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23 July 2024
- 18:1018:10, 23 July 2024 diff hist +4 John Wilmot, 2nd Earl of Rochester →Upbringing and teens: Syntax corrected. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 July 2024
- 10:5110:51, 17 July 2024 diff hist +4 Tower of London →White Tower: I added a connection to another wikipedia article. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 May 2024
- 18:5618:56, 16 May 2024 diff hist +5 Rifling →Manufacture: I changed the tense of a sentence to harmonize with the rest of the section. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 April 2024
- 11:2111:21, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 The woman question →1600s to 1700s: Word changed to better conform to the usual English idiom. current
21 April 2024
- 11:0911:09, 21 April 2024 diff hist +3 İsmet İnönü →Foreign policy: Missing word supplied.
4 February 2024
- 23:4423:44, 4 February 2024 diff hist +9 Wormwood Scrubs →History: Slight rewrite to improve the style and clarity.
28 January 2024
- 11:2911:29, 28 January 2024 diff hist 0 Joseph Lister →First reception of antisepsis: Typo
16 December 2023
- 01:0801:08, 16 December 2023 diff hist −1 Abel Meeropol Typo
30 August 2023
- 23:0523:05, 30 August 2023 diff hist −1 Submachine gun →World War II: 'Gun' changed from plural to singular, to accord with the usual English usage.
7 August 2023
- 18:2318:23, 7 August 2023 diff hist −5 Hydrogen fuel →Drawbacks: Syntax corrected.
26 July 2023
- 22:1922:19, 26 July 2023 diff hist +4 Lanchester submachine gun →Operation: Missing definite article supplied.
23 July 2023
- 00:0500:05, 23 July 2023 diff hist −3 Nagant M1895 →Technical characteristics: Again.
- 00:0400:04, 23 July 2023 diff hist −1 Nagant M1895 →Technical characteristics: Had another quick fiddle, with similar intent.
22 July 2023
- 23:5923:59, 22 July 2023 diff hist +7 Nagant M1895 →Technical characteristics: I've done a bit of rewriting with hopes of improving the prose a bit, which was awkwardly repetitive.
6 July 2023
- 23:5423:54, 6 July 2023 diff hist +4 Machine gun →Interwar era and World War II: Apparent technical error fuixw
14 May 2023
- 23:5023:50, 14 May 2023 diff hist −3 Machine gun →Design: Sentence slightly modified to avoid repetition of a term in the previous sentence.
2 May 2023
- 02:2102:21, 2 May 2023 diff hist −5 Fighter aircraft →Technological innovations: Sentence slightly modified to improve style. Tag: Reverted
1 May 2023
- 02:0102:01, 1 May 2023 diff hist +8 Heroic drama →Dryden in 1670: Links added; and the orthography of Venice Preserv'd corrected.
30 April 2023
- 00:3100:31, 30 April 2023 diff hist +4 Blowback (firearms) →Gas-delayed: Own screw-up fixed. :)
- 00:3000:30, 30 April 2023 diff hist +16 Blowback (firearms) →Gas-delayed: Sentence mildly rewritten to improve the style.
10 January 2023
- 15:5615:56, 10 January 2023 diff hist +5 Liang Tingnan →Theatre and poetry: Word added to improve the grammar of the sentence.
22 December 2022
- 21:5421:54, 22 December 2022 diff hist +1 .303 British →Headstamps and colour-coding: Typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 October 2022
- 09:5309:53, 26 October 2022 diff hist −6 Ida B. Wells →Speaking tours in Britain: I corrected the quotation; referring back to the Guardian article by David Lynch, I found that the adjective 'nasty' is not repeated.
25 October 2022
- 18:0718:07, 25 October 2022 diff hist +16 Sydney Domville Rowland →Career: Sentence reworked to improve style cogency and grammar.
17 October 2022
- 16:5116:51, 17 October 2022 diff hist +1 Thuggee →In popular culture: Typo fixed.
4 October 2022
- 15:4315:43, 4 October 2022 diff hist 0 Doxing Typo fixed.
8 September 2022
- 14:5114:51, 8 September 2022 diff hist +2 Peter Sellers →Early post-war career and The Goon Show (1946–1955): Full stop added.
2 September 2022
- 14:5914:59, 2 September 2022 diff hist +3 Mine shell →Effect, construction and use: Word added to correct syntax.
15 August 2022
- 10:2810:28, 15 August 2022 diff hist −2 Stabbing of Salman Rushdie →Accused: Word changed to better fit vernacular usage.
27 July 2022
- 18:4418:44, 27 July 2022 diff hist −1 Joseph Wheeler (shipbuilder) Typo
6 July 2022
- 22:0322:03, 6 July 2022 diff hist +9 Princes in the Tower →Richard III: Sentence rewritten to improve the sense and the style.
1 July 2022
- 22:0322:03, 1 July 2022 diff hist +1 Paul Schmitt P.S.3 →Operational history: Another typo falls to me.
- 21:5521:55, 1 July 2022 diff hist +1 Supermarine Type 322 →Design and development: Typo neutralized.
25 June 2022
- 21:5421:54, 25 June 2022 diff hist −1 Hawker Hurricane →Prototype and trials: Typo.
24 June 2022
- 12:4112:41, 24 June 2022 diff hist +1 Oerlikon 20 mm cannon →Description: Tense of the first sentence changed to the present, in accord with the rest of the description.
23 June 2022
- 18:1518:15, 23 June 2022 diff hist +22 Oerlikon 20 mm cannon →Description: Slight rewrite to enhance clarity. Tag: Reverted
- 18:0818:08, 23 June 2022 diff hist +157 Oerlikon 20 mm cannon →Description: An explanatory illustration added. Tag: Reverted
21 June 2022
- 22:4622:46, 21 June 2022 diff hist +8 Oerlikon 20 mm cannon →Description: Previous reference improved.
- 22:3922:39, 21 June 2022 diff hist +64 Oerlikon 20 mm cannon →Description: Another reference added.
11 May 2022
- 08:5808:58, 11 May 2022 diff hist +5 Tijuana bible →Cultural references Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:4908:49, 11 May 2022 diff hist +1 Tijuana bible →Cultural references: Missing word supplied and syntax corrected. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 April 2022
- 16:1116:11, 23 April 2022 diff hist −3 List of military aid to Ukraine during the Russo-Ukrainian War →Future Military Aid: One sentence clarified. A word changed to its synonym in another to enhance style.
9 April 2022
- 21:3421:34, 9 April 2022 diff hist +1 Eimear McGeown Missing nothing added.
23 March 2022
- 20:4120:41, 23 March 2022 diff hist −3 Greyfriars Fixed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 January 2022
- 10:3610:36, 27 January 2022 diff hist 0 History of the Jews in the Roman Empire →Jews in Rome: I changed a word to improve the English. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 January 2022
- 18:4018:40, 13 January 2022 diff hist +27 Compressor →Scroll compressors: Grammar revised and style clarified.
12 January 2022
- 18:5618:56, 12 January 2022 diff hist −15 James De Lancey (loyalist) →Nova Scotia: Sentence rewritten to improve the English.
18 November 2021
- 13:1713:17, 18 November 2021 diff hist −1 Tattoo →Europe: Grammar improved.
28 September 2021
- 20:4720:47, 28 September 2021 diff hist −11 Submachine gun →World War II: Typo fixed ~ accidental repetition removed.
20 September 2021
- 17:4117:41, 20 September 2021 diff hist +1 History of the Republic of Turkey →Foreign policy: Apparent typo rectified. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit