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Proposed merge of Super Bowl massacre into this article
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
- To not merge what is now 12 February 2024 Rafah strikes into Rafah offensive; WP:TOOBIG for the merge and the events of 12 February 2024 are independently notable.Klbrain (talk) 10:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
Article covers the same topic as this article, although in different detail. ForsythiaJo (talk) 01:56, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
- I'd support merging that into this article. Historyday01 (talk) 18:38, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
- Also support merging ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 00:43, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
- Strong oppose - Very notable incident with lots of deaths and deserves its own article. The Rafah offensive is an ongoing battle that is still not over and it will get expanded over time Abo Yemen✉ 12:30, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
- Strong Oppose - Notable in its own right. The incident was planned in concurrence with the Super Bowl to fly under the radar in the news cycle. It cannot be so quickly dismissed. ☞ Rim < Talk | Edits > 22:13, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
- Oppose — For an additional reason: From a technical standpoint, this article would become too big. Yue🌙 04:54, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Requested move 13 February 2024
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The result of the move request was: not moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) Jerium (talk) 23:03, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
Rafah offensive → Proposed Rafah offensive – The offensive on Rafah has not occurred yet- the article title speaks as if it has. Alternatively could be Planned Rafah offensive, idk, but I think Proposed works for now. - presidentofyes, the super aussa man 19:37, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
- Oppose as proposed: The suggested title sounds like it is describing a proposal. Who is proposing it? Who is it being proposed to? I'm also not sure the article title should depend on whether such an offensive has begun or not. I think there are other articles on Wikipedia about various planned, feared, expected, anticipated and hypothesized events that have not yet occurred that don't say that explicitly in their titles. Also, considering the incursion of 11 February and the airstrikes of 3–12 February, it does not seem clear that such an offensive has not yet begun. — BarrelProof (talk) 22:41, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
- Strong Oppose Saying it is "proposed" is incorrect and promotes misinformation. This request should be withdrawn.Historyday01 (talk) 18:37, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
- Strong Oppose Rafah offensive is CONCISE and clear topic name. There have been bombings in Rafah already. Article body itself can address the finer nuances of whether a major offensive happened or didn't etc.. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 00:43, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
- Speedy close The offensive is planned, not proposed. HadesTTW (he/him • talk) 17:16, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
- Speedy close per Hades. CarmenEsparzaAmoux (talk) 16:27, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
Timeline
What's with this long timeline for an offensive that hasn't taken place? Some of the subsections are just one sentence long. They should be merged into a more cohesive prose, removing unnecessary or repeated details. Super Ψ Dro 11:04, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
Why is this not marked as ongoing?
Israel has conducted operations in Rafah for over a month now, why is this not marked as an ongoing event? Bill3602 (talk) 19:29, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- Military operations != military offensive; the latter is an escalation of the former. Yue🌙 04:57, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
"Deadline for the offensive"
Under February 19, it says:
Israel sets a deadline for the offensive, saying it will begin if the hostages aren't freed by Ramadan.
However, the actual date of the offensive is not pegged to the beginning of Ramadan; it merely says an invasion will take place at some point if their demands are not met by Ramadan. 675930s (talk) 11:01, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
Evacuation plans?
Would it be relevant to put Israeli announcements of evacuation plans on the timeline? I've two sources right now: https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2024-03-15/israel-prepares-rafah-evacuation-after-netanyahu-approves-plan https://www.aljazeera.com/news/liveblog/2024/3/13/israels-war-on-gaza-live-netanyahu-vows-to-finish-the-job-in-rafah 675930s (talk) 08:02, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
bearbeiten
The statement "Netanyahu stated [...] "Whoever tells us not to operate in Rafah, is telling us to lose the war" is repeated both in 17 and 18 February.31.221.171.151 (talk) 16:07, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- Ah, no, sorry, the second is "an ear".31.221.171.151 (talk) 16:10, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
RAFAH - published plan
Exposing N12: step by step - this is what the Israeli plan for the Rafah operation looks like — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A0D:6FC0:B6D:E300:B873:AFBF:5311:4BA4 (talk) 07:44, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
Addition casualty
The child that was saved from its mother's womb has died.
21 April "One woman who died in the strike was pregnant, but doctors were able to save the baby through C-section"
Source: https://www.bbc.com/news/world-middle-east-68903591 Patrikooke (talk) 08:30, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Regarding the Israeli strike in Rafah, on the 3rd of May
Could we get a source regarding this that isn't derived from a news source that has bias? Both of the references for this particular incident are from far-left sources or news media sources based in Arab countries. Saegenschnitter (talk) 06:53, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
1RR violation
@Galamore: The last two edits you made are in violation of 1RR [1], waiting for your self-revert. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:30, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Israeli forces have begun the offensive
Please change the status and the article as a whole Koploboblo (talk) 20:10, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Requested move 6 May 2024
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change title to Israeli invasion of Rafah 98.110.81.233 (talk) 22:52, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Not done: page move requests should be made at Wikipedia:Requested moves. Liu1126 (talk) 01:17, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
civilian casualties in third box
it puts civilian casualties on Hamas’ side, wouldn’t it be more appropriate to put civilian casualties in the box under both side’s military casualties? 142.197.246.54 (talk) 00:25, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Background is too long
What's the purpose of including such a detailed timeline of so many actions in Rafah? It should only include the causes of the offensive, and actions that made major headlines for a while. Linkin Prankster (talk) 08:59, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- That lot should mostly (not all) go to Timeline of the Rafah offensive or some such. I might do it later if no-one else does. Selfstudier (talk) 12:21, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- I just copied it over to a new timeline article, needs tidying up and some material may need to be returned to fill out the background section. Selfstudier (talk) 15:14, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Israeli 401st brigade
The israeli 401st brigade entered the rafah crossing according to Al Jazeera
therefeore we should add it to the Units Salafips1 (talk) 12:20, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Erledigt Durranistan (talk) 13:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- It should be the "104th" Brigade, not 104st SirDoor (talk) 13:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Oops, the article mentions the 401st Brigade, not the 104th, my bad SirDoor (talk) 13:53, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- my bad bro i meant to write 401st brigade Salafips1 (talk) 14:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- dude can you change the 104st to 401st brigade Salafips1 (talk) 14:55, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- It should be the "104th" Brigade, not 104st SirDoor (talk) 13:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Titel
Shouldn't this be 2024 Israeli attack on Rafah or something like that? Selfstudier (talk) 15:29, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Problem with characterization of offensive
We have here an article with an unqualified section titled "offensive". Yet reliable sources don't agree that there is an offensive. In fact The New York Times categorically stated 10 hours prior to the time I'm writing this that there is not what most readers might imagine when reading the Wikipedia article: a major ground offensive It did not appear to be the long-promised full ground invasion of Rafah, which Israel's allies have been working to avert...
[2]. ☆ Bri (talk) 16:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yea, that's why I mentioned the title above, I think I might just move it if no-one objects. Selfstudier (talk) 16:50, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Personisinsterest: What do you think? Selfstudier (talk) 16:56, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, I suppose it’s not the full offensive, but media refers to this as the ‘Rafah offensive’, before and after it started(?). This is the first time Israel went into Rafah to hold ground, not just for a raid. To me, this signals the start of the offensive. Personisinsterest (talk) 17:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- What about 2024 Israeli operations in Rafah? Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe invasion, or just operation singular. We could open up a move request and see Personisinsterest (talk) 17:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- We have Haaretz Exclusive | Israel Commits to Limit Rafah Operation, Grant Control of Crossing With Egypt to Private U.S. Firm, usually reliable, saying that it is a limited op and control of crossing to be handed over to some private company.
- If we can agree on a title, I think people will maybe not object to the move, avoid the bureaucracy if possible. If people should disagree then they can revert and open RM. Selfstudier (talk) 17:42, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Maybe invasion, or just operation singular. We could open up a move request and see Personisinsterest (talk) 17:34, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- What about 2024 Israeli operations in Rafah? Selfstudier (talk) 17:08, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- There seems to be consensus that the title should be 2024 Israeli operation/s in Rafah or something along the lines of that for now. Personisinsterest (talk) 12:33, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
I would sign on for the title 2024 Israeli (or IDF) operations in Rafah, and would not object to replacing "operation/s" with "incursion". Invasion I think is a bridge too far for a technical reason: according to the UN, Israel already occupies Gaza, so either invading is redundant, or we need to have another discussion about what occupation entails, and I don't think that would be fruitful. New title would come with a corresponding change in nomenclature in the article section header(s) of course. ☆ Bri (talk) 20:50, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- I feel maybe operations would be better, considering the seizure, fighting on the outskirts, airstrikes, and evacuations. Incursion sounds temporary and hasn't been used much by media. I feel it's between offensive and operations, and operations might be winning out for now because of the noted small-ish scale of this though. Personisinsterest (talk) 00:35, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
The White House has confirmed that Israel told it that it's a limited operation [3]. So we should use the word operation, not offensive. Linkin Prankster (talk) 05:18, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- The lead para looks odd and "The Rafah offensive is an ongoing offensive in the city of Rafah" is kinda pointless, it is a descriptive title which doesn't need bolding, this kind of unnecessary duplication should be avoided.
- I don't mind leaving it at offensive for the time being on the grounds that Israel keeps threatening to carry one out but so far we are just seeing smaller operations/attacks. Selfstudier (talk) 09:27, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think the people in Rafah might demur on the topic of whether what's going on is "smaller". Iskandar323 (talk) 20:03, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Just pointing out that source #34 (ToI, 8 May) states
No soldiers have been wounded in the operation so far.
Which is consistent with an unopposed operation, not an "offensive" if that term is to mean anything. I don't think we even are seeing a battle, referring to Military operation to find an example of the scale of things that are included in "operation". (Reuters says there may be some action near "the airport" which must be this ruin which is amid farmland outside the area of settlement.) ☆ Bri (talk) 17:22, 8 May 2024 (UTC)- I'm not sure that because the military operation solely consists almost entirely of murdering civilian families in tents and that no soldiers have died means that it can't be considered a serious operation. Admittedly most military operations don't consist largely of this, but Israel isn't any old state, it's an ethnonationalist perpetrator of state terror, so it's all par for the course here. Iskandar323 (talk) 20:06, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- The operation is not one of murdering civilians in Israeli-purchased tents [4]. They are telling civilians to evacuate [5][6] the tents. Wafflefrites (talk) 21:02, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- Israel has struck Rafah every day since this began. Reliable sources are measuring seriousness by amount of ground taken. Personisinsterest (talk) 00:58, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that because the military operation solely consists almost entirely of murdering civilian families in tents and that no soldiers have died means that it can't be considered a serious operation. Admittedly most military operations don't consist largely of this, but Israel isn't any old state, it's an ethnonationalist perpetrator of state terror, so it's all par for the course here. Iskandar323 (talk) 20:06, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Seriously guys, @Iskandar323:, @Wafflefrites:, can we please avoid arguing over what Israel is doing wrong or right. That isn't related to the topic we have at hand - whether this should be called an operation or offensive. Please focus on the topic and whether the scale of the Rafah attack qualifies it is an operation or offensive, do not argue about who's right or wrong here please. Linkin Prankster (talk) 07:49, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's not about scale; it's about effect. They've invaded eastern Rafah, up to and including the crossing (and cut off aid). It doesn't matter whether or not this is a completed offensive for the military planners at this stage or not. An offensive can start and even be aborted. Here, an offensive was announced and an offensive is underway. Iskandar323 (talk) 14:21, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's clear from your earlier comment, that your reasoning is based solely on opposition to Israel's assault. Please don't push your POV here. Linkin Prankster (talk) 15:28, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- And yet it is irrelevant when the language is both used in RS and descriptively accurate. If people want to rename the page, they may start an RM, but there is no informal consensus to do so, and I see no policy grounds for it. Iskandar323 (talk) 10:43, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Reliable sources measure everything that happens in Gaza as high in humanitarian effect (because it is), but also they have to measure this in ground taken. Sure, there's fighting on the outskirts, but they haven't entered the heart of the city where mostly everyone is. That's the red line for America, that's the big thing the media is waiting for. That's where the significance is.
- It could also be argued that warnings over a full offensive sound worse than about this. Sources have warned that thousands could die in a full offensive, which makes the 60 people killed here more insignificant. Personisinsterest (talk) 15:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- "Relatively" insignificant would be better, no? Selfstudier (talk) 17:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, I was trying to get at that with 'more insignificant' but that's a better way to put it. Personisinsterest (talk) 00:48, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- "Relatively" insignificant would be better, no? Selfstudier (talk) 17:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- It's clear from your earlier comment, that your reasoning is based solely on opposition to Israel's assault. Please don't push your POV here. Linkin Prankster (talk) 15:28, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Sources are still using “Rafah offensive”, “Rafah incursion”, and “Rafah operation.” I can see any of these being used, but right now we don’t know what the scale or number of casualties will be. The IDF may be planning a “precise” “limited” operation based on intelligence, but that is what they planned for in their 2024 2:30 am Al Shifa operation when their soldiers were “briefed in advance regarding the importance of preventing harm to civilians, patients, medical teams, and medical equipment” [7] and Al Shifa is now non functional with hundreds of casualties after two weeks of fighting inside and around the hospital.
- Israel is planning an operation for at least 6 weeks [8] which includes evacuating civilians in this urban warfare environment, so right now may be too early to determine the operational scale. Wafflefrites (talk) 19:59, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Well, it seems that an offensive is proceeding despite calls to stop. South Africa has asked the ICJ to order Israel to stop. Selfstudier (talk) 09:40, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
Strength of invading force and number of brigades
The infobox wrongly suggests that "5 other brigades" are participating and the total strength of the IDF invading force is 3,000-5,000.
The source used (Al Jazeera) [9] says that IDF is "redeploying a force of about six brigades (3,000-5,000 soldiers) to a base near Rafah."
The article clearly says these are brigades deployed to a IDF base near Rafah (likely a border base). This doesn't mean they're participating in the assault, but defending Israeli border. And it doesn't include the 401st Brigade, nor it is mentioned as one of them.
Since the language is a bit clear, users seems to have also misunderstood this as implying a total strength of 3,000-5,000. However 3,000-5,000 is the strength of each brigade deployed to the IDF base near Rafah. Another article by Al Jazeera [10] clearly says so. And if you look at the typical IDF brigade size, it is between 3,000-7,000 soldiers [11].
Clearly users have misunderstood what Al Jazeera is saying. Linkin Prankster (talk) 08:49, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- "Since the language is a bit unclear..." is what I meant. Sorry. Linkin Prankster (talk) 03:34, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah I guess I read that wrong. Thanks for bringing that up. Personisinsterest (talk) 00:32, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Content
Not sure why the article is filled with quotes and news snippets instead of a coherent overarching narrative. Makeandtoss (talk) 11:35, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- The current event tag just came off, although it is imo still very much a current event, needs a bit of time to settle down. Selfstudier (talk) 11:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
Translation of sources
Hi, please, the first source of Argentina has a bad translation of the word "aberrante — abhorrent" 190.246.97.81 (talk) 10:10, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
11 more israeli soldiers wounded by hornets
Please edit the casualties Koploboblo (talk) 13:53, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
A continuously updated information page
Hello.
Here is a very informative page with continuous updates, which may be useful for your work here.
https://reliefweb.int/updates?view=reports&advanced-search=%28PC180%29
David A (talk) 05:26, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you, but most of it is about the aid into Gaza. Linkin Prankster (talk) 12:01, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
Map in lede/infobox
Shouldn't there be a map of the offensive in the lede? I thought that was standard practice for ongoing battles/conflicts, especially if a map is available. Zinderboff(talk) 23:54, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Actual us option
https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2024-05-21/us-encouraged-by-israeli-changes-to-plans-for-rafah-operation?srnd=homepage-middle-east 2.55.20.41 (talk) 05:45, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
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