Talk:Makwerekwere/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: FuzzyMagma (talk · contribs) 12:22, 30 December 2023 (UTC)

Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 23:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	some questions about sources below
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.	one sentence with very close paraphrasing
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	File:Julius Malema 2011-09-14.jpg is released under cc-sa licence
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.

Comments on prose

• "Matsinhe argued..." – Please define/introduce Matsinhe. I suggest "Sociologist David Matsinge argued..."

=Reference spotchecks

• " Zambia (where many South African exiles lived before 1994)" is not supported by ref 2
• Phrasing of "(in a non-derogatory sense) to refer to all Shonas from Zimbabwe (then known as Rhodesia)" is directly from Ref 2. Suggest paraphrasing
• Y Refs 10 and 11 verify statement
• "The term has become so pervasive that it has been included in dictionaries as “an offensive and derogatory slur used in South Africa to describe foreigners from other African countries.”[19]" – This is only supported by reference one dictionary (which has now closed)
• Are refs 28 and 29 (Khanya/Somali Christians) reliable? They look like self-published sources
• " In 2004, Boom Shaka released the kwaito classic "Makwerekwere"[37] which discouraged xenophobia.[38]" – Not supported by references

I'm playing the review on hold while the comments I've made above are considered. Adabow (talk) 00:46, 13 July 2024 (UTC)