/CBS reference is fine). -- MelanieN (talk) 22:11, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
- Hmmm. I don't think this is a routine correction. The press were reporting the duration as 8:46, without challenge for weeks. Last time I looked, most press reporting were still reporting the duration at 8:46.
- Over on Talk:Jack Letts you will see a very long discussion I had with an inexperienced contributor, who seems to have left the project. He was determined that the article should say Letts had been "charged", based on a single BBC article. We should cover what RS say, even if it doesn't seem credible to us, as per VERIFY.
- But when RS don't agree, I think that is what our coverage should say. Geo Swan (talk) 17:55, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
details around 911 call
based on the transcripts of the 911 call it the following quote from article seems to be inaccurate or at the very least misleading: "On May 25, 2020, Chauvin was one of four officers involved in arresting George Floyd on suspicion of using a counterfeit $20 bill at a market"
according to the transcripts provided by the City of Minneapolis, the callers complaint said the following (shortened for simplicity):
Caller: Um someone comes our store and give us fake bills and we realize it before he left the store...and he’s sitting on his car cause he is awfully drunk and he’s not in control of himself. Operator: On 38th ST. So, this guy gave a counterfeit bill, has your cigarettes, and he’s under the influence of something? Caller: Something like that, yes. He is not acting right.
that being said i believe the article should be changed to something along the lines of: "On May 25, 2020, Chauvin was one of four officers involved in arresting George Floyd on suspicion of using a counterfeit $20 bill at a market [as well as being "under the influence of something and not acting right" before getting in, and operating, a motor vehicle].
Stayfree76 (talk) 00:13, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- You are confusing an opinion with a cause of arrest. “Not acting right” is not a criminal offence. Nor did Floyd drive a vehicle after the cigarette sale. WWGB (talk) 00:40, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- i am not confusing anything. the sentence i quoted says "SUSPICION"... that suspicion was created by the 911 call... it is one the reason the cops showed up to begin with. there is no imposed guilt on the statement, it is historically accurate. that is all. Stayfree76 (talk) 16:35, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
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I would like to have the IPA pronounciation of Chauvin's surname - /ˈtʃoʊvɪn/ - added to this page. I believe that the pronounciation of his surname is somewhat ambiguous, and after watching many news reports where the hosts say his name, I have determined that /ˈtʃoʊvɪn/ is the correct pronounciation. Here is the transcription, formatted according to Wikipedia's guide: /ˈtʃoʊvɪn/
Thank you. 73.238.40.183 (talk) 18:27, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion, but we would need to have a source actually explaining how to say his name - not just our interpretation of how news anchors are saying it. -- MelanieN (talk) 18:38, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
Misleading/False Information
Referring to the 2nd sentence in the article, which says
During an arrest made by Chauvin and three other officers, he knelt on George Floyd's neck for almost eight minutes while Floyd was handcuffed and lying face down on a street.
(I might be mistaken here but) I recall that George was lying face-up looking at the sky when Derek's knee was on his neck. Can someone please fix it and respond to me. Thank you, BGzest (talk) 13:18, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- BGzest, the sources say Floyd was lying face down (and the photos support that, as well) —valereee (talk) 13:28, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- Wrong. Have a look at the infobox. WWGB (talk) 13:29, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- I had a look at the photos and I think I'm wrong, he looks more facing down then facing up. Just nullify my request. Sorry guys. BGzest (talk) 13:43, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- As I wrote above, for three weeks all sources, including the Prosecutors, said almost nine minutes, or 8:46. The last time i looked 8:46 got over three times as many google hits as 7:46. Yes, the prosecutors later asserted it was only 7:46. But the video is public, and they were not the only people to review it, frame by frame, in detail. The NYTimes has a video about the video, which shows they reviewed it frame by frame, and it says they independently determined the duration to be 8:46. So I think Stayfree76 was mistaken to call for the article to be corrected, and I think it is a mistake for the article to state, as an undisputed fact, that the duration was less than 8 minutes. Geo Swan (talk) 18:02, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
- this brings an interesting point to the matter, in my opinion. i guess what you are saying is, what source takes priority in the case where there is conflicting info. personally, i believe that any numbers or information sourced from the prosecution or any legal authority involved, for that matter, should override any statements/reports from media. that being said, im sure there is room to elaborate within the article regarding specifics of the case being updated over time. from what i can tell, many people write information or state things as fact before all the evidence is gathered, or from looking at the scenario from a limited view so striking it out completely seems more fitting in those circumstances. (for example: once you read the transcripts released of the body came audio it is pretty clear that the officers were struggling to deal with him throughout the entire incident. they had mentioned excited delirium at least once and if you look at the white paper about that topic you will see that [former] officer Chauvin followed the PD policy to the T yet he was being called a murderer before the case was even started. you cannot be a murderer before you are convicted of murder.) Stayfree76 (talk) 22:14, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
- Murders get found not guilty all the time..that does not mean they did not commit a murder 2600:1702:2340:9470:E824:60F6:5A7C:F5ED (talk) 03:20, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
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