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Writing Mini Lessons 06
Writing Mini Lessons 06
Writing Workshop
using
6 Traits of Writing
Grades K-1
Santa Monica-Malibu
Unified School District
Educational Services
Created for SMMUSD Teachers by
Chrysta Wyse
Cotsen Mentor at Will Rogers Learning
Community
©2006
Kindergarten/1st Grade Mini-Lessons for Writing Workshop
Table of Contents
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
Gr. K-1 Mini-Lesson 1: Educational Services
Teacher Resources: Writing
Stretching Sounds
Unit of Study: Small Moments (pages 39-46 from the Units of Study by
Lucy Calkins and Abby Oxenhorn)
6 Traits Emphasis: Conventions: Stretching & Writing Words So Others Can
Read Them
Teaching Point: Writers get their words down on paper by saying the words
slowly and writing down the sounds they hear.
CA Writing Standards:
Kindergarten 1.0 Writing Strategies: Students write words and brief sentences
that are legible.
Organization and Focus 1.1--Use letters and phonetically spelled words to
write about experiences, stories, people, objects, or events; 1.2--Write
consonant-vowel-consonant words (i.e., demonstrate the alphabetic principle).
Language Conventions 1.2: Spelling--Spell independently by using pre-
phonetic knowledge, sounds of the alphabet, and knowledge of letter names.
First Grade Language Conventions 1.8: Spelling--Spell three-and four-letter
short-vowel words and grade-level-appropriate sight words correctly.
Materials needed:
Teacher: Sketch of your own story in oversized booklet, marker
Students: Mini whiteboards (1 per student), dry erase markers (1 per student). If you
do not have whiteboards for each student, you can use chalkboards and chalk, or
clipboards (or another hard surface) with paper and pens/pencils.
CONNECTION TO PRIOR LEARNING: "Writers say words they don’t know slowly,
writing all the sounds so that people can read their writing. Writers, we have been
writing wonderful Small Moments from our lives and we want people to read them. We
need to write words in such a way that people can read our stories. This is part of
conventions in the 6 Traits of Writing. Writers say words slowly, stretching the word
out, and writing all the sounds we hear. I’ll teach you how to do this, and then we can
write words that people can read."
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
TEACHING STEPS: Open an oversized booklet to one page. Show a picture you have
sketched that illustrates part of a Small Moment from your life. (Here is an example.)
Tell the story of this page.
“I sketched this Small Moment: ‘Last night I was at the grocery store. A man dropped
a box of crackers in the aisle. I helped him pick them up, and he thanked me. He
reminded me of my own grandfather.’”
Demonstrate the strategies you use to write words: Say the word you want to write
slowly, bit by bit, exaggerating the sounds. Demonstrate listening and writing the
letter for the sound. You may also want to incorporate Alphafriends or Zoophonics at
this time, to help support your writers with their letter sounds.
“I want to write man. Watch how I do it. I’m going to listen to the sound at the
beginning of man. Man. Mman, /m/. Now I am going to say it slowly again and write a
letter that makes the sound I hear. M-a-n. Oh! I hear an /m/ at the beginning.”
Write the letter m.
Put your finger under the letter and reread the letter you’ve written. Say the rest of
the word, listening to the sounds that you haven’t yet recorded. Repeat the process
you used above.
“Let me reread what I wrote.” Point under the m, and read /m/. “/mmm/ man. Let
me say the word slowly again. I want to hear the middle sound. M-a-. Ma. Ma. Oh! I
hear /a/ /a/. That’s an a.” Write the letter a so now the word reads ma.
“Now I want to write down the last sound in man. I’m going to reread what I wrote
again.” Point under the m, and read /m/, and then under the a and read /a/ “/m/ /a/.
I’m going to say the word slowly again. I want to hear the last sound. M-a-nnn. Man.
Man. Oh! I hear /n/ /n/. That’s an n!” Write the letter n so now the word reads man.
Again, put your finger under the letters and reread what you have written.
“Now I think I wrote the word man. I’ll reread it again.” With your finger under the
print, read it: “Man. Wow! It really helped me to say the word slowly and write the
sounds I hear. Now, other people can read my words, too!”
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
ACTIVE INVOLVEMENT (ENGAGEMENT): Ask students to help you with another
word by working on their mini whiteboards.
“Now I want to write another word. I need your help to write the word box,” (You will
use a word from your own story here) “because the man dropped his box of crackers.
See if you can help me write the word box beside my picture. Write box on your
whiteboard as we do it together.”
“First we say the word. Watch me say the word box slowly. /B-o-x./ Now you say the
word slowly. What sound do you hear at the beginning of box? Listen, and then tell
your partner the first sound you hear. /b/ Write the letter that makes the /b/
sound. Put your finger under what you’ve written and let’s read it together. /b/. We
wrote b. We want to write box. /b/ /ox/ /ox/. Say the next sound /o/ /x/, write
what you hear. Fingers under the letters and let’s reread it.”
Ask what they wrote on their boards, and use their help to label your sketch.
“Show me what you wrote on your whiteboard so I can label box on my sketch.”
“Thanks. I’ll put that on my story.” Write box (or the word from your story) next to
the picture of the box.
LINK: Name the strategy and trait you used, and remind students to use this
strategy in their writing from now on.
“Remember the strategy we just used. Say the word, then sketch the word out by
saying it slowly, and then write one sound. Then reread what you’ve written so far (this
is the key!) and again say the rest of the word slowly, listening for the next sound you
hear. When you are writing your Small Moments today, use this strategy so that you
and others can read your words. This strategy is from our conventions trait.“
CONFERRING: You can use the WW & 6 Traits Conferring Checklist while conferring,
or your own record keeping system.
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
MID-WORKSHOP TEACHING POINT: As an energizer, and another opportunity to
share a teaching point, share with the class a strategy that one of your students used
today. This should be a strategy that you discovered during your conferring (other
than today’s minilesson teaching point).
AFTER WORKSHOP SHARE: Call the children to the rug. Explain how one (or more)
of your writers stretched out his/her words. Then, ask students to reread their work
to their partners, asking themselves: Did I record all the sounds I can?
“Right now, will each of you reread your work to your partner? Put one person’s piece
between you and your partner. And writers, read your story aloud, pointing at the
words. Check that each of you put down all the sounds you heard. Talk about your
story with your partner, then switch to the other writer’s story.”
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
Gr. K-1 Mini-Lesson 2: Educational Services
Teacher Resources: Writing
Zoom!
Unit of Study: Small Moments (pages 83-91 from the Units of Study by
Lucy Calkins and Abby Oxenhorn)
6 Traits Emphasis: Ideas: Focusing on the Most Important Part. Is my
message clear?
CA Writing Standards:
Kindergarten 1.0 Writing Strategies: Students write words and brief sentences that
are legible.
Organization and Focus 1.1--Use letters and phonetically spelled words to write
about experiences, stories, people, objects, or events; 1.2--Write consonant-
vowel-consonant words (i.e., demonstrate the alphabetic principle).
First Grade 1.0 Writing Strategies: Students write clear and coherent sentences and
paragraphs that develop a central idea. Their writing shows they consider the audience
and purpose. Students progress through the stages of the writing process (e.g.,
prewriting, drafting, revising, editing successive versions).
Organization and Focus 1.1--Select a focus when writing.
CONNECTION TO PRIOR LEARNING: Tell your students how writers zoom in and
focus like photographers. Use your own classroom examples to help with your analogy.
“Today I am going to teach you that writers are like photographers. Photographers
can look through their cameras and see that whole wall of our classroom with charts
and books and plants and the clock and the rabbit cage, and the chairs. Or they can
zoom in and see just one thing, like our rabbit cage, but now they see all the details in
the rabbit cage. They even see the pink eyes of our bunny Harold! Writers can also
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
write about the whole wall, the whole world. But usually writers, like photographers,
zoom in on the most important parts of our stories. Zooming in and making sure what
we are writing is clear, is part of our ideas writing trait.”
TEACHING STEPS: Tell your students to watch you tell your story aloud. Tell a list-
like, unfocused story. (Here is an example, but use a story from your own life.)
“First I am going to think of a big whole thing in my life.” Pause, as if you are just then
thinking up your pre-planned story. “Okay, I am remembering when I went to see my
dad at work at the Police Station. I walked up to the front desk. Then, the
receptionist buzzed me in. I walked into his office. He gave me a tour of the new
remodeled station. We went back to his office and ate the sandwiches I brought.
Then I said good-bye and I left.” With your hands, show that your topic is big, like the
whole classroom wall, even though it was actually more focused than the topics children
often take on.
Demonstrate how you will zoom in on the most important part of the unfocused story.
Tell them the focused story aloud.
“I just listed all the things I did with my dad. But now what I am going to do is zoom
in.” Your hands should show that you are going to bring attention in from a topic the
size of a whole wall to a topic that is more the size of a rabbit cage. “I’ll zoom in and
write just about the most important part of the memory!” Pause, as if thinking. “Oh I
know! My dad brought me back into the holding tank, and tried to trick me. My story
will sound like this:”
My dad showed me the new holding tank. He opened one of the jail cells and told
me to walk inside to take a look. Then he closed the door and walked away,
pretending to lock me inside. “Hey!” I yelled. He came right back and we both
started laughing.
“Did you notice what I did? Did you notice how I zoomed in, like a photographer, to
one Small Moment I had with my dad to help focus my ideas?”
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
“Would you all open your folders and recall the story you’ll be working on today? Would
you reread that story and ask, ‘Is this big (like the classroom wall or my whole visit to
my dad’s work) or zoomed-in and small (like the rabbit cage or my dad and I in the
holding tank)?’ If it’s big, would you tell your partner how you could zoom in, if you
decided to do that?”
LINK: Signal the class to come back together. Remind the students to zoom in on the
most important part of the memory when they write today and everyday.
“When you write today and every day, think about being a photographer and about
zooming in on the most important part of your memory! This strategy is from our ideas
trait."
CONFERRING: You can use the WW & 6 Traits Conferring Checklist while conferring,
or your own record keeping system.
AFTER WORKSHOP SHARE: Call the students to the carpet and tell them about how
a child zoomed in on the most important part.
“Writers, I have something really special to share with you.” Share with the class how
one of your students used the minilesson today, and zoomed in on one memory. You will
find this example while conferring with students.
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
Gr. K-1 Mini-Lesson 3: Educational Services
Teacher Resources: Writing
Incredible Endings!
Unit of Study: Small Moments (pages 101-107 from the Units of Study by
Lucy Calkins and Abby Oxenhorn)
6 Traits Emphasis: Ideas: Focusing on the Most Important Part. Is my
message clear?
Organization: Strong endings
Teaching Point: Writers write close-in story endings by staying close to the
heart of the story.
CA Writing Standards:
Kindergarten 1.0 Writing Strategies: Students write words and brief sentences that
are legible.
Organization and Focus 1.1--Use letters and phonetically spelled words to write
about experiences, stories, people, objects, or events.
First Grade 1.0 Writing Strategies: Students write clear and coherent sentences and
paragraphs that develop a central idea. Their writing shows they consider the audience
and purpose. Students progress through the stages of the writing process.
Organization and Focus 1.1--Select a focus when writing.
2.0 Writing Applications (Genres and Their Characteristics): Students write
compositions that describe and explain familiar objects, events, and
experiences. Student writing demonstrates a command of standard American
English and the drafting, research, and organizational strategies outlined in
Writing Standard 1.0.
2.1 Write brief narratives (e.g., autobiographical) describing an experience.
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
“I’ve loved reading your stories, especially now that they stretch the moments out—
except writers, I have to tell you one thing. Sometimes your stories are so great,”
(Hold your hand up high as if the stories are so tall), “and your endings are a letdown.”
(Bring your hands low.) “Your stories go like this:” (Show an example that relates to
your own classroom experience.”
Yesterday Angelica’s mom came to talk about the Dia de Los Muertos. She
brought in skulls made out of sugar and showed us pictures of her family’s altar.
Then, change your intonation to suggest that, oh dear, everything falls apart.
“What a letdown! Today we’ll learn how to write endings that are as wonderful as your
stories.”
TEACHING STEPS: Tell your students how you see them ending stories. If they jump
far away from the Small Moment, suggest they find endings within their moments.
“What you do now is that you write endings that jump away from the Small Moment.
So you tell the story about Angelica’s mom coming to our classroom, and end it with,
‘Then we had lunch,’ or ‘Then we went home.’ Do you see how you are jumping away
from the small moment and going to a whole different time?”
“It doesn’t have to go that way. You will usually get a better ending if you stay close-in
to the moment. This is part of our ideas and organization traits. Let’s try it together.
I’ll read the story again and your will think how you could end it, still staying close-in to
Angelica’s mom’s visit.”
Ask the class to join you in writing a new ending for the story you cited earlier. Think
aloud to get them started searching for an ending within the moment. Offer several
possible endings and how you got to them.
Yesterday Angelica’s mom came to talk about the Dia de Los Muertos. She
brought in skulls made out of sugar and showed us pictures of her family’s altar.
“Hmmm….One way to end a story is to remember back to the very next thing that
happened. I’m trying to remember…I think the next thing that happened is that she
tore off pieces of "pan de muerto," or bread of the dead, for each of us to try.
Nathan bit into a plastic toy skeleton hidden inside the loaf. That means good luck for
him! Couldn’t that be an ending?”
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
Nathan bit into a plastic toy skeleton hidden inside the loaf. That means good
luck for him!
“Another way to end the story while staying in the moment is to say what you thought
or felt (inside the story) during that moment. What were you thinking about when she
was sharing her artifacts and stories? I was thinking about how much I miss my
Grandma Millie who passed away. So couldn’t that be an ending? The story would go
like this:”
Yesterday Angelica’s mom came to talk about the Dia de Los Muertos. She
brought in skulls made out of sugar and showed us pictures of her family’s altar.
Nathan bit into a plastic toy skeleton hidden inside the loaf. That means good
luck for him. Listening to Angelica’s mom reminded me of how much I miss my
Grandma Millie who passed away, and how I want to honor her this Dia de Los
Muertos.
“Do you see how one way to write story endings is to end the story while staying in the
moment? Another way is to tell what you thought or felt in the moment—to tell a little
of the inside story.”
ACTIVE INVOLVEMENT (ENGAGEMENT): Tell the class you need help writing an
ending to a story based on a shared experience. (Here is an example, but use your own
story.)
“I have been working again on that story about our surprise party for Ms. Edwards. I
need you to listen to the story and work with your partner to see if you could improve
my ending.”
Ms. Edwards was out of the room. We all hid under our desks. It was so quiet,
but everyone kept giggling. We heard the doorknob turn. Ms. Edwards came in
and we yelled, “Surprise!” Then we went home.
Tell your students to turn to their writing partners and talk about whether the story
had a good ending. Could they improve on it? Listen in to their responses.
Signal to the class to come back together and ask a student how she would end the
story. (This is where it helps to listen in on the turn and talk, so that you know what
type of response you are going to get.)
Reread the piece, but this time add the ending that the student suggested.
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.
LINK: Invite and encourage your students to think about writing good endings to their
stories.
“So when you write today, and every day, if it’s time to end your story, pause and ask
yourself, ‘How can I write a good ending?’ And from now on, let’s say it’s not allowed to
end your piece with ‘and then I went home’ or ‘and then I went to sleep.’ Okay? Give
me a thumbs up if you are going to work on keeping your ending close-in to your story
today. Good. This will help with both your ideas and your organization in your writing.”
CONFERRING: You can use the WW & 6 Traits Conferring Checklist while conferring,
or your own record-keeping system.
AFTER-WORKSHOP SHARE: Ask students to bring their writing folders to the rug.
Read some pieces, emphasizing how the writers ended their stories. Read the endings
slowly and dramatically to show how each ending brings the story towards its
conclusion. After doing this, tell your writers:
“Choose a story from your folder and reread your ending. See if you think your ending
is great or so-so or sort of terrible….How many of you decided your ending was ‘sort of
terrible,' like mine was at first?”
“Good for you to see that! I’m exactly the same as you. When I reread my writing, I
often say, ‘Oh no! I could do much better!”
“Smart work. Will you writers revise tomorrow? Here’s a sticky note. Put it where
you have work you know you need to do.”
This gesture both rewards the students who took a risk in analyzing their own work,
and gives them a running start for their revision work tomorrow.
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Gr. K-1 Writing Mini-Lesson Created for SMMUSD Teachers by Chrysta Wyse, Cotsen Mentor, 2006
Mini-Lesson structure from Teachers College Reading and Writing Project, 2003.