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Condensed the medical uses based on systematic reviews. [[User:AngelaZakinova|AngelaZakinova]] ([[User talk:AngelaZakinova|talk]]) 01:55, 6 November 2016 (UTC)AngelaZakinova |
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1. STUDENT 1 (Christine Boulos) – Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify… In general, this draft submission reflects a neutral point of view. Under medical uses, the author does state that artesunate appears to be more effective for treatment of severe malaria. This claim seems is supported by a reference for efficacy of drugs based on disease severity. However, it seems as though this may be a recommendation for treatment. I think it would be more neutral to state that Artemether is used to treat severe malaria, but remove the comparison to artesunate for treatment, since this may also vary based on unique patient cases. The other sections of this page did not seem to have any biases. |
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2. STUDENT 2 – Are the points included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely accessible? If not, specify… |
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3. STUDENT 3 – Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia’s manual of style for medicine-related articles? If not, specify… |
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4. STUDENT 4 – Is there any evidence of plagiarism or copyright violation? If yes, specify… |
Revision as of 21:12, 14 November 2016
Ideal sources for Wikipedia's health content are defined in the guideline Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine) and are typically review articles. Here are links to possibly useful sources of information about Artemether.
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AngelaZakinova, Smilesalways, Eacademia (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Radtk109, PharmerQ, CJ Bolus Dose, Pbayrasy.
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I just linked a missing link 'co-artemether'(in artesunate) to this article, which, as noted is very rudimentary but explains how the 2 components belong together. It seems to me that artemether is less important than co-artemether, and would have liked to rework arthemeter to reroute to co-artemether and put the current artemether content there. My technical skills are not up to this, however - can anyone help, please? 160.62.4.10 (talk) 11:45, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
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Planning to edit this page as a part of WikiProject Pharmacology. Editing or adding the following sections: Medical Uses, Chemical Nature and Adverse Effects, MOA and Interactions, PK/PD for improved clarity and correct citations. Eacademia (talk) 20:04, 4 November 2016 (UTC)
edited medical uses
Condensed the medical uses based on systematic reviews. AngelaZakinova (talk) 01:55, 6 November 2016 (UTC)AngelaZakinova
Review
1. STUDENT 1 (Christine Boulos) – Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify… In general, this draft submission reflects a neutral point of view. Under medical uses, the author does state that artesunate appears to be more effective for treatment of severe malaria. This claim seems is supported by a reference for efficacy of drugs based on disease severity. However, it seems as though this may be a recommendation for treatment. I think it would be more neutral to state that Artemether is used to treat severe malaria, but remove the comparison to artesunate for treatment, since this may also vary based on unique patient cases. The other sections of this page did not seem to have any biases. 2. STUDENT 2 – Are the points included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely accessible? If not, specify… 3. STUDENT 3 – Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia’s manual of style for medicine-related articles? If not, specify… 4. STUDENT 4 – Is there any evidence of plagiarism or copyright violation? If yes, specify…