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Contributions to Wikipedia

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Baseball

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  • Game 1:
    • "Wertz opened the 10th inning..."
  • Game 7:
    • "The RBIs by Hodges..."
    • "While being shut out..."
    • lead sentences on the next two paragraphs ("The Yankees would have..."; "The Yankees would threaten...")
  • Game summary:
    • "Yankees fielders recorded..."
    • "In addition to these balls..."
  • "Key plays" of Game 7 (was subsequently deleted)
  • Game 6:
    • "The Cardinals’ 1–0 lead..."
  • Game 6:
    • "In the sixth inning..."
  • Game 7:
    • "Gedman’s home run..."

College Football

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  • "Game summary":
    • "Notre Dame started..."
    • "After a Michigan State punt...": added details ("including an...")
  • "Pre-game information":
    • "This was presumably caused..."
    • "The weather was expected..."
  • "Game summary":
    • one-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
    • "All the scoring..."
    • "The Cougars added..."
    • "In the third quarter..."
    • "Playing with the wind..."
  • "Game summary":
    • "In the second quarter..."
    • "After a 65-yard punt..."
    • "After the ensuing kick-off..."
    • "Opening the second half..."
    • "Penn State cashed in..."

Pro Football

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  • additions to the game summary: context on turnovers and replacements
  • two-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one
  • "Legacy" to re-arrange content under new subheadings
  • two-paragraph game summary ahead of the lengthier one (all but the first sentence)

Hockey

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  • Game 7:
    • "The Rangers opened..."
    • "The Rangers' next goal..."
    • "Vancouver’s best scoring chances..."
    • "[...] with a short-handed goal..."
    • "With six-and-a-half minutes..."
    • "Following close-range chances..."
    • "[...] during which..."
    • "In the final 37 seconds..."