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Unit-III

3. THE HOUSE OF FEAR


Ibn-e-Safi
(Translated by Bilal Tanweer)
Dr. Anamta Rizvi

STRUCTURE

1. Learning Objectives
2. Introduction
3. Detective Fiction
4. The Plot
5. Detailed Summary
6. Characters
7. Summing Up

1. LEARNING OBJECTIVES

This lesson will enable you to:


• Understand the basic principles of detective fiction
• Recognize Ibn-e Safi as a pioneer in the field of detective fiction in Urdu literature
• Comprehensively summarize the novel with special attention to the unraveling of the
mystery

1. INTRODUCTION

Asrar Narvi, was a fiction writer, novelist and poet of Urdu who wrote under the pen name
Ibn-e-Safi. He, along with his family moved to Pakistan in 1952, after the partition of India.
He started his career at a very early age and went on to become one of the most sought-after
writers in Urdu Literature. He majorly wrote detective novels, and he garnered much fame
and praise for his writing style and interesting plotlines. His novels held elements of mystery,
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adventure, suspense, romance and comedy, making him one of the most distinguished writers
of his period. His fame primarily rests on the 125-book series Jasoosi Dunya and on the 120-
book Imran Series. With the success of these series, Safi became known as a detective writer.
Born in 1928 to Nuzaira Bibi and Safiullah, Safi was brought up in humble settings in
a small village of Nara in the Allahabad district. Interestingly, his parents named him Asrar,
which means “secrets” or “mysteries” in Arabic. Little did his parents know that this name
will have an ever-lasting impact on the profession he would choose to be in. The village in
which Safi grew up was already very rich in literature and culture. Many famous names had
emerged from that village, making the soil of that village fertile in learning. This environment
had a great impact on Safi, and he too grew up with a penchant for reading and writing.
Talking of his childhood, Safi once stated:
My father was fond of reading; therefore, the house was full of novels and ancient
mythology books but I was not allowed to even touch any of those. So, I used to steal
a book or two and pretending as if I was going out to play, I used to sneak up to the
roof. Once on the roof, I used to be gone for the whole day. Eventually, one day I was
caught red handed and the parents had an argument over it but finally the verdict was
in my favor. My mother said, ‘He is at least better off than the kids who spend their
days playing gilli-danda or marbles in the streets.” Then there were no holds barred
and I was completely drowned in the stories. (Safi X).
He eventually went to Allahabad to get his higher education, where he got more exposure to
literatures in different languages. This broadened his horizons and widened his imagination.
He received a Bachelor of Arts degree from Agra University. In 1948, he started his first job
at Nikhat Publications as an editor in the poetry department. His initial works date back to the
early 1940s, when he wrote in British India. He also studied at Allahabad University where
he was class fellow of Professor Mohammad Uzair and one year senior to Mustafa Zaidi.
After the independence of India in 1947, he began writing novels in the early 1950s while
working as a secondary school teacher and continuing part-time studies. After completing the
latter, having attracted official attention as being subversive in the independence and post-
independence period, he migrated to Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan in August 1952. He started his
own company by the name of Asrar Publications.
Like many of the writers of that period, Safi was also deeply affected by the horrors
of Partition. The gloom and despondency that Partition brought in is reflected in the
following words of Safi:
The chain of dreams had broken. It seemed as if some wizard like Afrasiyab had
caused a rain of magic knives upon all of society (a reference to the sorcerer
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Afrasiyab in the Tilism-e-Hoshruba); as if some ‘she’ had been charred in fire… (a


reference to Rider Haggard’s She); as if the coffin of ancient Kallikrates had been
stoned (ancient sources identify Iktonis and Kallikrates as architects of the
Parthenon)…and Love would never reign in the Hateland again. (Safi xi)
What led Safi to writing mystery novels was his endeavor to bring in novelty and freshness to
Urdu literature. Until Safi introduced detective fiction, Urdu literature was going through a
relatively low phase and hardly anything new was being written. Safi’s writing was like a
breath of fresh air as he brought newness and novelty to Urdu literature.
The novel The House of Fear belongs to his series of novels called Imran series. Here,
the detective is Imran, who is a genius but acts as a fool, and the one who solves all
complicated murder mysteries. Before writing the Imran series, Safi wrote a number of
novels that were included under the heading of Jasoosi Duniya. Both the series garnered
immense praise and became a huge success during that period. As detective fiction in itself
was a new genre, and the readers soon developed a huge liking towards such kind of writing.
Written on similar lines as Arthur Conan Doyle’s series of Sherlock Holmes, Safi’s detective
novels compounded the elements of Urdu literature and English literature, and gave Urdu
detective fiction a completely new identity. He achieved critical success, and commercial
success in equal measure. Many of his works have been translated into different languages,
and critics and scholars have evinced a deep interest in his writings.
Ibn-e-Safi’s main fictional characters, Colonel Faridi (also known to readers as
Colonel Vinod when the series was translated into Hindi from a press in Allahabad) of
Jasoosi Duniya, Ali Imran of Imran Series are men of honour whose moral universe is guided
by the principle of justice. Refusing to align themselves with communal antagonism of their
times, they seek peaceful co-existence. What makes them remarkable is their intelligence and
their quick and incisive wit. Ibn-e-Safi’s novels abound in refreshing humour and wit. His
fictional world is populated by many fascinating supporting players as Black Zero, Juliana
Fitzwater, Safdar Saeed, and Sir Sultan, each character having a distinct trait. His larger-than-
life villains like Sing-Hi, Finch, Gerald Shastri, Qalandar Bayabani, and Doctor Dread
transcend national or religious stereotypes. Even places he describes can be anywhere in the
world such as Zeroland and High Circle Hotel. Having said this, one has to acknowledge that
even Ibn-e- Safi’s novels are more of thrillers than stories of detection and scientific problem-
solving as is evident from their titles like Purasrar Ajnabee, Raqqasa Ka Qatl, Khooni
Patthar, Khaufnaak Hungama, and Laashon Ka Abshaar. The commercial success of Imran
series amongst the masses was such that even after Ibn-e- Safi’s death, it was continued by
Mazhar Kaleem (1942-2018) who wrote the later issue of stories in the series.
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3. DETECTIVE FICTION

Detective Fiction is a sub-genre of crime fiction or mystery fiction. Detective novels, as the
name suggests, have a detective as the protagonist who solves simple or complicated cases.
These novels are categorised by the features of mystery, murder, adventure, charade, enigma,
and secrecy. Such features in a detective novel certainly make for an interesting read and are
rated highly on popularity charts. The element of surprise and the eagerness to know ‘what
happens next’ keeps the reader on an edge right till the end. This is one primary reason that
detective fiction eventually became one of the most favourite genres and gained wide
readership. The first detective story was “The Murders in the Rue Morgue” by Edgar Allan
Poe, published in April 1841. The profession of detective had come into being only a few
decades earlier, and Poe is generally thought to have been influenced by
the Mémoires (1828–29) of François-Eugène Vidocq, who in 1817 established the world’s
first detective bureau, in Paris. Poe’s fictional French detective, C. Auguste Dupin, appeared
in two other stories, “The Mystery of Marie Roget” (1845) and “The Purloined Letter”
(1845). The detective story soon expanded to novel length. The greatest of all fictional
detectives, Sherlock Holmes, along with his loyal, somewhat obtuse companion Dr. Watson,
made his first appearance in Arthur Conan Doyle’s novel A Study in Scarlet (1887) and
continued into the 20th century in such collections of stories as The Memoirs of Sherlock
Holmes (1894) and the longer Hound of the Baskervilles (1902). So great was the appeal of
Sherlock Holmes detecting style that the death of Conan Doyle did little to end Holmes’s
career; several writers, often expanding upon circumstances mentioned in the original works,
have attempted to carry on the Holmesian tradition.

4. THE PLOT

The House of Fear revolves around the mystery of dead bodies, with identical dagger marks
exactly 5 inches apart, in an abandoned house. The detective-protagonist is Ali Imran, a
highly qualified criminologist, who solves the mystery. Imran takes centre stage as the
principal character; all other characters only exist to showcase Imran, a deliberately irritating
personality who talks absolute nonsense and gibberish at times. Fayyaz is the one who is
working on this case, and he seeks Imran’s help in solving these murders. The plot is well
crafted and the seriousness of the murders is subdued by several humorous moments and
jokes cracked by Imran. Just like in any other detective novel, the case gets unravelled
slowly, but in a very interesting manner. The novel has many other characters like Rabia,
Lady Jehangir, who might have a small role but they are crucial and important in unveiling
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the mystery. The author succeeds in creating intense suspense in the novel and when the
mystery finally gets resolved and the main culprit is found, it brings in an element of shock
and surprise to the readers. The last few chapters disclose that the motivation for the murder
was primarily because of some important papers that belong to the Foreign Office, and were
stolen by criminals. Imran, who plays the fool, comes out as a very courageous, audacious
and intelligent detective.

5. DETAILED SUMMARY

Chapter 1:
The first chapter begins with Imran getting ready to go somewhere. While settling his tie, he
feels agitated and is exasperated that he is unable to settle his tie. His struggle with his tie
exhibits his childish behavior, suggesting to the readers that he is an immature grown up.
However, as the novel progresses, readers get to know that Imran is a genius. He deliberately
adopts an avatar which makes him look like an utter fool. He purposefully tries to keeps this
demeanor so as not to reveal his true genius as this helps him conceal his real identity. In the
first chapter, he exchanges funny conversation with his servant. Imran projects that he has a
problem of being forgetful and absent-minded. When his sisters come to remind him that he
had promised to go to the movies along with them, he pretends to have completely forgotten
and tells them that he was going to buy cloth of a kurta for their servant. The sisters get
annoyed with him, but also laugh at his humorous self. The following words in the first
chapter introduce Imran to the reader:
Imran’s appearance belied his actions. His age was around twenty-eight. After
completing his MSc from a local university, he went to England where he did a PhD
in sciences. Imran’s father, Rahman, was the Director General of the Intelligence
Bureau… Everyone in the family was unhappy with his attitude. He had started acting
like an absent-minded fool, especially after his return from England, so much so that
even servants took advantage of him all the time. (Safi 9)

Check Your Progress


1. How does the novel begin?
2. Why does Imran portray himself as a fool?
3. Who is Imran’s father?

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In this chapter, the character Fayyaz is introduced, whose role can be considered similar to
that of Dr Watson in Sherlock Holmes. He is the one who brings complicated murder cases to
Imran, as he believes that Imran is capable of solving these cases given his superior mental
skills. Imran however continues to behave in an eccentric manner with Fayyaz as well, who
tolerates his useless banter as he is aware that Imran puts on a charade of a fool to conceal his
genius self. The murder case gets disclosed here when Fayyaz brings Imran to an old
building. Fayyaz tells him that a murder has occurred in a building that had remained closed
for about five years. Fayyaz gives the details of the murder in the following words:
Listen: the murderer struck once. Then measured a distance of five inches from the
wound and struck again. And then he measured the same distance again and struck the
third time. He was also careful about striking in one straight line- not an inch up or
down. (Safi 15)
Imran then jokes for a while and then enquires about the owners of the building. He gets to
know that the building is owned by a reputed Judge of the town, who is also Fayyaz’s
neighbor. Here again Imran jokes and says that he wants to marry the Judge’s daughter,
Rabia, who was blind in one eye.

Check Your Progress


1. Who is Fayyaz?
2. Why is the murder a mysterious one?
3. Who owns the building where the murders occur?

Chapter 3
The next day Imran visits Fayyaz’s house. Both, Rabia and Fayyaz’s wife, find Imran strange
because of his odd behavior. Rabia is there as a guest. Initially Imran expresses his
displeasure in seeing Rabia as he was not prepared to meet her but later, he interacts and flirts
with Rabia throughout the dinner. This chapter discloses the mystery of the house. When
Imran asks information about the house, Fayyaz replies:
Actually, it was the property of one of his (Judge’s) friends. And the friend had
bought it from someone else. They were old friends but their jobs had distanced them.
About five years ago, Judge sahib received a letter that was written to him from that
very building. His friend wrote to him saying that he was extremely unwell and would
probably not live much longer; and he wanted to tell Judge Sahib something

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important before dying… By the time he reached, his friend had passed away. He
discovered that his friend had lived in the building but he never found out what he
wanted to say (Safi 26).
The chapter ends with another discovery of the key of the house. As soon as Fayyaz hands
over the key Imran says that the key was not an original but was in fact a duplicate one. He
says so as he observes some wax particles stuck in it.

Check Your Progress


1. How does Judge Sahib become the owner of the house?
2. Who is Rabia?
3. What does Imran say about the keys of the house?

Chapter 4
The house also has a grave which is taken care of by a grave keeper. In order to begin solving
the murder case, Imran and Fayyaz go to the house where the murder has taken place. When
they reach the house they discover that one more murder has taken place as another man lay
dead. Similar to that of the previous murder, the dead person has three wounds on his back.
The murdered person was a young boy and seemed from an upper class. The murdered boy
held a paper in his hand which is taken out by Imran with much difficulty. He doesn’t inform
Fayyaz of the paper and quietly keeps it in his pocket.

Check Your Progress


1. Who takes care of the grave in the house?
2. What do Imran and Fayyaz find when they visit the house again?
3. What does Imran take away from the hands of the murdered boy?

Chapter 5
From the fifth chapter the solution to the mystery begins to unravel. Imran goes to a night
club called Tip Top Nightclub. There he meets the Deputy Director of the Intelligence
Bureau who had been his father’s class fellow. He exchanges a few words then goes on to sit
with Lady Jehangir, whom he had once dated previously. For a significant time, he indulges
in a flirtatious conversation with Lady Jehangir and then manages to make his way into her

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home. At her home, there occur some funny scenes between Lady Jehangir and Imran, and
then they go to sleep in separate rooms.

Check Your Progress


1. Where does Imran go at night?
2. Whom does Imran meet at the Tip Top Nightclub?
3. How does Imran make his way into Lady Jehangir’s house?

Chapter 6
In chapter 6, we come to know the reason for Imran’s visit to the Tip Top nightclub. He had
already known that Sir Jehangir, Lady Jehangir’s husband, was not in town. When Imran was
sure that Lady Jehnagir was sleeping soundly, he enters Sir Jehangir’s library very stealthily.
There he discovers that the piece of the paper that he had procured from the dead boy’s hand
had the same stamp as that of Sir Jehangir’s letterhead. This stamp was the insignia of Sir
Jehangir’s ancestors and their services during the Mughal period. He then rearranges the
papers and leaves the library. There seemed to be a relation between the murdered boy and
Sir Jehangir and Imran starts thinking about it. After returning to his home, he again goes to
the house of murder. In the village he meets a man from the family of the person who had
sold the building to Judge sahib’s friend. This man reveals that Ayaz sahib had bought the
building from them eight years ago. Just before he died, he had transferred the house legally
to his friend, the Judge Sahib. Although Ayaz Sahib had lived in the building for three years,
no one in the village knew much about him. He however had a servant, who looked after a
mysterious grave in the building and still lived in the front part of the building. Here, Imran
gets to know there was also a mysterious grave and the servant looked after it. On enquiring
about the grave, he gets to know that that grave was suddenly discovered by Ayaz sahib when
he had a dream about it. The original owners of the building had no knowledge of this grave.
Imran also gets to know that the room in which the murdered bodies were found were
plastered by Ayaz sahib himself. Imran then goes to talk to the grave keeper. The grave
keeper reveals to him that one day the Judge Sahib’s daughter Rabia had brought a man to the
room where the murder had occurred, and two days later the murdered body was found.

Check Your Progress


1. What did Imran find in Lady Jehangir’s home?
2. Who was the original owner of the building?
3. What did the grave-keeper tell Imran about Judge Sahib’s daughter, Rabia?

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Chapter 7 & 8
Chapter 7 is very light hearted. Imran and Fayyaz exchange a few words where Imran
expresses his desire to meet the Judge Sahib to solve the murder mystery. Chapter 8 begins
with the pursuit of solving the case. Imran and Fayyaz go to the Judge sahib’s house. Rabia,
the Judge’s daughter, is also present. Imran and Fayyaz question the Judge sahib on how the
house was passed on to him from Ayaz. He states that he met Ayaz some thirty years back in
very strange circumstances. One day, while studying law at Oxford University, the Judge
Sahib had got into a fight with an Englishman due to some misunderstanding. This fight
occurred in the East End of London, where men were quite uncivilized. The fight between
Judge sahib and the Englishman got ugly. Suddenly, a man tore from the crowd to save Judge
sahib, and that was Ayaz. That was how they met for the first time. Seeing Ayaz, the
Englishmen fled, as if a wolf had barged into a flock of sheep. That was the beginning of
their friendship but he never got to know anything about Ayaz’s personal life. When Fayyaz
comments that he was a saint, which was believed by the villagers as well, the Judge sahib
replies that he does not believe this. He maintains that though Ayaz was a good man, he was
not a saint. The conversation with Judge sahib ends, and Fayyaz and Imran take their leave.
On the way-out Imran spots Rabia, who is heading somewhere in her car. He requests Rabia
to give him a lift. In the car, after a bit of light hearted conversation, he asks Rabia where she
was on the night of fourteenth. Rabia gets a bit flustered with this question as she did not
expect Imran to have any knowledge about it. They stop to have a drink at Café Nebraska
where Rabia recounts the entire incident to Imran. She tells him that two months previously
she had met a man at Sir Jehangir’s birthday party. The man had taken the keys to the house
from Rabia, got duplicate keys made and then returned them to Rabia on the eve of the
fifteenth. She then reveals that she met him at Tip Top Nightclub.

Check Your Progress


1. Under what circumstances did the Judge Sahib come in contact with Ayaz?
2. What does Imran ask Rabia in the car?
3. How was Rabia involved in the murder case?

Chapter 9
Now that Imran had crucial pieces of information about the murder, he started re-arranging
these pieces in his mind, in order to deduce the motive and the perpetrator behind the crime.
He started to wonder what possible connection Sir Jehangir might have in this matter. As
Imran was brooding over this, Rabia suddenly comes and tells him that the man who got
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Rabia in this mess had just entered a bar. Imran then asks Rabia to leave and follows the man
into the bar. He sits at another table, opposite to that man. A while later a second man comes
and sits with the first man. Imran was clearly able to overhear their conversation. The two
talked about how everything was becoming a mess. They talked about how they needed to
finish a task today. Having gathered all this information, Imran calls up Fayyaz to tell him
that a police patrol must be around the house of murder within the next one hour. He again
goes to eavesdrop on the two men’s conversation. In their conversation, they keep referring to
an old man. The two men then leave in a car and Imran follows them in another taxi. They
stop at an alley and enter. For a while, Imran loses them but then he sees an old man and
instinctively follows him in a desolate alley. Imran sees the man entering a house. He reaches
the house too and as he was pressing his ears to hear the conversation, two men suddenly
open the door and pull Imran inside. He starts acting like a fool. He is taken into a room
where seven men are sitting. The old man seemed to be the head of this gang. Imran
continues to behave like a stupid fool. As soon as the men try to catch him, he pulls out a doll
from his pocket, presses the doll’s tummy and yellow smoke comes gushing out. Due to the
smoke everyone starts coughing and become unconscious. Imran then hits the electric lamp
and the place is plunged into darkness. Imran quickly grabs the old man’s bag, which he had
been eyeing, and runs away from there. He somehow manages to get out of the house, takes a
taxi and heads out to his home.

Check Your Progress


1. What conversation did Imran overhear between the two men?
2. How did Imran escape from the criminals?
3. What did Imran take away from the old man?

Chapter 10
Chapter 10 reveals the murder of another young boy and his body is found just some distance
from the house of murder. The dead man is wearing leather pants and beige jacket, he is the
same man that Imran had earlier followed from the bar. The man seems to have been shot
with a gun to his right temple, but the village people deny hearing any gunshot. Fayyaz sets
out for Imran’s home. When he reaches there, Imran again teases Fayyaz with his nonsensical
banter. Then later gives him the bag that he had taken from the gang the previous night. On
examining the papers, Fayyaz reveals that these papers belonged to the Foreign Office.
Fayyaz then mentions that these papers were stolen seven years ago from a responsible
officer of the Foreign Office. He was murdered and these papers were stolen from him.

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Along with that officer, another man was also travelling, but somehow that man got lucky
and escaped. But no one was ever able to find that man and it was assumed that he was killed
too. Imran then tells Fayyaz to take the leather bags and papers while he tends to some other
work.

Check Your Progress


1. What happens at the beginning of Chapter 10?
2. What does Fayyaz say about the papers given to him by Imran?

Chapter 11 and Chapter 12


Imran comes to Fayyaz’s house in a very exasperated state. For a while he jokes with Fayyaz
then shows him the threatening letter that he had received.
Imran: if the leather handbag or its contents reach the police, then you’ll be in trouble.
It would be better if you return those, otherwise you will soon meet your death. Meet
us near the Race Course tonight at eleven o’clock. Bring the handbag with you. Come
alone. Otherwise, even if you bring along five thousand men, our bullet will find your
chest. (Safi 94).
They both decide to go the house of murder. Imran tells Fayyaz to keep the guardian of the
grave busy in a conversation while he searches the house. Imran searches the entire house
while Fayyaz engages the grave keeper in a conversation. Suddenly, they hear a strange cry.
The guardian immediately turns around. Behind him a large space could be seen in the wall.
Fayyaz is surprised to see it. He had come to this room several times but he had never
imagined that this room had a secret door. He went into the dark space and it felt to him as he
was walking in a basement. After walking for a while, he comes across a stair-case and he
starts climbing it. When he reaches the top, he finds himself rising out of the grave of a
martyr. The tombstone lay open like the lid of a box. He finds himself in the room where the
murders had happened. The grave keeper starts shouting that they had destroyed him. One of
the walls of the room had three knives attached to it, which were five inches apart from each
other. As Fayyaz moves forward to see it, he sees that there was a large compartment through
which the knives disappeared. Suddenly, the grave-keeper hits Fayyaz and runs away. He
jumps into the grave and disappears. At this point Imran enters and tells Fayyaz that he had
mistakenly pressed a lever, which led to the discovery of the secret door. Imran, who was

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looking for the rest of the papers of Foreign Office, was able to procure them as they were
hidden in the house.

Check Your Progress


1. What are the contents of the letter?
2. What does Fayyaz see in the grave-keeper’s room?
3. What does Imran tell Fayyaz?
4. What did Imran and Fayyaz find in the house?

Chapter 13 and Chapter 14


In chapter 13, Imran gets a threat call, wherein the speaker commands him to bring the
leather bag with the papers and hand them over to him at the Race Course. Imran doesn’t take
the conversation with this man seriously and makes fun of him, and also demands ten
thousand rupees in exchange for the handbag. He then says that he won’t hand over the
handbag at Race Course but at Tip Top Nightclub. In Chapter 14, Imran goes to the Tip Top
Nightclub with the handbag where he greets Lady Jehangir. He then goes to the man who is
waiting at a table for the handbag. Imran hands over the bag to the man, takes the money and
tells the man to move out quickly.

Check Your Progress


1. What do the criminals tell Imran to do?
2. Where does Imran agree to hand over the handbag?
3. Who does he meet at Tip Top Nightclub?

Chapters 15, 16 and 17


The man comes out of the night club and sits in the car with his friends and opens the bag. To
his utter surprise and dismay, as soon as he opens the bag, three frogs jump out, and there is a
commotion in the car. The men are annoyed at the audacity of Imran and decide to take
revenge on him for having treated them with such disdain. Imran is certain that the men will
come back to the nightclub to look for him. Soon after the exchange, he calls Fayyaz to come
and pick him up immediately. As he waits for Fayyaz, he sees the old man entering the club
from whom he had taken the bag. The old man comes to Imran and digs in the revolver’s
barrel into him and threatens him. He asks Imran about the papers. With a sudden unexpected
move, Imran punches the old man and snatches the revolver from him. Fayyaz and his men
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enter at this moment and capture the old man and his two accomplices. Imran pulls off the
beard from the old man, and his true identity is revealed as Sir Jehangir, who was a foreign
spy.
In the final chapter, all the loose ends are neatly tied up. The person accompanying
the Foreign Office secretary, who was killed, was Ayaz. He had half the papers and the
secretary had the other half of the papers. The criminals were only able to get half of the
papers and since then were in the pursuit of other half of the papers. Ayaz lays out a plan to
get hold of the men who had stolen the papers. He buys the house in the village, discovers a
grave and lays out a fool proof mechanism. But the servant dies unexpectedly. Ayaz then
buries the servant and disguises himself as the servant. Before this he had legally transferred
the house to Judge Sahib and got himself a room. Soon, he starts luring those men to come to
the house. He made elaborate effort to make the criminals believe that the papers were hidden
there. The papers were actually in the secret wall compartment. As soon as someone came
close to the compartment, Ayaz would make ghostly noises from beneath the tombstone. As
soon as the men got away in fear, the mechanism, set by Ayaz, would start functioning,
wherein three blades would pierce the man’s back. He did all this just to capture the chief, but
in his scheme of things, he had not expected to contend with Imran. It is Imran who gets the
papers from the criminals and also manages to capture them. The novel ends on a humorous
note with Imran fooling once again with Ayaz.

Check Your Progress


1. What is found in the bag when the criminals open it?
2. What is the true identity of the old man?
3. What is the true identity of the grave-keeper?
4. What was Ayaz’s plan to get hold of the men who had stolen the papers?

6. CHARACTERS

Imran: The protagonist of the novel is Imran, who is a detective by profession. He is a


genius and has excellent skills of observation, which help him in solving complicated
mysteries. His eccentricities hold similarities to that of Sherlock Holmes. Because he is a
detective, he is conscious of not revealing his true identity and acts as fool so as to mislead
people into thinking that he is just a stupid fellow. However, in reality he is a very intelligent
man. Imran in true sense can be considered as a hero because he always lets the truth win. He

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might seem a bit eccentric, but he is an honest man with a kind heart. While he jokes around
and makes fun of people around him, but he does all this in a light vein and never hurts
anyone. He also acts as a rescuer to the damsel in distress, for instance he helps Rabia from a
distressful situation and doesn’t let her get involved with the case. While he jokes and flirts
with woman, Imran never comes out as a womanizer. He is a loveable character with
excellent wit, great sense of humor and high level of intelligence.
Fayyaz: Fayyaz is another important character in the novel. Imran and Fayyaz are excellent
friends as well. Their relationship can be seen as being parallel to that of Sherlock Holmes
and Dr Watson, wherein Sherlock Holmes is Imran and Dr Watson is Fayyaz. He is the only
one who knows the true identity of Imran, and, therefore, tolerates his eccentric behavior.
Fayyaz is also an intelligent, wise man who responsibly carries off his duties and leaves no
stone unturned in catching the real culprits. Fayyaz and Imran share a very deep-rooted bond
of friendship, which reflects in their care and concern for each other.
Rabia: Although Rabia holds a small role in the novel, yet she is a significant character as
she is the catalyst in the plot structure. She is the one who hands over the key to one of the
criminals. However, she comes out as an innocent and simple girl.
Judge Sahib: Judge Sahib’s significance as a character primarily lies in the fact that he is the
legal owner of the house where the murders occur. However, in the novel he acts as a crucial
character as he helps in finding the true identity of Ayaz.
Ayaz: Ayaz is the secret agent who used to work for Foreign Office. Throughout the novel, it
is thought that Ayaz is dead but he is the one who is disguised as the guardian of the grave.
He is an important character as he is the one who orchestrates the two murders.

7. SUMMING UP

Detective fiction falls under the category of popular literature, in which a crime is introduced,
an unusually intelligent detective investigates the crime, and the criminal is revealed. In most
of the stories the identity of the criminal is unexpected and startling. What holds our interest
is the manner in which the clues are gathered by the detective and how they are pieced
together to solve the crime. In our analysis of the novel The House of Fear we have seen how
the various elements of this genre operate:
• There is a double murder in a vacant locked building, and both victims have three
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• Imran is brought in to solve this rather unusual crime, where there is no apparent
motive.
• Although Imran most times plays the fool and exhibits odd, eccentric behavior, this is
only a mask. Behind that mask lies a sharp mind that is adept at collecting various
clues, finding a motive for the crime, and ultimately catching the criminal.
Work Citations
Safi, Ibn-E. The House of Fear. Trans. Bilal Tanveer. Noida: Vintage, 2009.

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Unit-III

4. CRIMSON CITY BY MADHULIKA LIDDLE


Hema Sen

STRUCTURE

1.1 Introduction
1.1.1 Check Your Progress
1.2 Learning Objectives
1.3 Plot Summary
1.3.1 Check Your Progress
1.4 Textual Analysis
1.4.1 About the Title
1.4.2 Context and Setting
1.4.3 Check Your Progress
1.4.4 Crime and Morality
1.4.5 Check Your Progress
1.4.6 Religious Co-existence
1.4.7 Check Your Progress
1.5 Significant Characters in the novel
1.5.1 Muzaffar Jang
1.5.2 Khan Sahib
1.5.3 Suraj Bhan
1.6 Representation of Women
1.6.1 Ameena Bibi
1.6.2 Shireen
1.6.3 Nilofer
1.6.4 Check Your Progress
1.7 Summing up

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1.1 INTRODUCTION

Crimson City is a historical detective fiction novel set in seventeenth century Delhi written by
the Delhi-based novelist Madhulika Liddle. According to https://madhulikaliddle.com/about/
her first historical detective fiction novel was titled The Englishman’s Cameo and was
published by Hachette in the year 2009.She is also known for her other four-book historical
series The Delhi Quartet.
Crimson City has been included in the Generic Elective paper ‘Genre Fiction’ in an
attempt to introduce students to the category of detective fiction as an important sub-category
of genre fiction. Genre fiction, as the term implies refers to various categories of literature
and each conforms to several commonly agreed upon characteristics of that particular genre.
These characteristics can include things like character types, narrative structure and literary
motifs. In other words, the simple distinguishing feature of genre fiction is that it has a clearly
identifiable formulaic pattern and all examples of a particular category of genre fiction will
more or less stick to the said formula. Standard categories of genre fiction include romance,
science fiction, horror, fantasy and thriller among others. At times, we also get genres such as
Young Adult fiction popularly known as YA which while being understood as a sub-category
of children’s literature also borrows from and often overlaps with the fantasy genre. Well
known examples from the YA genre include The Vampire Academy series and The Hunger
Games series.
The term genre fiction is often also used to describe popular literature. The very
formulaic nature of genre fiction makes it very appealing to audiences who are interested in
literature but not looking to get into what is traditionally considered classic literature. Often,
genre fiction lends itself to much greater mass appeal than other types of literature and is thus
also known as popular literature. It is also worth remembering that while for a long time the
binary of classic literature (what is often considered high literature) vs. popular literature was
upheld, this has been challenged in recent times. The idea that popular literature/genre fiction
is somehow lower or inferior than high literature as it relies upon certain formulaic patterns
of writing and mass consumption is being challenged these days. Genre fiction is being seen
as a category of literature that is no less than high literature like that of William Shakespeare
or T.S. Eliot.
In so far as Crimson City is concerned, one should keep in mind that this novel is a
variation on the genre of detective fiction which in itself is part of the mystery writing genre.
It clearly has a detective protagonist in the form of Muzaffar Jang who when faced with

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multiple mysteries in the narrative resolves all of them successfully. While keeping to the
conventions of detective fiction, the author has introduced a slight variation in terms of the
setting in the text. The text is set in seventeenth century Delhi which makes it more
interesting and engaging for the readers by introducing them to both the everyday and the
unusual in late medieval Delhi. It also has other features that are fairly common in detective
fiction such as blood and gore of murder and a cat-and-mouse chase of the killer that we see
towards the end of the narrative. All of these are discussed in the textual analysis section.

1.1.1 Check Your Progress


• What do you understand by the term “genre fiction”?
• What do you think are the attributes of Crimson City that make it a part
of genre fiction?

1.2 LEARNING OBJECTIVES

• To understand how the evolving categories of genre fiction engage with contemporary
social and cultural realities.
• To understand the strategies of narrative and themes this specific genre of fiction uses.

1.3 PLOT SUMMARY

There are multiple narrative threads in the text that together constitute the text but the
primary one consists of the inter-linked murders of the merchant Aadil and the brothers
Basharat and Parvez. The narrative gradually unfurls the motivation for these towards the end
of the text but for ease in understanding, the plot shall be explained in a chronological
manner here. Parvez’s wife Nilofer has good reason to seek an end to his life as he more or
less coerced her into marrying him after implicating her brother Shamsuddin in a false case of
theft. This, in turn is because even earlier in the narrative, he has behaved improperly with
her by entering stealthily into the private women’s quarters and prying upon her in a state of
semi-undress. All this information is provided to Muzaffar, Khan Sahib and Suraj Bhan by
Ghulam Mustafa who is an acquaintance of Parvez’s from the time he lived in Surat. Assisted
by her maid Ameena Bibi, Nilofer tries her best to help her brother after she realises, he is the
one who in his quest for vengeance has accidentally murdered both Aadil and Basharat
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The narrative introduces us to Aadil’s murder through the figure of Khan Sahib who
is going to the murder-site accompanied by Muzaffar. The primary narrative thread keeps
popping up in the middle of other secondary threads in the narrative through important
incidents such as the disappearance of Ameena, Shireen’s visit to Nilofer and the servant girl
Ismat’s testimony but the thread is taken up again to be resolved only after the secondary
mysteries in the text have been resolved. Another reason for the delay in the main mystery
being resolved in the novel is Muzaffar’s deliberate insistence on keeping away from any
thing that can be seen as him encroaching upon the kotwali’s jurisdiction after Khan Sahib’s
strict warning to him.
Eventually Muzaffar’s worry about Khan Sahib regarding the Abdul Jabbar case
makes him go to Khan Sahib where the latter is investigating Parvez’s murder. Looking at the
similarity in Aadil, Basharat and Parvez’s murder, the two of them start to realise the nature
of things and how Nilofer may have been working to protect her brother. Using Shireen they
gradually plan out a trap for Nilofer and Shamsuddin who are finally apprehended at a sarai
just outside Ajmeri gate.
The other two secondary narratives in the text are the kidnapping of
Lakshminarayan’s son Nandu and the murder of Abdul Jabbar; the bath-house owner. Of
these two, the narrative concerning Lakshminarayan occurs earlier in the text and Muzaffar
gets entangled in it when Aadil’s clerk Suraj Bhan comes to him seeking help for
Lakshminarayan. This time Muzaffar solves the mystery by recognising that the threatening
letter was attached to a brick that was not thrown from the outside but dropped by Subhadra
within the house to give an impression of it being flung from the outside. Realising that
Subhadra is an accomplice, he also puts two and two together to figure out that she drugged
Nandu in order to allow the kidnapper to carry away the child after climbing into the house
through the terrace from the narrow lane that runs parallel to it. Jagannath being the prime
instigator of the crime also becomes obvious once Muzaffar recognises that the amount that
the kidnapper has asked for is exactly the same amount that he returned a few days earlier as
part of an outstanding debt to Lakshminarayan. The only one who could have known that
Lakshminarayan had that exact amount at his disposal was Jagannath himself. Finally, the
whole story falls into place when we along with Muzaffar realise that Jagannath is a cloth
merchant so it would be expected that he would have acquaintances in Katra Neel or the
street of dyers one of whom he must have enlisted to write the threatening letter. The letter
with its faint sliver of blue dye along the edge is what makes Muzaffar realise that the
kidnapper is connected to Katra Neel in some way.

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Finally, the narrative concerning Abdul Jabbar is the one that Muzaffar finds himself
in when he along with his friend Akram tries to take a bath and relax a bit after a long and
tiring day. He also has an additional interest in solving the mystery here after he is warned by
his friend Akram that failure to catch the culprits could result in difficulties for his brother-in-
law who is also the kotwal of Delhi. He does eventually manage to figure out that the killer
and his accomplice are the servant Faraz and a relative out to take revenge for Faraz’s son
who died after being whipped by Abdul Jabbar as punishment for running across a horse’s
path.

1.3.1 Check Your Progress


• Who is Muzaffar Jung?
• Who is Khan Sahib and what is his relationship to Jung?
• What is the primary narrative thread about?
• What happens to Lakshminarayan and how does Muzaffar help?

1.4 TEXTUAL ANALYSIS

1.4.1 About the Title


The title of the text acts as an anchor for the reader by providing him with a clue about the
nature of the narrative even before one has actually begun to read the story. The city of
Shahjanabad is described as jaw-droppingly gorgeous but at the same time it is permeated by
a sense of ill-foreboding and the seamy underside of the city is always a source of anxiety for
Khan Sahab, Muzaffar’s brother-in-law as we get to know within the first few pages of the
story. Soon enough, as the reader sees this particular assertion about the nature of Delhi is
substantiated by the number of crimes that come to Muzaffar and Khan Sahib as challenges.
The violent murders that are described in gory detail make the title quite apt for a narrative
that describes crime in a city that is crimson with blood spilled of both innocent and guilty
people.
1.4.2 Context and Setting
The author builds up a world in the novel where morality is mostly in the grey to put it in the
simplest manner possible. No individual or the circumstances that they are involved is an
idealistic example of moral perfection in the text. We see this from the very first page of
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ageing emperor presides over a court filled with courtiers who are busy either trying to mock
each other or trying to curry favour with the emperor. If one takes the emperor as the leader
of his people, then his physical frailty can easily be read as a metaphorical representation of
the moral frailty of his people.
Our protagonist Muzaffar noticing the Muslim courtiers being nasty about the Hindu
one paying respects to the emperor has a discussion regarding the role of religious bias which
has been discussed in a section 1.4.6 of this material. Though it is important for us to note
that Muzaffar’s discussion with his brother-in-law isn’t too optimistic either. He is merely
told that prejudiced people exist everywhere in the world and that too much can’t be done or
changed about their ways of thinking or existing. Khan Sahib’s lack of concern can perhaps
be explained by the world-weariness of a man who has seen too much of the ugliness of
humanity in his role as the Kotwal of one of the most important cities of the world in the
seventeenth century. But his worry, as the reader soon discovers, is not laid to rest so easily.
Muzaffar notices his brother-in-law worried and on questioning the latter says that the city of
Dilli is “pure evil”. (Liddle: 13). He goes on to make the rather ominous statement, “When
the empire is tottering on the brink of collapse, it is hardly to be expected that its capital city
will flourish.” (Liddle: 13) This is said about the Mughal military campaign that is currently
being led by the Shahzada Aurangzeb in Bijapur in the Deccan region. Khan sahib is of the
opinion that the entire military enterprise is a waste of financial and physical resources,
something that the empire can ill-afford during these times. This entire conversation is being
carried by the two brothers-in-law in the beautiful Chandni Chowk area, the central artery of
Shahjanabad. While the text specifically points out the beauty of the marketplace and
energetic and happy youths peopling the area, the reader cannot shake off the sense that all of
the wealth and splendour of the capital city of the Mughal empire can crumble any moment
given the underlying moral decrepitude and the external threats to it.

1.4.3 Check Your Progress


• How does the author build up the setting, i.e., the city of Dilli for the reader?
• How is the title of the novel relevant?

1.4.4 Crime and Morality


Each of the three crimes in the text that Muzaffar gets himself involved in, knowingly or
unknowingly all point to different aspects of the moral decay of the Mughal empire slowly
inching towards its twilight years. However, this moral decay is not so simple as one would
assume it to be. The author herself provides a key for figuring out the morality of crime in the

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text. The following extract is taken from a section of the text where Muzaffar tries to hunt
down a leopard that is trying to attack a deer with fawn so that she may feed her own cubs.
Khan Sahib stops him just in time and says the following to him,
“‘It is not always wise to assume that the predator is always guilty or the prey always
the victim,’ he had said. ‘This world moves in strange and unpredictable ways. Each of us,
human or animal, can be the prey and the predator by turn. Now this, now that. And there is
often little one can do about it. The wise man does not interfere unless he can foresee every
outcome of his actions.’
‘Surely that is impossible,’ Muzaffar had mumbled. ‘To foresee what may happen?’
‘Exactly. Which is why it is better to remain aloof.’ Khan Sahib had looked up,
squinting at a bird of prey that wheeled slowly overhead in ever-expanding circles. ‘And
remember one thing, Muzaffar: just because I say something, it does not necessarily mean
that I am right.’ He had glanced back down at him and smiled, a rare smile of genuine
affection. ‘Let no one dictate your every action. And,’ he had added, as he moved on again,
‘stand by your decisions, whether they turn out to be right or wrong.’” (Liddle 40)
As we shall see, Muzaffar will use these words to guide his own actions in the
narrative even when he runs the risk of severing his relations with Khan Sahib. But the moral
lesson in the story of the leopard and the deer is not just important for Muzaffar but even for
the reader. Like this story, the crimes in the text make it hard to simply sympathise with the
victim and vilify the criminal as a general rule.
The very first murder in the narrative; that of the merchant Aadil is a tragic case of
mistaken identity. Both Muzaffar and his brother-in-law initially understand the murder as a
robbery attempt gone wrong. But looking at all the expensive cloth left behind, this
explanation does not make sense. Given that Aadil is described by his clerk Suraj Bhan as
more or less a self-contained man with few enemies, the answer to the murder is not easy.
The murder-mystery is introduced to the protagonist Muzaffar Jang and then left hanging for
a long time until it’s resolved in connection with the murders of Basharat and Parvez.
The three sets of murders are interlinked in the text, as the reader eventually
discovers. Seeking revenge Nilofer’s brother Shamsudddin has come looking for Parvez, but
in a tragic case of mistaken identities that takes place not once but twice in the narrative --
first Aadil and then Basharat are mistaken for Parvez by Shamsuddin and murdered. Aadil is
mistakenly murdered as he lives in a house that was earlier occupied by Basharat and Parvez.
This is information that Muzaffar receives from Ameena but is only able to make sense of
much later in the narrative.
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Ameena who is Shamsuddin’s accomplice points him towards Aadil’s house


expecting Parvez to be found there. She of course does not realise until its too late that she
has pointed him towards the wrong house. Aadil’s murder in many ways is an unlucky and
tragic mistake that deprives an innocent man of his life.
However, it is in the primary narrative thread where one really sees the morally
ambiguous tone of the narrative, that of the interlinked murders of the merchant Aadil and the
brothers Basharat and Parvez. The narrative proper begins with Aadil’s murder and then
pauses on that front moving to other narrative threads such as those of the sahukar
Lakshminarayan and the hamam owner Abdul Jabbar. It is after Parvez’s murder that Khan
Sahib, Muzaffar and Suraj Bhan hear from Ghulam Mustafa what can be termed as the full
explanation behind the murder of these three men. Parvez as we soon realise is not just a
lecherous man who has forced Nilofer to marry him but also cruel as he cleverly conspires to
have Nilofer’s brother Shamsuddin put in jail for crimes that he did not commit. This is
clearly done so that Shamsuddin who knows Parvez’s true nature can create no further
obstacles for him. While the reader certainly feels the weight of the gross injustice that has
been done to Shamsuddin and Nilofer, it is also important to think about the ethical
justification for the murders of the two innocent men, Aadil and Basharat.
The mystery surrounding the bath-house murder; that of Abdul Jabbar is also a good
example of how the apparent villain is not always the actual villain in the story. It takes
considerable effort on Muzaffar’s part accompanied by his friend Akram to discover that the
murder victim is not as innocent as he initially seemed. The watchman at the gate to Abdul
Jabbar’s haveli confides to a disguised Muzaffar the extent of Abdul Jabbar’s cruelty which
he has inflicted in the past upon his servants and continues to do so with impunity. While the
gatekeeper tells tales such as a servant being gelded and another having ripe lemons squeezed
into his eyes, the one that is most horrifying is the story about a servant’s son being whipped
to death for startling a horse by running across its path. A man such as this; who is seemingly
well-connected and wealthy and has no fear of the repercussions of his actions will continue
to do so until he is deliberately stopped. In fact, as Muzaffar discovers this last incident is
what motivates the dead boy’s father Faraaz to plan and successfully execute Abdul Jabbar’s
murder in the bath house. Muzaffar successfully unravels the mystery behind Abdul Jabbar’s
murder but at the same time does not hand over the murderer to the law enforcement
mechanism. It is as Khan Sahib remarks to him that Muzaffar has good reason for protecting
the murderer here. This tells the reader that at the very least, Muzaffar feels conflicted about
handing over Faraz and his accomplice to the Kotwali.

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Apart from Abdul Jabbar’s murder, the other criminal incident in the text that
interrupts the inter-linked murders of Aadil, Basharat and Pavez is first the threat and then the
actual kidnapping of Lakshminarayan’s son, Nandu. This crime is where we see Muzaffar
really using his observation and deductive skills to solve what is essentially a variation of the
locked room mystery that of the child Nandu disappearing from what is mostly a completely
locked house. The mystery is partly resolved when Muzaffar recognises that the maid
Subhadra who is always with Nandu is an accomplice. Also, the kidnapper goes into the
house by going through the lane that runs beside the house and then climbs up to the terrace.
He also uses his observational powers to prove that the letter with its faint blue
smudge comes from the Katra Neel or the street of indigo-dyers. He also puts two and two
together to recognise that the merchant Jagannath is the one who has been threatening
Lakshminarayan with Nandu’s kidnapping in order to get back the ten thousand rupees that
he had recently paid him in order to pay another merchant to whom a similar amount is due.
Lakshminarayan’s story is also interesting for another reason. It is here that the author
provides Muzaffar with justification for meddling in matters that his brother-in-law Khan
Sahib has quite expressly forbidden him from. Lakshminarayan outlines quite clearly in his
narrative his reasons for not going to the thana and requesting Muzaffar for assistance. Given
that only a threat has been made and no crime has been specifically committed,
Lakshminarayan correctly anticipates that the thana would not be too interested in his case.
The threat of Nandu being kidnapped falls squarely into the grey area which consists of
crimes that do not fall into the list of the thana’s responsibilities. In many ways,
Lakshminarayan’s case justifies the need for individuals like Muzaffar Jang and the role that
they play in society; that of fulfilling responsibilities that societally authorised guardians of
justice are unable to due to various reasons.

1.4.5 Check Your Progress


• As per your understanding, do you think Muzaffar is justified in helping
Lakshminarayan instead of directing him straightaway to the thana?
• Do you think Shamsuddin, Nilofer and Ameena are morally justified in their
murders of Aadil, Basharat and Parvez?
• Why does Muzaffar take no action against Faraz?

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1.4.6 Religious Co-Existence


This theme is introduced very early in the text in the first chapter itself. The author does not
hesitate at all in portraying the prejudices that certain nobles at the court harbour towards the
Hindus one of whom at the moment is paying obeisance to the emperor presumably as a
precursor to seeking favour from him. Our protagonist Muzaffar who prides himself on his
liberal stance towards religion takes exception to this and does not take long to complain to
his brother-in-law about the injustice. His brother-in-law responds to him by saying that the
world is filled with prejudiced people and that they don’t change no matter what. The reader
gets the feeling that this maybe the author’s own point of view too. Those that are unwilling
to change cannot be changed. His brother-in-law’s voice comes out as the voice of reason
here.
While Khan Sahib is reasonable and at the same time resigned to the presence of
prejudice in people, we have also had characters in the text who yet provide hope that not
everyone is filled with prejudice. The clerk Suraj Bhan is one such character. Both he and
Muzaffar are similar in terms of their outlook towards religion. Muzaffar hesitates to offer
him food when Suraj Bhan visits him in connection with Lakshminarayan’s case. But Suraj
Bhan immediately puts him at ease by saying that he is unlike the more hide-bound
practitioners of his religion. It is also worth paying attention to the fact that Suraj Bhan trusts
Muzaffar enough to come to him with a personal problem unconnected to Aadil’s murder.
There are more incidents regarding the same theme of tolerance. Muzaffar does not
hesitate to upbraid his wife Shireen for her attitude towards the Hindus when she is surprised
by news of his interaction with the clerk Suraj Bhan and Lakshminarayan. This results in a
somewhat serious dispute between the two with Muzaffar pointing how bizarre Muslim
religious practices look from a Hindu perspective in response to her saying that the Hindus
are a strange community with their weird ways.
But Muzaffar in turn, receives an important lesson in having his liberalism tempered
by the time he spends with the money-lender Lakshminarayan, first preventing and later
rescuing the latter’s son Nandu. He returns home late in the day on an empty stomach after
having solved the mystery of Nandu’s kidnapping. While eating he has to explain to his wife
in a somewhat abashed manner his reasons for remaining hungry till so late in the day,
namely that Lakshminarayan while expressing profound gratitude to him had not offered any
food to him because of conservative religious practices. These two incidents balance out the
picture of religious liberalism and religious conservatism depicted in the text.

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The text as a whole provides a complex and nuanced picture of the religious fabric of
society. On one hand, we have individuals such as Muzaffar and Suraj Bhan who are the
torch-bearers of a certain kind of religious progressivism while on the other hand we have
also highly prejudiced individuals such as the courtiers who do not hesitate to openly display
their prejudice. We also see individuals such as Khan Sahib who while non-partisan himself
is resigned to the existence of prejudice in others. Muzaffar’s wife Shireen is also an example
of an individual who while not biased against the Hindus is quick to make assumptions about
them due to her relative lack of familiarity with them.
The final religious note of the text is the scene with the poet-mystic Sarmad making
blasphemous statements sitting on the steps of the Jama Masjid with Muzaffar and Suraj
Bhan watching him among many others. Both Muzaffar and Suraj Bhan fervently hope that
the religiously tolerant Dara Shukoh’s ascent to the Mughal throne will put an end to people’s
religious prejudices.

1.4.7 Check Your Progress


• Critically comment on the strategies used by Liddle to represent religious
belief in the text.
• The text does not blindly support either religious conservatism or religious
conservatism. Justify with examples from the text to substantiate your
answer.

1.5 SIGNIFICANT CHARACTERS IN THE NOVEL

1.5.1 Muzaffar Jang


He is who we as readers might understand to be the protagonist or the hero of the narrative.
Aside from being an authorial spokesperson for political and religious liberalism in the text,
he is also built up very much in the tradition of the detective hero from the European Golden-
Age of Detective Fiction. A lot like Sherlock Holmes, he uses his sharp observation and
deductive skills to solve the cases of murder and kidnapping that he is faced with in the text.
His observational and deductive skills are on clearest display when he is confronting the
threat of Lakshminarayan’s son Nandu being kidnapped.
He is also the moral and ethical compass of the text in many ways. As has been
discussed in detail earlier, Muzaffar is the text’s standout spokesperson for religious
tolerance. He is also clever enough, more than any other character in the text to recognise that
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the victim is not always innocent. This is why he actively helps the murderer to evade the law
in the Abdul Jabbar case. It is also important to remember that while Muzaffar is the
protagonist of the novel, he is also not above making mistakes. His ideas on religious
tolerance receive a good tempering when he is not offered food at Lakshminarayan’s house
after having rescued Nandu. He is also portrayed as unsure of himself at times. Overall,
Muzaffar Jang is realistically characterised as an ethical and clever man who also has his
moments of weakness.
1.5.2 Khan Sahib
Muzaffar’s brother-in-law, Khan Shaib is a functionally important character in the narrative.
As Muzaffar himself informs us, Khan Sahib is the closest thing to a paternal figure he has
ever known. Muzaffar is also introduced to the crimes through him as he is also the Kotwal of
the city. The fact that Muzaffar very often is quicker at understanding the cause-and-effect
relationship of the crimes is a sore spot for his brother-in-law. One does not have to go too far
to understand the reason for this. Muzaffar’s popularity with many people, including those at
his local thana among others in the city is the obvious reason. The risk of his clever bother-in-
law outshining him is probably never far from Khan Sahib’s mind. This is the only reason
that the otherwise good relationship between the two brothers-in-law sours for a while in the
narrative.
All of this helps the reader to understand Khan Sahib as a flawed character. While being
prone to fits of jealousy and insecurity he has always tried to do right by his young brother-
in-law. Initially of course Muzaffar ascribes Khan Sahib’s grumpiness to the long list of
duties that the Kotwal of Dilli has to fulfil.
“Muzaffar was well aware that the post of the Kotwal of Dilli was a coveted position,
and yet one to be feared too. It was a post that could be exploited by the corrupt; a
previous Kotwal had been hounded out of the city, disgraced publicly and flogged, for
having misappropriated funds and accepted bribes. On the other hand, it was a post
that came with a barrage of duties, all the way from preventing and investigating
murders and thefts to registering the entry of outsiders, to ensuring shopkeepers used
correct weighing scales, to organizing festivities and illuminations at Eid and Diwali.
To making sure women did not ride horses, slaves did not abscond, and workers were
paid fair wages for their work. It was a ludicrously long and complex list of duties.
If it made Khan Sahib occasionally grumpy, Muzaffar should not be surprised…”
(Liddle:18)

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In the very first chapter, when Muzaffar displays his curiosity to accompany him to Aadil’s
murder, Khan Sahib visibly hesitates. He allows Muzaffar to accompany him but not before
pointedly saying, “… But try and remember that I am the law. I am the official here.”
However, as the reader goes on to see, things take a turn for the worse between the two
before improving. The next time Muzaffar visits Aadil’s residence and helps Suraj Bhan with
taking inventory, he receives a note from his brother-in-law that bluntly tells him not to poke
his nose where it doesn’t belong. Eventually the two reconcile to solve the trio of inter-linked
murders in the text. Khan Sahib is a flawed but affectionate and paternal figure to Muzaffar.
1.5.3 Suraj Bhan
He is introduced to the reader as a competent, methodical and reliable man from the moment
Muzaffar walks upon him and the chowkidar trying to open the lock to Aadil’s house. The
chowkidar takes a while to recover from his surprise but Suraj Bhan is quicker than him.
Muzaffar is also all praise for Suraj Bhan’s methodical approach in searching for anything
missing in Aadil’s house. In fact, Muzaffar impressed by the man’s efficiency joins him in
taking an inventory of the items at Aadil’s house.
“Suraj Bhan had proved as efficient, as wise and canny as Muzaffar had first guessed
him to be. More. Muzaffar was reminded of the conversation he had overheard at the
Diwan-e-Aam. He wondered what those men would have thought of Suraj Bhan.”
(Liddle: 65)
Thematically, Suraj Bhan’s character is also important that he adds to the theme of religious
tolerance in the text. With the exception of Muzaffar, he is the only other character in the text
who upholds this ideal. Other characters such as Shireen struggle with this while Khan Sahib
seems resigned to the existence of religiously prejudiced people. It is significant that the
closing sections of the novel are devoted to Muzaffar and Suraj Bhan standing together and
listening to the poet-mystic Sarmad loudly proclaiming on the steps of the Jama Masjid
“There is no God.” Suraj Bhan is one of the few characters who earns Muzaffar’s respect in
the text for his steady reliability, cleverness and religious liberalism.

1.6 REPRESENTATION OF WOMEN

1.6.1 Ameena Bibi


She is introduced to the reader for the very first time as a woman seemingly lacking in
sophistication and refinement standing outside the murdered merchant Aadil’s house
attempting to satisfy her morbid curiosity. Muzaffar does not take long to recognise her as a

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tough and resilient woman who is also very sharp and has her wits about her. When she is
surprised by Muzaffar in the street outside, her hand immediately tightens on her cane.
As the narrative unfolds, we realise that she is also a very loyal servant to her mistress
Nilofer and will stop at nothing in order to avenge the injustice that has been done by Parvez
to her mistress and her brother Shamsuddin. She is Shamsuddin’s accomplice in the trio of
murders in the text. The reader assumes that she is motivated to aid Shamsuddin in his quest
for vengeance as she has been a guardian figure to the brother-sister duo and feels a strong
sense of affection for them. Along with Shireen and Nilofer she makes up a trio of strong
women characters in the text that the author has painstakingly created.
1.6.2 Shireen
Muzaffar’s wife Shireen is described in the text as a woman who is his equal, both
intellectually and morally. She is also an able companion and guide providing him with help
wherever necessary. She is also an intelligent woman as is evident from the time when she is
able to infer Khan Sahib’s unhappiness at Muzaffar accompanying him to the scene of
Aadil’s murder, merely from Muzaffar’s recounting of his experiences of the day to her. She
also has an important role in the play in getting hold of Shamsuddin and Nilofer towards the
end of the text.
Shireen’s character is also important as part of the discourse on religious pluralism
and tolerance in the text. While a generally affable and quick-witted character, she is
surprised both by Suraj Bhan’s visit to Muzaffar and Muzaffar’s visit to Lakshminarayan.
When Muzaffar questions her, she reveals her implicit assumptions about the Hindus that
only exist due to her relative lack of familiarity with them. When Muzaffar points out the
absurdity of Muslim religious practices from a Hindu perspective, she seems to agree with
him. Yet, at the same time she does not hesitate to express her sympathy for Lakshminarayan
after Muzaffar tells her about Nandu’s kidnapping. Her approach to religious differences, as
she puts it in her own words is to acknowledge differences but not to spurn simple humanity.
Her character can also be seen as an example of the dangers of ignorance and the role it plays
in creating prejudice in the minds of individuals.
1.6.3 Nilofer
Although Liddle’s novel is filled with strong women characters, Nilofer is probably the
strongest of them all. When Shireen initially introduces her to both Muzaffar and the reader,
we are inclined to think that she is a supremely vain woman only concerned with her
appearance and ornamentation. But nothing is further from the truth. As the reader soon
realises, Nilofer and her brother are victims of gross injustice in the text. But that does not
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deter her. In fact, as soon as she realises Shamsuddin is in the city she does everything in her
power to help him avenge both of them and even protects him to the maximum extent
possible. She is even audacious enough to directly challenge Khan Sahib publicly when he
searches her palanquin outside the Ajmeri gate and is unable to find Shamsuddin. The fact
that she cleverly disguises her brother as one of the kahars or palanquin bearers and the two
of them almost manage to escape shows just how determined and resourceful she really is.

1.6.4 Check Your Progress


• Discuss the significance of the female characters in the text.
• Write down short notes on the following characters:
Khan Sahib
Suraj Bhan

1.7 SUMMING UP

As has been discussed in the introduction, genre fiction is marked by its keeping to a set of
standard and formulaic qualities of a particular genre. In the case of detective fiction, these
include characteristics like the presence of character types such as the detective figure who is
also the protagonist. Muzaffar Jang is the protagonist in this text and his sharp intellect and
wit is quite evident just as in the standard detective character type. The companion or the
“Watson figure” is also always present and always plays an important role in the narrative. In
this case it is Khan Sahib who is important as it is through him that Muzaffar is introduced to
the main mystery in the text. While he and Muzaffar have an initial falling out in the text,
towards the end the two of them come together to solve the linked triple murder mystery.
Also, a detective fiction text cannot function without the presence of crime in the
narrative. Often, the crimes committed are gory and violent. The unpleasantness of the
murders is partly to create an element of frisson in the audience but also to justify the
detective’s intervention often outside the purview of law. This is how the murders of Aadil,
Basharat and Parvez are described in the text.
The investigation process is also a motif that we recurrently see in detective fiction.
While we see the intellect and cleverness of the detective figure here, it is also filled with
many setbacks. A few examples of Jang’s powers of observation and deduction include the
time in the Abdul Jabbar murder case when in contrast to his friend Akram, Muzaffar notices
marks of strangulation around the dead man’s neck. In the same case, he can connect
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Shireen’s perfume to the possibility of the murderer being from Kannauj and thereby to Faraz
who also hails from the same place and has strong motivation to commit murder.
Without the solution, the text is always incomplete, and it is always presented to the
reader for his/her mental satisfaction. The standard rule for the solution is that all the clues
should be at the reader’s disposal and the solution should be obvious to the reader in
hindsight. In other words, he should be in the same position as the detectives. All this we see
in Crimson City as Muzaffar figures out the Lakshminarayan and Abdul Jabbar cases in this
way. In the case of the triple murder, we also see Muzaffar figure out how the first two
murders were cases of mistaken identity. In fact, he figures out most of the case and prevents
Shamsuddin escaping at the end. The only additional information that is provided at the end
is Shamsuddin’s motivation which the reader and the detective discover together.
A word about the story being set in seventeenth century Delhi. There are descriptions
of the streets, the canals, the darwazas, the street vendors, the jewellery and the clothes
specific to the time - all make the novel come alive with historical details. Though
interesting, these details trip up the pace of the narrative and the reader must wait awhile
before the story picks up again.
The setting of a text with a detective should always be kept in mind as it will always
be a bleak world which will create a constant sense of unease in the characters as well as the
readers. The State forces authorised to keep a check on crime are usually on the verge of
being overwhelmed. In fact, it is this anxiety that justifies the detective figure’s intervention
in this text because the law-and-order machinery seems to be swamped by the spate of
crimes.

WORKS CITED

Liddle, Madhulika. Crimson City (Delhi: Hachette, 2015).

SUGGESTED READINGS

https://madhulikaliddle.com/
https://scroll.in/article/1011442/human-nature-doesnt-change-madhulika-liddle-on-the-
challenges-of-writing-historical-fiction
https://openthemagazine.com/cover-stories/crimson-city/
Todorov, Tzvetan. “The Typology of Detective Fiction (1966).” Crime and Media.
Routledge, 2019. 291-301.
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Disclaimer: In the present study material, Unit I and III have


been written afresh and Unit II is under preparation

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