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I would be most grateful if you could help me sort out your wikipedica requirements to update my freinends Wikipedia update. |
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You refused my earlier update due to reference requirements. This is the aspect I need help in sorting out. |
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The original update was as follows. |
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WEXAS Travel Foundation and World Expeditionary Association (WEXAS) |
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The WEXAS Travel Foundation was established by the the World Expeditionary Association (WEXAS) in 2007.The World Expeditionary Association is a travel association publishing travel literature and providing a variety of travel facilities for its members and the public. The association is supported by a number of distinguished explorers and travellers. |
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History |
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The association was established in London in 1970 by Ian Wilson on a non-profit basis with the aim of providing low cost student travel and making grants to help finance British school and university expeditions to Third World countries. The association was originally called WUNEXAS (World Universities Expeditionary Association), the name being shortened in 1972 to WEXAS to reflect the expansion of the association’s membership to all-comers. |
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In 1982 WEXAS was incorporated and became the first UK organization to provide travellers with individual annual travel insurance. |
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Philanthropy |
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WEXAS has donated a share of revenue to over 200 expeditions leaving the UK since 1970. In 1988 WEXAS donated its library of expedition reports to the Royal Geographical Society in London and for some years thereafter made an annual donation so that the grants committee of the RGS could make expedition grants on behalf of WEXAS. This annual grant ceased in 2007 when WEXAS established the WEXAS Travel Foundation, a registered charity (No. xxxxxxx), to raise funds and again make grants itself, this time for ecological causes and to promote education in parts of Africa. As an example, WEXAS has paid for the construction of two classrooms for children in a deprived area of Kwa-Zulu Natal and bought up an area of rainforest in Peru to block logging activity. |
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The WEXAS Travel Foundation is governed by a board of trustees and administered by a committee made up of WEXAS employees. Employees participate in fund-raising events and travel clients are invited to donate to the Foundation’s fund. |
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Tourismus |
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WEXAS is a provider of travel facilities, including corporate travel (WEXAS Travel Management), Scandinavian travel (Best Served Scandinavia), cruise travel (the Luxury Cruise Company) and experiential travel in general with an emphasis on the developing world, reflecting the association’s early roots in exploration. |
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WEXAS is the appointed travel partner of the Royal Society of Medicine and other distinguished professional bodies. |
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Structure |
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The association has around 100 employees, based in one London office apart from a small satellite office in Bournemouth. The association’s founder Dr Ian Wilson continues his involvement with WEXAS in his role as chairman of the board of directors. His elder son Mark Wilson is the deputy chairman. |
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Publisher |
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WEXAS has published travel literature since 1970. This includes a magazine introduced in 1970 as Expedition News. This became Expedition magazine in 1973 and was renamed Traveller magazine in 1984. It is now the longest continuously published travel magazine in the UK. |
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The association has been the publisher of a number of travel books, the most prominent of which has been The Traveller’s Handbook, which was published in 12 UK editions between 1982 and 2009, and three editions in the USA, where it was originally published as The International Traveler’s Handbook. |
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WEXAS travel titles include: |
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20:50:14, 25 June 2016 review of submission by Hela2015
Dear Daniel,
Essaidi is a famous Dutch artist and entrepreneur, well known for several pioneering projects in the contemporary art movement known as 'bio-art'. Apart from her artistic achievements (which had to be redacted due to them being perceived as PR in previous edits) she is also known for her solutions to societal challenges. For example her current project that makes bioplastic and textiles from manure is making big headlines in the Netherlands as we speak. (Surplus manure is a huge problem in the Netherlands and Germany). And recently she was a speaker at startup fest europe (http://opening.startupfesteurope.com/) among other speakers such as the CEO's of Apple, Uber, Alphabet/Google, AirBnB, Booking.com, etc.
Her unique approach where she utilises the creative industry combined with biotechnology makes her a notable figure, even the Dutch Government uses her projects as examples for excellent international cooperation, in the IA special about the BioBased Economy in the Netherlands.
The initial version of this article has been reduced over several months to only a single event. So I understand your current reaction towards the article because right now it clearly falls under the category of "People notable for only one event", yet Essaidi clearly isn't notable for only one event.
I hope my latest edit, which introduces mestic®, might finally get this article approved.
Kind regards, Hela
Tb
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15:11:22, 14 July 2016 review of submission by Nanda kyaw
- Nanda kyaw (talk · contribs)
I have updated U Aung Zan Wai article page with other many references. Please kindly review and approve.
Thank in advanced. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nanda kyaw (talk • contribs) 03:55, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Hi Daniel, My submission has declined regarding article about my great grand father. You may reference from historical Panglong Conference on wikipedia page. What do you mean one book only available in print is all the sources?
For your reference please read the wikipedia page below:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panglong_Agreement
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Panglong_Conference
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anti-Fascist_People%27s_Freedom_League
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Myanmar
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Myanmar
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pe_Khin https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bohmu_Aung https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aung_San
16:18:08, 15 July 2016 review of submission by 68.229.28.220
How Are You, I Wanted To See What Exact Information You Need To Approve The Page. Please Say In Detail So I Can Insure The Next Version Is Accepted. I Did Notice That You Said That There Is No News Or Magazines On The Actor. We Do Have The Links To His Local Printed Magazines That He Appeared On The Cover With. One Featuring His Name. And The Second Featuring His Face, Name And Quick Bio On The Front Screen (Article InSide) The Name Feature Link Is https://app.box.com/s/q1e23u4wtq238hlc8fjr & The 2nd Magazine That Has His Face,Name & Quick Bio Feature Is At https://app.box.com/s/1pgctclxa4x5b60onn4p12qwhr3i9lxn. Please Approve The Page With These Publications. Also If You Google His Full Name "Phillip Allen Hall III" You Will Come Up With 1,000's Of Reviews. . His Main Notoriety Is That He Is Jimi Hendrix Cousin. That Proof Can Be Seen & Referenced At Jimi Hendrix IMDB Page Inside Of Jimi's Trivia Section At (http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0001342/bio?ref_=nm_ql_dyk_2#trivia) It Will Be Located At The Bottom Of Jimi's Trvia Page (The Last One). Hopefully This Fixes The Situation You Are Having To Approve The Page. Thank You & I'll Be On The Lookout For Your Approval. Have A Good One. I'll Be talkt to you soon.
Article refused
regarding this: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Willie_McFarlane_professional_sprinter
1) Notoriety - how much do you know about Athletics in the 1930's
2) reliable references - I have copies of the articles which are not freely linked to the web however the copyright belongs to the archives where they are stored — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.44.185.207 (talk) 11:26, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
07:38:03, 18 July 2016 review of submission by Oneirovates
- Oneirovates (talk · contribs)
Hi there. Thank you in advance for your time. My article has been rejected as WP:NOTGUIDE.
I have read the above article and I cannot seem to find what part of my article gives the impression of a manual, guidebook, textbook, or scientific journal.
I am merely trying to describe what in-application questions are and how they work, since the resources on the subject are limited to non-existent.
I tried to follow the structure and logic of the Multiple Choice questions article which already "resides" in wikipedia.
I eagerly await for your reply Oneirovates (talk) 07:38, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
Dear Daniel,
thank you so much for taking time to review my first article - the one about FTTO. I was a bit disappointed to see its submission has been declined, because I took great care to select the references and links and to suport statements with facts. Before submitting the article I spent a few days analyzing other articles and familiarizing myself with Wikipedia Citing Codex.
Maybe I need more help to understand what can be done to improve the veritability of the article.
For example, should I provide a source to each single statement or sentence I make? And when ideas for a whole abstract come from one single book, article or publication? Is it NOT enough to provide links to other Wikipedia pages or maybe sources cited by other wikipedia pages? If there are some well known facts about e.g. fibre, should I also support them with references, etc.?
Please let me know. I would be very thankful and grateful to you for your help or any idea that would help me to go forward.
Best regards,
FTTO11801 (talk) 14:44, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
15:58:59, 18 July 2016 review of submission by McSarah
Can you help me resolve this apparent conflict? The notoriety of the subject is, in my opinion, indisputable following a well-publicized controversy. Hundreds of articles published in reputable news sources. I selected several sources to reference it, but I didn't want to overdo it so as to avoid cite kill. I can't seem to find the proper balance between not registering notoriety for lack of citations and cite kill for listing too many sources. Can you offer me any advice or feedback?
How do i get my medicen i need? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Matthewcourtney21136 (talk • contribs) 20:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
20:00:34, 20 July 2016 review of submission by Bruce2605
Thank you for the review of the article 'Bank of Utah'. This is my first article and need as much help as I can get!
I have referenced data from a source separate from Bank of Utah's web site. However, I retained the advertisement about offering the first credit in Utah. Is that still an acceptable reference?
Contests
User:Dr. Blofeld has created Wikipedia:WikiProject Africa/Contests. The idea is to run a series of contests/editathons focusing on each region of Africa. He has spoken to Wikimedia about it and $1000-1500 is possible for prize money. As someone who has previously expressed interest in African topics, would you be interested in contributing to one or assisting draw up core article/missing article lists? He says he's thinking of North Africa for an inaugural one in October. If interested please sign up in the participants section of the Contest page, thanks.♦ --Ser Amantio di NicolaoChe dicono a Signa?Lo dicono a Signa. 01:15, 21 July 2016 (UTC)
04:32:39, 23 July 2016 review of submission by Khamooshseeja
Hello Denial:
I am a Pakistani its not mean that you have to criticize that Pakistani could not translate or their translation is not meet international standards.I have read whole history of this notable personality and i have written that information which is not available on your platform and identify those resources and references which are very difficult to search....... I think its your bad decision to decline this article because Wikipedia is a great platform to share information to others if you will decline than how can we share information with others.Kindly review your decision.
Thanks Regards Imran
Dollarama edit
Replying to :
""Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Dollarama, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you!""
Reply :
Check their website before reverting it back. There's your link : http://www.dollarama.com/corporate-governance/officers/
45.45.15.62 (talk) 21:22, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
Anna Estelle Glancy
Hi Daniel,
Thanks for reviewing the article Anna Estelle Glancy and accepting it.
Unfortunately, looking through the editing history, I noticed that once you accepted it, someone called David Eppstein decided to delete all content in the article leaving only the first line.
Can you explain why he has done this? I am a little disappointed because I wouldn't have bothered contributing anything to Wikipedia if the whole article would be deleted.
Thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by OpticalHistorian (talk • contribs) 00:56, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
09:34:50, 25 July 2016 review of submission by 212.140.241.170
Hi, could you tell me what would be needed for this page to go live? It was refused on grounds of notability but Carl Hogg is the head coach of a Professional rugby team in the world's top league. Is more detail needed?
Hi Daniel, thanks for accepting my Nesby Phips entry. I just googled it tho and it doesn't turn up, is there anything else I need to do to get it online? Thanks, Holly — Preceding unsigned comment added by H1o2l3l4 (talk • contribs) 12:52, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
Article declined
Hi Daniel,
I am new to Wikipedia. Would you be able to help me target the citations or lack thereof, which influenced your decision to reject the article?
M.Sc. European Studies - University of Latvia
Talk soon! Aniketas44 (talk) 09:00, 28 July 2016 (UTC)
Hi
Hi Daniel,
Thanks for reviewing it, I just want to know why my article is not publicly visible when I am searching on Google.
Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Euro16 (talk • contribs) 11:53, 29 July 2016 (UTC)
copyvio and AfC
You don't have to accept an article first if you are meaning to list it for deletion as copyvio, as you rightly listed William N. Kelley, MD., which I have now deleted G12 applies to drafts also. It's less confusing just to nominate the draft. DGG ( talk ) 21:32, 30 July 2016 (UTC)
Sorry, but why didn't you just tag this for speedy deletion as vandalism or a hoax? "Joel Doss is the sexiest meme master to ever set foot on this planet"? Drmies (talk) 13:53, 31 July 2016 (UTC)
I have been trying to create a page CETPA and have retried doing it several times, but everytime I make a page it is deleted. It shows that my article is a either promoting or advertising my company. But it isn't. We try to stick to your rules and regulations and despite of doing everything to meet your criteria it is deleted. Could you give us a reason and help us create a page. prefix:User talk:Daniel kenneth/
Rajul1234 (talk) 08:40, 1 August 2016 (UTC)MridulRajul1234 (talk) 08:40, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
09:20:12, 2 August 2016 review of submission by 83.134.13.242
Dear
Which are the links I should replace by footnotes
Grts
Jan (editing for usr [email protected])
09:20:44, 2 August 2016 review of submission by 83.134.13.242
Dear
Which are the links I should replace by footnotes
Grts
Jan (editing for usr [email protected])
Request on 12:20:50, 2 August 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Clodagh O'Brien
Hi Daniel,
Thanks for reviewing my article. I have now made the relevant changes but am unsure how to resubmit. Is there another process to go through to resubmit or do I wait until the edits have been reviewed?
Thanks! Clodagh O'Brien (talk) 12:20, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
12:49:03, 2 August 2016 review of submission by Cavexplorer
- Cavexplorer (talk · contribs)
we based our page on https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christa_Laetitia_Deeleman-Reinhold and used the same reference methods
could you indicate which sources we should replace by footnotes
thanks
Charles Sherman (artist)
I have been making corrections and improvements to article and gaining editing skill during the process (I hope!). One thing that comes to mind is that Charles Sherman (sculptor) would be a more appropriate Wikipedia: Disambiguation term than (artist) as his current work appears to be wholly sculptural. Will you please assess? UserMusaVeneziana talk 20:49, 3 August 2016 (UTC) I have made the change but this edit may have not been done properly and need assistance.UserMusaVeneziana talk 05:07, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
08:53:44, 8 August 2016 review of submission by 212.140.241.170
Hi, My article has valid references and is a well known head coach in england's highest level of professional rugby. I'm not sure why it has been declined.
Orphan to Full Page
Hi Daniel,
I have added links to Philippa Christian's Wikipedia page and want get her page out of Orphan status.
Can this be reviewed again?
Regards
Darren — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iamshoo (talk • contribs) 00:20, 18 August 2016 (UTC)
Request on 20:29:09, 24 August 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Birdhill050571
The rejection of our article on RacingLine Ltd is a big disappointment. Would you please consider a few points and then advise what way forward we might follow.
- We used as a model the Wikipedia article on a comparable company, PalmerSport. Compared with the proposed article on RacingLine, the PalmerSport article seems to have very weak support from References and External Sources, and because of this we feel we are not being judged by the same criteria as those which allowed the other article to be accepted.
- The reference [1] says “ In 2011, Championship Organisers RacingLine added the ‘EuroCup’ into the calendar, bringing the best of all European Formula Ford racers together for four rounds." This reference, from the website of the supreme body of international motor sport, confirms that RacingLine plays, and has played, a major role in the running and development of Formula Ford and now Formula 4 in the UK.
- The respected motoring magazine Evo says in a review at [2] “With a decade of running VW’s UK operation behind them, Racingline has employed all its hard-won knowledge and experience and produced a tuned road-going Mark V Golf that has the potential to wind up a few Porsche owners on a trackday.”
The above two references, both of which were added to the article for the re-submission, seem to us to supply evidence of notability. We have searched extensively but do not hold out much hope of finding any more substantial published evidence. Are we therefore to take it that your decision is the final blow to our hopes of having our contribution to Wikipedia accepted? If not, what more can we do?
Birdhill050571 (talk) 20:29, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
Hey Daniel. I was just on my rounds of cleaning up copyright violations and looked at the above draft. I can't seem to locate the copyvios from the page you flagged it as copying from. I might have just missed it, especially if it's [too] close paraphrasing rather than pure lifting. Can you point me to some of the offending text? (Note: it is not at all uncommon for a user to have control of the page they copied from and remove the text from there, so that could be what happened here and that's why I couldn't find it). By the way, the fact you looked and found this copyvio is great, but please note the instructions for copyvios at at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Reviewing instructions#Step 1: Quick-fail criteria. In short, there are some additional steps after declining so that the copyvio isn't left on view and available from in the page history. Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 23:14, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Fuhghettaboutit FYI, you will not get a reply here. Cheers, Muffled Pocketed 05:03, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi: Ah, looking a bit in the history, I think I see what you mean. Not a good sign. Communication here is important. Speaking of that Fortuna, it may be that for others that 5 degree rotation thing you've got going on your talk page works okay, but just so you know, for me it cuts off much of the page. Despite getting a horizontal scroll bar at the bottom, I can only see the very edge of the threads; it makes your talk page unreadable for me.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 02:29, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Fuhghettaboutit: Any suggestions? As you can see, I raised the matter here in June. Muffled Pocketed 15:43, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi: So long as the person (we're speaking about you Daniel) edits okay and the lack of communication doesn't cause big problems there's nothing to do I know of. But it's unfortunate. It does have repercussions. I mean I wasted my time asking this person a question if they're not going to answer, right? And my question deserves an answer I think. Daniel, you flagged a page as a copyvio. I spent time checking it. I couldn't find it. More wasted time. And the posts from others above deserve answers too. Oh well.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 16:59, 3 September 2016 (UTC)16:58, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Fuhghettaboutit: Any suggestions? As you can see, I raised the matter here in June. Muffled Pocketed 15:43, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Fortuna Imperatrix Mundi: Ah, looking a bit in the history, I think I see what you mean. Not a good sign. Communication here is important. Speaking of that Fortuna, it may be that for others that 5 degree rotation thing you've got going on your talk page works okay, but just so you know, for me it cuts off much of the page. Despite getting a horizontal scroll bar at the bottom, I can only see the very edge of the threads; it makes your talk page unreadable for me.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 02:29, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
11:58:15, 26 August 2016 review of submission by Testagaia
Hello
Our article includes references with external links, is it not sufficient to show the notability?
Thanks for your help,
Testagaia
Hello Daniel,
I would be most grateful if you could help me sort out your wikipedica requirements to update my freinends Wikipedia update.
You refused my earlier update due to reference requirements. This is the aspect I need help in sorting out.
The original update was as follows. WEXAS Travel Foundation and World Expeditionary Association (WEXAS) The WEXAS Travel Foundation was established by the the World Expeditionary Association (WEXAS) in 2007.The World Expeditionary Association is a travel association publishing travel literature and providing a variety of travel facilities for its members and the public. The association is supported by a number of distinguished explorers and travellers. History The association was established in London in 1970 by Ian Wilson on a non-profit basis with the aim of providing low cost student travel and making grants to help finance British school and university expeditions to Third World countries. The association was originally called WUNEXAS (World Universities Expeditionary Association), the name being shortened in 1972 to WEXAS to reflect the expansion of the association’s membership to all-comers. In 1982 WEXAS was incorporated and became the first UK organization to provide travellers with individual annual travel insurance. Philanthropy WEXAS has donated a share of revenue to over 200 expeditions leaving the UK since 1970. In 1988 WEXAS donated its library of expedition reports to the Royal Geographical Society in London and for some years thereafter made an annual donation so that the grants committee of the RGS could make expedition grants on behalf of WEXAS. This annual grant ceased in 2007 when WEXAS established the WEXAS Travel Foundation, a registered charity (No. xxxxxxx), to raise funds and again make grants itself, this time for ecological causes and to promote education in parts of Africa. As an example, WEXAS has paid for the construction of two classrooms for children in a deprived area of Kwa-Zulu Natal and bought up an area of rainforest in Peru to block logging activity. The WEXAS Travel Foundation is governed by a board of trustees and administered by a committee made up of WEXAS employees. Employees participate in fund-raising events and travel clients are invited to donate to the Foundation’s fund. Travel WEXAS is a provider of travel facilities, including corporate travel (WEXAS Travel Management), Scandinavian travel (Best Served Scandinavia), cruise travel (the Luxury Cruise Company) and experiential travel in general with an emphasis on the developing world, reflecting the association’s early roots in exploration. WEXAS is the appointed travel partner of the Royal Society of Medicine and other distinguished professional bodies. Structure The association has around 100 employees, based in one London office apart from a small satellite office in Bournemouth. The association’s founder Dr Ian Wilson continues his involvement with WEXAS in his role as chairman of the board of directors. His elder son Mark Wilson is the deputy chairman. Publisher WEXAS has published travel literature since 1970. This includes a magazine introduced in 1970 as Expedition News. This became Expedition magazine in 1973 and was renamed Traveller magazine in 1984. It is now the longest continuously published travel magazine in the UK. The association has been the publisher of a number of travel books, the most prominent of which has been The Traveller’s Handbook, which was published in 12 UK editions between 1982 and 2009, and three editions in the USA, where it was originally published as The International Traveler’s Handbook. WEXAS travel titles include: