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Twenty years ago, the deadly daughter of Kodos the Executioner tried to kill Kirk, but she has since been declared sane and rehabilitated. Kirk wants to give her the benefit of the doubt and a second chance at life, but when a mysterious assassination threatens the already fragile peace process, all clues point toward Lenore–and the future of two worlds hangs in the balance.

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Star Trek: The Original Series: Foul Deeds Will Rise

One

Captain’s log. Stardate 8514.6

The Enterprise has embarked on a peacekeeping mission to the Savinia system, where two warring planets, Pavak and Oyolo, are attempting to end years of bitter hostility. Although neither planet is a member of the Federation, we have been invited by both parties to act as an impartial mediator. The Enterprise will serve as neutral territory for the upcoming peace negotiations, while also patrolling the space between the two worlds in order to deter any attacks. Given the atrocities and bloodshed on both sides of the conflict, there are bound to be hard feelings among the delegates. I don’t envy the Federation ambassador assigned to this mission.

Who just happens to have a familiar face . . .

“Well, they’re not shooting at each other yet,” Ambassador Kevin Riley said. “That’s a positive sign, I suppose.”

The Enterprise approached the rendezvous point. On the bridge’s main viewer, two small diplomatic courier crafts from Pavak and Oyolo faced off against each other in the demilitarized zone between the planets. The couriers were essentially streamlined shuttlecrafts, designed for interplanetary travel within the solar system. Kirk recalled that both races possessed rudimentary warp technology, but had scarcely ventured beyond their own system. He briefly considered raising the Enterprise’s shields, but he decided against it. The shuttles posed little threat to the starship, and arriving with shields up, as though expecting trouble, hardly sent the right message.

“I admire your optimism, Ambassador,” Kirk said from the captain’s chair. He was wearing his dress uniform in anticipation of the delegates’ imminent arrival. Medals adorned the front of his double-breasted maroon jacket. “From what I gather, you have your work cut out for you.”

“You can say that again.” Riley stood beside Kirk’s chair in the sunken command circle at the center of the bridge. His conservative gray suit was a good deal less colorful than the then-regulation gold tunic he’d worn when he’d first served aboard the original Enterprise, some two decades ago. Years in the diplomatic corps had added some seasoning to his face and a neatly trimmed brown beard made him look more mature as well. “I have to say I’ve enjoyed the trip here, though. It’s good to be back on the Enterprise again . . . well, an Enterprise at least.”

“I know what you mean,” Kirk said. This new vessel wasn’t quite the same as his old ship, which had gone down in flames above the Genesis Planet a few years back, but he was getting used to it. And certainly it had proven itself during some tight situations, beginning with that business on Nimbus III. “And it’s been a pleasure to have you back aboard, if only for this mission.”

“We’re being hailed by both delegations,” Uhura reported from the communications station. “They’re ready to be beamed aboard.”

“Thank you, Commander.” Kirk rose from his seat and marched briskly toward the starboard turbolift. He nodded at Spock and Chekov. “Let’s not keep our distinguished guests waiting.”

The first officer and security chief fell in behind Kirk and Riley, leaving the bridge in the capable hands of Commander Sulu. Heela, a young Saurian lieutenant, took the helm as Sulu occupied the captain’s chair. Like Kirk, Spock and Chekov had donned their dress uniforms for the occasion. A short turbolift ride brought the reception party to the main transporter room on G Deck, where they found Doctor McCoy and Commander Scott waiting for them, along with a pair of discreetly positioned security guards. Kirk wasn’t necessarily expecting any trouble, but he was pleased Chekov wasn’t taking any chances with the safety of the delegates or the crew. In the captain’s experience, peacekeeping could sometimes be anything but peaceful.

“The Federation’s only interest is promoting peace in this sector,” Riley stressed. “It’s vital that we remain impartial and avoid even the appearance of taking sides.”

“You don’t need to remind us, Mister Ambassador,” Kirk said lightly. “This is hardly our first rodeo.”

“Of course, Captain,” Riley said, sounding slightly abashed. “I didn’t mean to imply otherwise.”

“At ease,” Kirk teased him. “You can count on us to be thoroughly even-handed where our guests are concerned.”

He had to admit that Riley’s respectful manner was a pleasant change from the sometimes overbearing attitude of many high-ranking Federation officials. Still, Kirk made a mental note to remember that Riley was indeed an experienced ambassador now, not the enthusiastic young lieutenant who had once served under Kirk’s command—and who had later been his chief of staff at Starfleet HQ, back when Kirk was an admiral flying a desk. All joking aside, the captain had no desire to undercut Riley’s authority by continuing to treat him as a subordinate. Ambassador Riley had come a long way.

“Who gets beamed aboard first?” Scott asked, occupying the transporter control booth. Transparent partitions divided the control console from the transporter platform. “If ye don’t mind me asking?”

“The order was determined randomly,” Riley explained. “The Pavakians go first.”

“You heard the man, Mister Scott,” Kirk said. “Proceed.”

“Aye, Captain.”

As Scott operated the controls, Kirk looked forward to meeting his first Pavakians. He had never encountered either species before and, despite the weighty nature of his mission, felt the same thrill he always experienced when visiting a new planet or civilization. The joy of discovery was a big part of why he had joined Starfleet. He hoped he never got so jaded that he lost his natural curiosity about alien races and cultures.

Twin pillars of coruscating energy shimmered above the transporter platform before coalescing into two humanoid figures, who were clearly Pavakian. Their most distinguishing characteristic, which had been noted in Kirk’s briefings on the species, was a velvety layer of fine fur that lay flat against the elegant contours of their other­wise very human-looking faces. The rest of their bodies were covered by crisp white military uniforms with black piping. Matching white gloves protected their hands, while polished black boots rested squarely on the transporter pads. The Pavakian delegation consisted of an older male and younger female of basic mammalian design. It had been arranged in advance that each senior delegate would be accompanied by a single aide.

“Welcome aboard the Enterprise,” Kirk said, and greeted the new arrivals. “I’m Captain James Kirk, one of your hosts for this summit.” He gestured toward Riley. “And this is Ambassador Riley.”

Riley stepped forward. “It’s a pleasure to meet you. On behalf of the United Federation of Planets, let me extend my own welcome . . . and our sincere hopes for a productive conference.”

“Thank you, gentlemen.” The senior Pavakian, accompanied by his aide, stepped down from the platform. He was lean and grizzled, with a stiff military bearing. His fine brown fur had been infiltrated by streaks of silver at his temples and chin, but his pale green eyes were sharp and alert beneath bushy black brows. Medals and ribbons festooned his double-breasted white tunic. His voice was slow and sonorous, as though weighing each word carefully. “General Vapar Tem of the Pavakian Civil Defense Force,” he introduced himself. “And this is my aide-de-camp, the indispensable Colonel Gast.”

“Captain, Ambassador.” Gast’s tawny golden fur was sleeker and more lustrous than Tem’s, no doubt because of the difference in their ages. She appeared young and fit and self-assured. Tiger stripes streaked the top of her scalp, meeting in a widow’s peak atop her brow. Cool brown eyes, darting briefly to note the presence of the security guards, regarded Kirk and his crew. Kirk got the impression that she missed very little.

“A pleasure.” He took a moment to introduce the other officers present. “Captain Spock, my first officer and science officer. Doctor Leonard McCoy, ship’s surgeon. Commander Montgomery Scott, head of engineering, and Commander Pavel Chekov, navigator and chief of security.”

“Officers.” Tem nodded at the reception committee before calling their attention to his aide. “Colonel Gast is an accomplished engineer and space traveler in her own right. She was originally assigned to our fledgling star exploration program before the war intervened.”

“The general is too kind,” she protested. “I merely saw my duty, like any other loyal Pavakian. Defending our world and interests took precedence over a purely scientific expedition.”

Kirk suspected that the war’s gain had been their space program’s loss. “Perhaps peace will open up new possibilities for all Pavakians—and for the Oyolu as well.”

She shrugged. “We shall see.”

Kirk found her remark worryingly noncommittal, but let it pass. As he understood it, the cease-fire had been in place for just a few months. It was only natural that soldiers on both sides might be skeptical of the chances for a lasting peace.

“The Oyolu delegation is ready to board,” Riley remarked. “We should not abuse their patience.”

“Heaven forbid,” Gast said drily.

Tem shot her a warning look. “Colonel.” He turned apologetically toward the Enterprise officers. “You must understand, gentlemen, that there remains little love lost between my people and the Oyolu. Much blood has been spilled, many friends and family maimed or buried, cities and homes reduced to rubble. Such wounds are not easily healed, and old grievances die hard.”

Kirk recalled his briefings on the painful history of the system. Oyolo, the inner world, was a lush green planet whose abundant resources and biodiversity had inevitably attracted the interest of rapacious traders and merchants from the neighboring world of Pavak. Although Pavak had never officially conquered or colonized Oyolo, its military government had vigorously defended the traders’ interests against those of the native Oyolu, eventually provoking a violent insurgency devoted to driving the Pavakians from the planet. The result had been an escalating cycle of violence, of vicious attacks and brutal retaliation, which had spilled oceans of blood over the past several generations.

“I understand,” Riley said. “My own homeland, back on Earth, was torn apart by bitter, often bloody Troubles only a few centuries ago, but in time peace and forgiveness came. You know what they say: Shaking hands with your friends is easy, but with your enemies? That’s a challenge that calls on the best we can be.”

Tem nodded solemnly. “Let us hope we are up to the task, then, for the sake of both our worlds.”

“Mister Chekov will escort you and Colonel Gast to your quarters,” Kirk said. It occurred to him that it might be better to postpone any meeting between the delegations until both were comfortably settled aboard the Enterprise. “We’ve prepared guest accommodations for both of you.”

Tem shook his head. He appeared to see through Kirk’s tactics. “I appreciate your prudence, Captain, but there is no point in delaying this encounter. Let us greet the Oyolu.”

Very well, Kirk thought. He nodded at Scotty. “Energize.”

Within minutes, two new figures materialized upon the transporter platform. The Oyolu were larger and stockier than the Pavakians, with broad chests and faces. Curling horns jutting from their brows indicated that both of the Oyolu delegates were male. Flowing manes of hair framed leathery yellow complexions the color of fresh lemons. In contrast to the stark white uniforms of their enemies, the Oyolu sported much more colorful and elaborate attire. A fur-lined burgundy cape hung from the wide shoulders of the senior delegate. A belted silk tunic, intricately embroidered, bared his muscular arms and legs. Beaded wristbands and greaves adorned their limbs. Cloven hooves rendered footwear superfluous.

The younger delegate, who had a shorter cape and less ornate tunic, as well as a rich, slightly accented voice, stepped forward to introduce his superior.

“May I present to you our revered leader, A’Barra the Defender!”

“More like A’Barra the bloody-handed rabble-rouser,” Gast murmured under her breath, earning her another cautionary look from General Tem. Kirk hoped her remark had gone unheard by the Oyolu.

“Welcome aboard the Enterprise,” Kirk said, before introducing himself and his crew. “And this is Ambassador Riley.”

“Greetings, Minister A’Barra,” Riley added. “I hope we did not keep you waiting.”

“Not at all,” A’Barra said in a deep baritone. “Peace has been a long time coming. A few stray moments here or there will make little difference.” His right horn had been broken off or severed so that only a truncated stub remained, while a pronounced limp was noticeable as he stepped down from the platform to address Kirk and the others. Flowing white hair fell past his shoulders. “Is that not so, Ifusi?” he asked his aide.

The other Oyolu had long black hair and a youthful intensity that reminded Kirk of Chekov back during their first five-year mission. Kirk noted an empty holster upon Ifusi’s belt. Both delegations had been instructed to leave any weapons behind.

“As you say, sir,” the aide replied.

So far, so good, Kirk thought as the two delegations regarded each other warily. Now for the tricky part, introducing the recent enemies to each other.

Riley came forward to do the honors. He gestured toward the Pavakians. “You know General Tem, of course.”

“Only by reputation,” A’Barra said in a tone that made it unclear if this was a compliment. His eyes narrowed as he contemplated the enemy commander. His hand absently fingered his broken horn. Beside him, Ifusi openly glared at Tem, not even trying to conceal his hostility. Kirk found himself grateful for that empty holster.

“Likewise,” Tem said drily.

A tense, awkward silence ensued. “Well, I’m sure we’ll have plenty of time to get to know each other better in the days to come,” Riley said. “That you’re both here in the same place, ready to talk, is a historic first step that can only lead to—”

Chekov sneezed loudly, interrupting the ambassador.

“Commander?” Kirk asked.

“Excuse me, Captain.” Chekov sniffled. “My apologies.”

McCoy gave Chekov a look of professional concern, but Kirk took advantage of the distraction to try to move things along. A crowded transporter room was not the ideal place to bring the wary adversaries together; if nothing else, it was far too easy for one delegation to beam away in a huff.

“Now that we’ve completed the introductions,” he said, “why don’t we get you settled into your respective quarters. No doubt you’ll want to relax and freshen up before we get down to business.”

“Thank you, Captain,” A’Barra said. “Your hospitality is most welcome. I confess, the hedonist in me is looking forward to enjoying the creature comforts of your fine starship.” He patted a prominent belly. “Particularly some of your exotic Federation cuisine.”

“We’re honored to have both delegations aboard.” Kirk turned to the security officers at hand. “Mister Hernandez, please escort the Oyolu to their quarters. Mister Yost, please do the same for our Pavakian guests.”

The ship’s VIP staterooms were all located on D Deck, one level above the senior officers’ quarters. Kirk wondered if he should have arranged matters so that the rival delegations were on different decks, but he saw no way to do so without possibly slighting one faction. Better that they receive equal accommodations, even if that meant putting them in uncomfortably close proximity to each other. At least they were at opposite ends of a curving corridor, he reflected, with a few empty staterooms in between. One more buffer zone couldn’t hurt.

Colonel Gast paused on her way to the exit. “What of our personal effects and baggage?”

“They’re being beamed aboard via the cargo transporters as we speak,” Scotty assured her. “Ye can count on them to be delivered to your quarters in no time at all.”

“Understood.” She let Yost lead her toward the exit, giving the Oyolu a wide berth on her way out. A look of mutual contempt passed between her and Ifusi. Her nose wrinkled in distaste. “Until later, gentlemen.”

Ifusi snorted in disdain.

Yes, Kirk decided. Kevin Riley definitely had his hands full. You could practically smell the bad blood between the old enemies. They could be sitting on top of a powder keg.

Here’s hoping nobody lights a match.

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  • Publisher ‏ : ‎ Pocket Books/Star Trek; Reissue edition (November 25, 2014)
  • Language ‏ : ‎ English
  • Mass Market Paperback ‏ : ‎ 384 pages
  • ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 1476783241
  • ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-1476783246
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Greg Cox (born 1959) is an American writer of science fiction, including works that are media tie-ins. He lives in Oxford, Pennsylvania.

He has written numerous Star Trek novels, including The Eugenics Wars (Volume One and Two), The Q Continuum, Assignment: Eternity, and The Black Shore. His short fiction can be found in such anthologies as Star Trek: Tales of the Dominion War, Star Trek: The Amazing Stories and Star Trek: Enterprise logs. His first "Khan" novel, The Eugenics Wars: Volume One, was voted best sci-fi book of the year by the readers of Dreamwatch magazine. Cox can be found in a bonus feature on the "Director's Edition" DVD of Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan.

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I'll be the first to admit that I usually don't have high hopes for novels that tend to bring back characters we've not seen in a while since usually that ends up being the case. However, Greg Cox surprised me in a good way with the return of Lenore Karidian in "Foul Deeds Will Rise". The book itself set in 2288 (another rarity in the Original Series fiction lately) involves a peacekeeping mission between 2 worlds, Pavak & Oyolo, who are attempting to end a devastating world. With both delegations aboard the Enterprise, Kirk along with McCoy go to Oyolo to deliver supplies & check out things there. While visiting a relieve organization & seeing a production of "The Tempest", Kirk recognizes one of the actresses as Lenore Karidian (last seen in "The Conscience of the King") who is going by the alias Lyla Kassidy as to protect her past. Kirk eventually invites her aboard the Enterprise as part of a reception for the 2 delegations. When the head of the Pavak delegation turns up dead she turns out to be the prime suspect almost by default especially to now Ambassador Kevin Riley. Elsewhere, Spock & Scotty are on Pavak overseeing the destruction of that planet's missiles. When one of them sneaks through inspection as a fake tensions heat up there as well since the Pavakians were sure this wasn't supposed to happen. Things get more heated when "Lyla"'s true identity is leaked to the public after the murder of the head of the Oyolu delegation.

Cox does an extraordinarily good job of at times keeping up with the tensions among the delegations as well as just how fragile this tentative peace is between these 2 worlds. While the majority of the focus at times stays on Lenore & her sordid past only Kirk remains skeptical that she's still capable of being the person she was 20 years before. From hostage situations, a raid, a general willing to defy authority no matter the cost & an eventual killer who employs a transporter trick not seen since "The Enemy Within", Cox crafts a story that progressively gets better throughout & even at its climax offers a solution that is breathtaking & surprisingly well done. It's nice to see Karidian not only be used as a plot device, but as also a woman who doubts that someone even as evil as herself can turn into something good which the ending provides.

Overall, "Foul Deeds Will Rise" is just more than a follow-up to one of the better episodes of the Original Series, but it's also about the chance to prove that evil can be redeemed as well as showing that there can be good in every bad situation. The book itself is also a nice change being set in the movie era & with a good use of events to this point. For this reader who has at times been highly critical of the novels set in the original Star Trek, I've found this one a pleasant surprise & hope we see more works like this in the years ahead.
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This story takes place in between the fifth and sixth Star Trek movies. The latest in a string of TOS novels set in the gaps in between the movies to "fill in the blanks". The Enterprise is hosting a peace conference between two warring neighboring worlds, hosted by the former Lieutenant Kevin Riley, now an Ambassador. The delegates are immediately at each other's throats. Kirk and McCoy go to one planet to provide relief supplies, while Spock and Scotty go to the other planet to function as weapons inspectors.

While on the planet, Kirk finds Lenore Karidian. My recollection of TOS is a little rusty, but she was the daughter of Kodos, and when he came to the original Enterprise under an alias as an actor trying to get on with his life, she was his insane daughter that was killing all of the survivors of his massacre. Kirk was one, Kevin Riley was another. For some reason Kirk is taken with her, and ends up inviting her back to the Enterprise for the official reception, much to McCoy's chagrin.

Sure enough, with Lenore around, delegates start dying. People find out about her past and start blaming her. Her mental health is fragile, she even starts to doubt her own innocence.

Meanwhile, Spock and Scotty discover that one of the deadly warheads they were brought in to verify was destroyed is missing, stolen by a rogue element of the government. The murder of the delegates threatens the fragile peace and they are placed under guard. On the other planet the relief workers are taken hostage briefly, only to be quickly rescued by a covert mission led by Kirk and Chekov.

Long story short, the murderer turns out to be one of the junior delegates, Lenore gets her redemption by stealing a shuttlecraft that ends up destroying the warhead before it reaches the other planet, and everybody lives happily ever after.

Overall it was a good read, but what stood out for me during most of the book was the fact that there was absolutely no surveillance to fall back on when the murders happened. Given that it would be quite easy to place cameras in the hallways today, one could imagine now that by the 23rd century it should be pretty easy to have a video record of who was coming and going from the area, especially after the first murder. That realization made the storyline kind of fall apart a little. It just shouldn't have been that hard to know who was doing what and when, especially when the plot twist that reveals that the murderer used the transporter to split herself into two and the other half was loose in the ship setting booby traps for three days without getting detected!
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Reviewed in the United States on April 4, 2016
Greg Cox creates another masterpiece in the original series novel series. Lenore Karidian returns after 20 years to become a suspect in a sereis of murders aboard the Enterprise. This time one of her former victims, Kevin Riley has become an ambassador for the Federation. It's a story full of many surprises and it takes place in the post Star Trek VI era. It's full of great character moments.

I really can't find anything wrong with the story. If only more of the books were this good I'd be purchasing more of them. The author has a very good feel for the Star Trek characters and is a sure bet when I'm shopping for novels. Don't ignore this one, buy it, You won't be sorry!
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Reviewed in the United States on October 16, 2015
As a long-time "Star Trek" fan, I'm kind of picky about how authors write their plots, and how the main characters are portrayed. I'm not going to regurgitate the plot, but will say that it references the "Conscience of the King" episode, and features a character from that show. Basically, the plot revolves around whether or not she is the murderer.

The plot was somewhat interesting, but I didn't like how the author kept Spock separated from the main action for the entire book. He and Scotty were off overseeing the destruction of weapons, and that was a waste of their time. Spock should have been on board the Enterprise, helping Kirk try to solve the murder mystery. Of course this comes from a die hard Spock fan, so I wanted to see his character featured more prominently.

Overall, the book was decent, but not one I would want to read again.
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