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The introduction leads with two sentences stating the Shrine is closed to standard visitors and requests the reader visit a website for more information. This seems like a strange way to introduce the reader to the topic. Additionally, it seems inappropriate for the page to direct the reader to take an action. Can someone shed more light on this? |
The introduction leads with two sentences stating the Shrine is closed to standard visitors and requests the reader visit a website for more information. This seems like a strange way to introduce the reader to the topic. Additionally, it seems inappropriate for the page to direct the reader to take an action. Can someone shed more light on this? |
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Wow! This sounds a lot like it was copied directly from a marketing brochure. This article does not contain even one shred of notable information. DELETE PLOX. ANarc (talk) 02:43, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
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Call to action in intro
The introduction leads with two sentences stating the Shrine is closed to standard visitors and requests the reader visit a website for more information. This seems like a strange way to introduce the reader to the topic. Additionally, it seems inappropriate for the page to direct the reader to take an action. Can someone shed more light on this?