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'{{Talk header}} ==Quest101== Hello, Thank you for the review, however I feel the article is not promotional. This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... It is a biography of a prominent person who established (with his wife) not only a well-known institution throughout the region of Southern California, but in Western Europe as well. He was an important figure who contributed significantly to the spiritual teaching and welfare of persons throughout the United States and Canada. The article does not promote any commercial interest whatsoever, in fact purposely only mentions the subject matter of the books he published--not any of their titles in order to specifically NOT promote them. <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Quest101|Quest101]] ([[User talk:Quest101|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Quest101|contribs]]) 20:55, 27 December 2014 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> :Hello, {{u|Quest101}}. Promotional articles do not have to be commercial in nature; it's possible to promote spiritual concerns as well as commercial ones. As it stands, your article talks about the subject in a highly promotional tone, and draws too much from one particular source. If you can demonstrate the person is talked about in neutral sources, and can write a good, well-sourced article in Wikipedia's house style - [[WP:NPOV]] - then it might not get deleted. However, you might like to post the article to [[WP:Articles for Creation]] so you can get feedback and help in this before an article gets put into the main article space. Please think about using more sources and discerning whether the institution is written about widely in reliable national or international media. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 21:01, 27 December 2014 (UTC) == Shevonsilva == Thank you much for reviewing. <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Shevonsilva|Shevonsilva]] ([[User talk:Shevonsilva|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Shevonsilva|contribs]]) 22:12, 27 December 2014 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> ==Hi== Thank you for your assistance today! Could you please take a look at the article [[Karolina Olsson]]. Cheers.--[[User:BabbaQ|BabbaQ]] ([[User talk:BabbaQ|talk]]) 22:57, 27 December 2014 (UTC) :Hey, {{u|BabbaQ}} - of course (although it will be tomorrow when I get to look closely at it). Interesting subject. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 22:58, 27 December 2014 (UTC) == Season's Greetings! [[Bungalow (restaurant)]] and [[Terra Kulture]] == [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] Seasons Greetings! I have been offline for a while and only recently came back online. I only recently saw your message on my talk page. I'm not trying to prove you wrong but in my opinion, the reliability of the references used in citing the article is more relevant in establishing notability. Some of the citations used for [[Terra Kulture]] are different from the ones used for [[Bungalow (restaurant)]]. Terra Kulture was significantly improved after it was deleted. I removed the promotional contents and it is currently not a travel guide. Any suggestion on improving the articles are welcome [[User:Eruditescholar|Eruditescholar]] ([[User talk:Eruditescholar|talk]]) 02:37, 28 December 2014 (UTC). Please can you close the AFD discussions for [[Bungalow (restaurant)]]? I'm actually no longer interested whether the article is kept or deleted. I usually have difficulty assessing the internet and having two AFD debates at the same time is too much for me to handle. Thanks![[User:Eruditescholar|Eruditescholar]] ([[User talk:Eruditescholar|talk]]) 05:28, 28 December 2014 (UTC) :{{u|Eruditescholar}} - '''All''' your ''sources'' are promotional - they are routine coverage in travel guides, not discussion of the significance of the restaurant beyond that. Please read [[WP:CORP]] and consider what the sources actually are rather than claiming they support notability just because they mention which restaurants exist in Lagos. A restaurant (or other company) needs coverage in neutral, third party sources - not websites which are geared towards promotion - which you need to find before the articles will survive AfD. If I may be so bold, improving the articles requires you to read the guidelines to make sure you know what makes a restaurant notable, rather than ask the people what you need to do - because we're unlikely to tell you anything different. :Sorry I can't be of more help, but you have a lot of such messages on your talk page about the businesses you create articles about, and you need to actually take in what people are trying to tell you about those articles rather than beg us for assistance we can't give you if you can't provide us with sources that demonstrate notability in our opinions. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 10:16, 28 December 2014 (UTC) == Edit conflict == While I appreciate your reviewing, you created an edit conflict and I have just lost over an hour's worth of work on [[Tân Mỹ Base]] [[User:Mztourist|Mztourist]] ([[User talk:Mztourist|talk]]) 11:35, 28 December 2014 (UTC) :{{ping|Mztourist}} - I apologise for the problem. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 17:36, 28 December 2014 (UTC) == Why you deleted my page? == Why you deleted my page? <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ajayjetavat|Ajayjetavat]] ([[User talk:Ajayjetavat|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ajayjetavat|contribs]]) 19:38, 28 December 2014 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> :Hello {{u|Ajayjetavat}}. I wouldn't have deleted it myself - I only nominated it for deletion. However, Wikipedia isn't a place to host your resume or an 'about me' page - it's reserved for people who are important enough - or ''notable'' - to have other people write about them and discuss their contributions to society or their legacy in their field. This is nothing personal, but I think you may find Wikipedia isn't what you think it is, and encourage you to read a few of the [[WP:Policies and guidelines]] to be able to make more constructive additions to the project. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 19:43, 28 December 2014 (UTC) ::Ok thats fine ::Can u tell me which category are supporting on wikipedia (e.g - actor) ::Can u give me list<small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ajayjetavat|Ajayjetavat]] ([[User talk:Ajayjetavat|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ajayjetavat|contribs]]) 19:52, 28 December 2014 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> :::{{u|Ajayjetavat}} - no problem. Have a look at the [[WP:FILM|Wikiproject Film]] if you're interested in film, [[WP:THEATRE|WikiProject Theatre]] for stage acting. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 19:57, 28 December 2014 (UTC) == Thanks == Hi Louise, Thanks for your help in improving the articles I started. Best wishes, [[User:Mirrortoamermaid|Mirrortoamermaid]] ([[User talk:Mirrortoamermaid|talk]]) 20:13, 28 December 2014 (UTC) :No, thank '''you''', {{u|Mirrortoamermaid}}, for writing them. Good luck with your future contributions. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 20:15, 28 December 2014 (UTC) == Museums & thanks == Dear Louise, I am trying to put the information of the official museums (so no commercial attractions) correctly on Wikipedia, just like they exist in Dutch and a variety of languages. I only saw that 5 of them did not have a proper English page. So that's why I am trying to put it on there. Please help me if I did something wrong, Thank you very much, <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ranepa4|Ranepa4]] ([[User talk:Ranepa4|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ranepa4|contribs]]) 10:28, 30 December 2014 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> :Hello {{u|Ranepa4}} - I've left a fuller explanation on your talk page. However, just because a museum exists, it doesn't mean it's inherently notable enough for a Wikipedia article. Even though the museums are not commercial enterprises, it's still promotional to upload articles about them. To have its own Wikipedia article, a museum would have to be culturally significant in its own right (for instance, would have to be one with enough history or importance to have been discussed in [[WP:Reliable sources]] - so the [[Louvre]] has its own article, but not my local town museum). Basically, we're not a directory of local attractions - we have strict criteria for inclusion, which is probably why your museums didn't have articles in the first place. :Before you create any more articles, please read the links someone has listed on your talk page. This should give you some idea of what to write about and what not to write about. If you have any questions, please ask them at the [[WP:Teahouse]] or [[WP:Help Desk]] forums. Thanks! [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 10:38, 30 December 2014 (UTC) ==New York Sunday News == Thanks, Just trying to be a better wikipedian. I wish I was more experienced. I am finally getting some mentors on here to help me out. [[User:CrazyAces489|CrazyAces489]] ([[User talk:CrazyAces489|talk]]) 11:40, 30 December 2014 (UTC) :You're welcome, {{u|CrazyAces489}}. Good luck. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 19:27, 30 December 2014 (UTC) == Bachner draft == Thank you so much for your help [[User:TimHitchings|TimHitchings]] ([[User talk:TimHitchings|talk]]) 21:36, 30 December 2014 (UTC) :No problems, {{u|TimHitchings|Tim}}. I have to work tomorrow :(, and then we're out for New Year's Eve, but I have a day off on Thursday and I'll be able to give a bit more time to it then. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 21:39, 30 December 2014 (UTC) I'm making the suggested changes and I'm fixing all the cites as you recommended. I'm hopeful I've done the bulk of the work as you did SO much to help me. I wouldn't want you to have to spend additional time on anything tedious and mechanical that I should and can do now that you've demonstrated how in your revisions. I'm unsure if I was to respond to you here or on my talk page. Let me know which is the most appropriate. Have a Happy New Year. [[User:TimHitchings|TimHitchings]] ([[User talk:TimHitchings|talk]]) 22:32, 30 December 2014 (UTC) :Hi {{u|TimHitchings}} - here is fine. I get automatically notified of messages here whereas it's a little bit more difficult to notify someone of messages elsewhere (although it's often good to keep the discussion in one place; usually for live articles that's the talk page of the article). Have a look at the [[Template:ping|ping template]] for how to message someone away from their own talk page. :Thanks for your contribution to the encyclopaedia. You've got some more advice there - as I said this helps me too. I learn a lot by doing things like drafting and doing 'cite news' templates so it gave me the opportunity to practice writing an article. I also wanted to help because I enjoy cricket and your article reminded me in some ways about the recent death of [[Phillip Hughes]]. 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[[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 14:41, 1 January 2015 (UTC) == Re: to the Deletion request of article on VTRAKS == Sir, I disagree to the fact that it is promotional as I have given an unbiased view on this website which is clearly evident from its true revenue and sales. What part do you think seems promotional? Please reply as soon as possible with the quoted text so that I can edit it and this article can be termed fruitful for every reader. --[[User:Pravirmalhotra|Pravirmalhotra]] ([[User talk:Pravirmalhotra|talk]]) 14:58, 1 January 2015 (UTC) <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Pravirmalhotra|Pravirmalhotra]] ([[User talk:Pravirmalhotra|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Pravirmalhotra|contribs]]) 14:56, 1 January 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> :Hello {{u|Pravirmalhotra}} (I'm a woman, by the way :)). Generally, your article lists a lot of services more relevant to a promotional advertisement rather than an encyclopaedic article. You need to refocus the article away from services or products you provide and towards the history and significance of your company within the wider world. Basically, if you are notable enough for the encyclopaedia, you will be able to point to discussion about you in [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] - third party sources discussing your significance within your marketplace or locality. Whether or not you want a 'fruitful' article, unfortunately if you don't fit Wikipedia's strict standards for inclusion, you can't establish yourself here. Also, re-adding content that has been previously deleted could be considered as disruptive. :Before you go any further, please read and digest the various links to the guidelines you've been given on your talk page. That is the general way to create a fruitful article. Thank you for contributing, however. We just need to make sure your article will pass initial scrutiny, which is why I suggested you write a draft and submit it to [[WP:Articles for Creation]] rather than try to re-apply the article after it has been deleted. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 15:05, 1 January 2015 (UTC) === Edit for VTRAKS === Ma'am, I have made significant edits in the article so that it does not seem as an advert. Please review the below given article for errors(if any) and suggest me edits for the same. Reply as soon as possible as I need to publish an edit to my article. {{collapse top|Article draft}} VTRAKS is an Canadian electronic commerce website founded in mid 2014 and is maintained by UControl eBiz Limited. It operates on a global platform and accepts orders from countries like USA, Canada, India and all other major European countries. VTRAKS is globally head quartered in Mississauga, Ontario, that is one of the ten provinces of Canada, located in east-central Canada. VTRAKS stocks a premium line of Best Beauty, Fitness Products, Recreation Gear and Marine Electronics and promises them at the lowest rates possible. The website also offers high level of service and support and claims to be the best one in its category to be doing so. '''History''' VTRAKS was founded in mid 2014 by a Ontario, Canada based entrepreneur. vtraks.com as a domain was registered on 18.8.2014. Being a small start-up vtraks.com had quite limited brands available in its initial days, but now this fast rising urban electronic commerce website has numerous brands and suppliers working under it. VTRAKS allows payment methods ranging from secure payments from Paypal to payments using debit cards and credit cards. VTRAKS also ships globally every country. '''Revenue and Sales''' VTRAKS has an estimated worth of $ 37,800.00 as reported by Alexa which is a trusted website for getting net worth and ranks of websites on the world wide web. Daily sales of VTRAKS are estimated to be around $ 63.00. Initial founders had spent around $ 10000.00 on the creation and advertisement on the website and has seen about 278 % increase in the website's profits. With outsourcing of VTRAK products to other websites, vtraks.com has been able to yield more than $ 25000.00 in the last 4 months. '''Finance''' VTRAKS as an electronic commerce website runs on in-house investments by the owner as well as investments by a partner firm UControl eBiz Limited which is based in the same nation. VTRAKS has seen a significant increase in the investments made by its partner firms. Brands such as Garmin have partnered with VTRAKS and have invested in the website/firm as well as given permission to the electronic commerce website to officially sell Garmin products. {{collapse bottom}} --[[User:Pravirmalhotra|Pravirmalhotra]] ([[User talk:Pravirmalhotra|talk]]) 15:33, 1 January 2015 (UTC) :Hi {{u|Pravirmalhotra}} - do you have any independent sources referencing your business? As a small start-up, you may not fulfil [[WP:CORP|the corporate notability]] guidelines, and therefore won't qualify for an article at all ([[WP:No amount of editing can overcome a lack of notability|notability can't be improved simply by editing out promotional language]]). '''Please''' read the guidelines before you continue - I doubt this will qualify for an article, I'm afraid. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 15:39, 1 January 2015 (UTC) == Wenfei Fan new article == Thanks for your attention. According to the [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_%28academics%29 guidelines], Fellows of the ACM who also hold personal chairs should be definitely notable. [[User:Ott2|Ott2]] ([[User talk:Ott2|talk]]) 15:08, 1 January 2015 (UTC) :Excellent - thanks for clarifying that. [[User:Lstanley1979|LouiseS1979]] ([[User talk:Lstanley1979#top|talk]]) 15:33, 1 January 2015 (UTC) == Re: to the edit of VTRAKS == Ma'am, if you see that article carefully I mentioned that it started as a small start-up and now has grown into a notable electronic commerce website. Ma'am I completely disagree with you if you don't want to let VTRAKS as an article be present on Wikipedia just on the grounds of you believing it to be a small- start-up even after I removed each and every element that seemed to be an advert. Please approve the article as I don't find any reason that conflicts with the fact that it would be encyclopaedic for the reader. I would suggest you to read the wiki article about Flipkart that has the same elements just on a larger scale and stands as a quite informative article. Reply as soon as possible. --[[User:Pravirmalhotra|Pravirmalhotra]] ([[User talk:Pravirmalhotra|talk]]) 15:53, 1 January 2015 (UTC) == A barnstar for you! == {| style="background-color: #fdffe7; border: 1px solid #fceb92;" |rowspan="2" style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 5px;" | [[File:Civility Barnstar Hires.png|100px]] |style="font-size: x-large; padding: 3px 3px 0 3px; height: 1.5em;" | '''The Civility Barnstar''' |- |style="vertical-align: middle; padding: 3px;" | also for patience... [[User:Peridon|Peridon]] ([[User talk:Peridon|talk]]) 16:23, 1 January 2015 (UTC) |}'