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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Grapple X (talk | contribs) at 00:51, 15 January 2022 (OneClickArchiver archived Your GA nomination of Second circle of hell to User talk:Grapple X/Archive 6). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.


Here, you

DYK for Third circle of hell

On 30 December 2021, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article Third circle of hell, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Dante used the third circle of hell (illustrated) to discuss contemporary Florentine politics rather than the sin of gluttony? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Third circle of hell. You are welcome to check how many pageviews the nominated article or articles got while on the front page (here's how, Third circle of hell), and if they received a combined total of at least 416.7 views per hour (i.e., 5,000 views in 12 hours or 10,000 in 24), the hook may be added to the statistics page. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.

Schwede66 00:02, 30 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hook update
Your hook reached 14,282 views (595.1 per hour), making it one of the most viewed hooks of December 2021 – nice work!

theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/she) 01:17, 31 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

could you help me out?

I'm looking to nominate SLAPP Suits for FA status; I think I'm almost ready to wrap up the peer review, but could you take a quick look-through and give some thoughts? It'd really be appreciated—thanks so much :D happy new year! theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/she) 02:24, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

And a happy new year to you too. Looking at the article it seems in good shape to me. The lead should be tweaked some, however--for an ~1800 word article with several distinct headings it should ideally be broken up into paragraphs; these don't necessarily need to mirror the exact structure of the article but that's a good way to begin; even if you don't add any more content to it, breaking up the single large paragraph would be a good idea. There's a MOS:SANDWICH issue in the "Episode" heading which could be resolved by moving either Oliver's portrait or the external video box--the latter might fit in the "Musical number" heading. It's mostly a point of preference but in terms of critical reviews I tend to prefer giving the critic's name as well as the outlet but that's just something to think about. I'm not known for FA-level prose so I can't really comment on it but it's always a good idea to get another pass over it by a copyeditor just to iron out any issues you might overlook in prose, at a minimum it's another pair of eyes before the nomination. Good luck. ᵹʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ 15:14, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
gotcha, gotcha, fair enough—thanks so much! theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (they/she) 06:56, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Your GA nomination of First circle of hell

The article First circle of hell you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:First circle of hell for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of GhostRiver -- GhostRiver (talk) 16:41, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The article David Arquette in World Championship Wrestling you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:David Arquette in World Championship Wrestling for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of GhostRiver -- GhostRiver (talk) 17:01, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Second circle of hell

The article Second circle of hell you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold . The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Second circle of hell for issues which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of FormalDude -- FormalDude (talk) 23:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your GA nomination of Second circle of hell

The article Second circle of hell you nominated as a good article has passed ; see Talk:Second circle of hell for comments about the article. Well done! If the article has not already appeared on the main page as a "Did you know" item, or as a bold link under "In the News" or in the "On This Day" prose section, you can nominate it within the next seven days to appear in DYK. Bolded names with dates listed at the bottom of the "On This Day" column do not affect DYK eligibility. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of FormalDude -- FormalDude (talk) 17:01, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]