Talk:Maria Kanellis/GA1
Latest comment: 16 years ago by IMatthew in topic GA Review
GA Review
edit- Why was she raised alongside her sister and brother? Does that just tell me she had a sister and brother, or that her sister and brother raised her?
- Done. Just that she has them. I reworded it but had to use the present tense, so I moved it into the personal life section. Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- It said she started appearance at OVW under Paul Heyman. Can you clarify what that means?
- All dates should be linked.
- Not done. That isn't mandatory anymore and linking dates that weren't full (month, day, and year) was optional. Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- She was in the bottom three - I think that should be re-worded. I've never heard the last three competitors called the "bottom three"
- Can you explain the trial against Eric Bischoff, briefly?
- Done. Is that adequate, or do you think it needs more? Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- Maria's quote from the trial can be put into the quote template?
- Not done. See MOS:QUOTE. It is only mandatory if the quote is four lines or longer. Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- Can all five girls that had previously been in the ring. be reworded to mention the names of all five girls.
- Done. They are mentioned in the sentence before. Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- "first match at WrestleMania" sounds like her first match was at WrestleMania -- it can/should be reworded slightly.
- Reference 1 is invalid.
- For reference 2, "The Miami Herald" should be wiki-linked.
- Playboy should be wiki-linked as the publisher for reference 30.
- For reference 31, the publisher should be "World Wrestling Entertainment" and not "WWE"
- For reference 33, WWE Magazine can be wiki-linked.
I've also made some minor fixes, so leave me a message when you are done so I can look over the article one more time. -- iMatthew T.C. 13:09, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
- Cool. I just got back from a road trip, but I'll get to these later tonight. Nikki311 18:23, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
- No problem! -- iMatthew T.C. 18:42, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry! I guess I was more tired than I originally thought! Everything is done or commented on. Nikki311 15:49, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- No problem! -- iMatthew T.C. 18:42, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
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Cheers, -- iMatthew T.C. 00:45, 7 July 2008 (UTC)