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Effective Report Writing

What are Reports & Why do we Need them?


• A report is a presentation of Facts & Findings, usually as a basis for Recommendations written

for a specific Readership, and probably intended to be kept as a Record.

• It is purely based on Observation and Analysis.

• It gives an Explanation of any circumstance.

• It Discusses a particular problem in great detail.

• Reports are required for Judging the performances of various departments in an organization

• A good report is always Fact Finding and not fault finding. It is prepared with an unbiased

approach.
What is Academic Writing?
• Academic Writing is a clear, formal and concise way of writing that:

 Answers the assignment question

 Demonstrates understanding of a subject

 Provides evidence to support claims, ideas or arguments made within an


assignment

 Has a logical and clear structure

 Contains citations with the assignment and a reference list at the end of the
work.
Planning an Assignment
• Helps you to focus on what the assignment is really asking.
• Helps you to create a structure for your assignment
• Guides you through populating (/ giving shape to) that
structure.
• By creating and following an assignment plan, your work will
be better prepared, written and presented.
• Start planning your assignment soon – sooner the better!
Steps for Planning and Completing Assignment

• Consult the Assessment Brief and Marking Criteria.

• Analyse the Question

• What do you already know?

• Start your Research

• Read

• Structure

• Develop a First Draft

• Second Draft

• The Final Draft

• Ensure all information is correctly referenced

• Proofread

• Print the Final Copy


Power of Writing
“Life is nowhere” “Life is now here”

Mango: A fruit which is juicy and sweet. (Writing)

Mango: Juicy stone fruit (drupe) from numerous


species of tropical trees belonging to the flowering plant
genus Mangifera, cultivated mostly for their edible fruit.
(Academic
Writing)
Bad Academic Writing
I hate wet and reiny days….
It rained a lot in 1816.... a lot - like everyday; the weather in Europe was
abnormally wet because it rained in Switzerland on 130 out of the 183 days
from April to September. If I was Mary Shelley I might decide to write a
book too. Afterall, it was the onnly thing you could do without TV or
anything. She said that she "passed the summer of 1816 in the environs of
Geneva...we occasionally amused ourselves with some German stories of
ghosts... These tales excited in us a playful desire of imitation"  So,
people were stuck inside and bored. Mary Shelley decided to write a book
becuase it was so awful outside. I can totally see her point, you know? I
guess I would write a novel if there was nothing else to do.
Activity
• Why would you consider the above excerpt as an
example of a BAD academic writing?

• Please identify all the points responsible for making the


writing a bad example of an academic writing.
• The opening sentence is not on target, and it has a spelling error.

• The second sentence states a fact, but no cited source is provided -


plagiarism!

• The rest of the paragraph begins to discuss the topic, but not clearly
enough to allow the audience to see where you are heading.

• The quote used does little to support the opening sentences.

• Grammar errors and run on sentences are present as well.


Good Academic Writing – Critical Thinking!
The weather in 1816 Europe was abnormally wet, keeping many inhabitants indoors
that summer. From April until September of that year, "it rained in Switzerland on
130 out of the 183 days from April to September" (Phillips, 2006). Unlike today, one
could not simply turn on a television or click through the Internet in order to entertain
oneself. Instead, it was much more common for the educated people of the day to
spend time reading, discussing well-known authors and artists of the day, playing at
cards and walking in their gardens and walking paths.
If you were Mary Shelley in the company of Byron and others, you amused each
other by reading out loud, sharing a common interest in a particular book, and
sharing with the others your own writing. In her introduction to Frankenstein, her
explanation of how this extraordinary novel came to be was due, at least in part, to
the weather and the company (Shelley, 1816).  "I passed the summer of 1816 in the
environs of Geneva. The season was cold and rainy, and ...we occasionally amused
ourselves with some German stories of ghosts... These tales excited in us a playful
desire of imitation" (Shelley, as quoted in Phillips, 2006).
 
Activity
• Why would you consider the above excerpt as an
example of a GOOD academic writing?

• Please identify all the points responsible for making the


writing a good example of an academic writing.
• The introductory sentence immediately tells the
audience your topic.

• The opening paragraph supports the opening sentence.

• The second paragraph supports the first paragraph.

• There are no spelling errors, and the writing is clear and


concise.
What is Paraphrasing?
• A Restatement
• Of the same or different length as the original
• Written with different words

• Often reorganized
• Faithful to the author’s intended meaning
• Reader-Friendly
Why Paraphrase?
• It proves a level of understanding.

• Avoid plagiarism

• Enable in the complete comprehension of the material


being paraphrased.
Paraphrasing Techniques
• Change to synonyms

• Change word forms

• Change from quoted speech to indirect speech

• Change from active voice to passive voice

• Interpret meaning

• Identify the underlying meaning of a statement

• All the paraphrased sentences should be properly cited.


Paraphrase the Following:

1. Willy Wonka was famous for his delicious candy.


Children and adults loved to eat it.
2. “…there are two ways to become wealthy: to create
wealth or to take wealth away from others. The former
adds to society. The latter typically subtracts from it, for
in the process of taking it away, wealth gets destroyed.
A monopolist who overcharges for his product takes
away money from whom he is overcharging and at the
same time destroys value. To get his monopoly price, he
has to restrict production.”
-Stiglitz, J.E. (2013). The price of inequality. London:
Penguin.
• Willy Wonka was known throughout the world because
people enjoyed eating the tasty candy he made
• Creating wealth adds to society, whereas taking away
wealth of others detracts from it and destroys wealth in
the process. For example a monopolist overcharging for
a product not only takes money away from the
customer, but also destroys value in order to get the
monopoly price and thereby restricts production
(Stiglitz, 2013).

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