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19 February 2019

• 16:5816:58, 19 February 2019 diff hist +269‎ Talk:Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Self-defence not a valid reason to have a gun: Note that I have now removed the irrelevant text. Please discuss if you disagree and want to put it back.
• 16:5016:50, 19 February 2019 diff hist −208‎ Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Arms Act 1983: Dubious text removed as discussed at Talk:Gun_laws_in_New_Zealand#Self-defence_not_a_valid_reason_to_have_a_gun. Please discuss before you revert.
• 16:4616:46, 19 February 2019 diff hist +282‎ Talk:Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Using a firearm in self-defence: Note that irrelevant text has been removed.
• 16:3916:39, 19 February 2019 diff hist −562‎ Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Arms Act 1983: Remove irrelevant text as explained at Talk:Gun_laws_in_New_Zealand#Using_a_firearm_in_self-defence. Please discuss before you revert and give your reasons.
• 11:4711:47, 19 February 2019 diff hist +98‎ Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Arms Act 1983: Add to tag {{dubious |1=Self-defence_not_a_valid_reason_to_have_a_gun ... add link to section on talk page. Also add {{Relevance inline|sentence|discuss=Using_a_firearm_in_self-defence
• 11:4511:45, 19 February 2019 diff hist +4,111‎ Talk:Gun law in New Zealand ‎ →‎Self-defence not a valid reason to have a gun: new section

16 February 2019

• 20:4620:46, 16 February 2019 diff hist +2,391‎ Talk:Road toll (Australia and New Zealand) ‎ →‎Move proposal: Something more sophisticated than a move is needed here. Needs a name change, geographic separation, disambiguation, and article split all needed. Selected content needs to move but the article maybe needs to stay here
• 12:4912:49, 16 February 2019 diff hist +7‎ Talk:Lesley Elliott (campaigner) ‎ C class
• 12:4712:47, 16 February 2019 diff hist +1,668‎ Talk:Athletes and domestic violence in the United States ‎ →‎Lead sentence is ambiguous or inconsistent with topic: Now rewritten to present the issue as one of public knowledge of the athlete's offending. I also discuss why I added Globalize tag.
• 11:4711:47, 16 February 2019 diff hist +383‎ Athletes and domestic violence in the United States ‎ Rewrite the lead to present the problem as one of public knowledge of the perpetration of domestic violence off the field, rather than just the commission of the crime. The problem is the publicity in addition to the public's changing intolerance of the crime. Also Globalize tag.
• 11:1311:13, 16 February 2019 diff hist +48‎ Talk:Athletes and domestic violence in the United States ‎ →‎Lead sentence is ambiguous or inconsistent with topic: oops forgot to preview and add another title - Athletic performance and domestic violence
• 11:0911:09, 16 February 2019 diff hist +3,999‎ Talk:Athletes and domestic violence in the United States ‎ New section →‎Lead sentence is ambiguous or inconsistent with topic: and I want to change it before I even start reading! Also added →‎Football: after project ratings to provide a first heading so that the section can be edited without needing to edit the whole page.
• 08:0608:06, 16 February 2019 diff hist +47‎ Murder of Sophie Elliott ‎ →‎Sophie Elliott Foundation: add | title=''Loves-Me-Not'' Relationship Education to cite template at end of paragraph
• 04:1704:17, 16 February 2019 diff hist +1,603‎ Talk:Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Criteria for including specific crimes and criminals: Only if also notable for having an impact on subsequent events that have an impact on Crime in New Zealand

15 February 2019

• 13:4013:40, 15 February 2019 diff hist +1,767‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ Rework the lead section and move un-sourced content into the body of the article. Less is more! A smaller lead section now means more can be added later. Rapidly dating statistics from 2018 should not be left in the lead section.
• 12:1612:16, 15 February 2019 diff hist +1,885‎ Talk:Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Needs complete rewrite: I agree, and propose how to begin.
• 10:5310:53, 15 February 2019 diff hist +2‎ Speed limits in New Zealand ‎ →‎History of speed limits in New Zealand: replace uses of "mph" on metric speed limits with "km/h"

14 February 2019

• 13:5513:55, 14 February 2019 diff hist +32‎ Talk:Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎Untitled: {{Dead link|date=February 2019}}
• 13:4213:42, 14 February 2019 diff hist +589‎ Talk:Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎Untitled: Read the Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines. This is not the place to discuss Sumner, the place, only the place to discuss the article about Sumner, New Zealand.
• 13:1213:12, 14 February 2019 diff hist +876‎ Talk:Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎Untitled: Read the Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines. This is not the place to discuss Sumner, the place, only the place to discuss the article about Sumner, New Zealand.
• 12:0312:03, 14 February 2019 diff hist +2,748‎ Sumner, New Zealand ‎ Add some places where citations are needed to verify statements in the article. It's not that the statements are wrong, its that the facts need to be supported, rather than being rumor or editorial opinion.
• 10:3210:32, 14 February 2019 diff hist +69‎ Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎van Asch Deaf Education Centre: Rename to van Asch Deaf Education Centre, which is the current school name and link to main article
• 10:1510:15, 14 February 2019 diff hist +210‎ Talk:Van Asch College ‎ →‎Name Change (or lack of?): Move to Van Asch Deaf Education Centre not possible due to existing history.
• 10:0910:09, 14 February 2019 diff hist +401‎ Talk:Van Asch College ‎ →‎Name Change (or lack of?): van Asch Deaf Education Centre is the NEW name. (Changed in 1995)
• 09:3709:37, 14 February 2019 diff hist +78‎ Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎Education: Add subsection for each school
• 08:5908:59, 14 February 2019 diff hist +119‎ Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎History: Add 1865 pencil sketch - showing Edward Dobson's house, and one other. First used in article about Edward Dobson.

13 February 2019

• 13:2013:20, 13 February 2019 diff hist +1,090‎ Sumner, New Zealand ‎ →‎History: Change order of some paragraphs so they have a better chronology. Add some details of HMS Pandora survey. with citation
• 13:1613:16, 13 February 2019 diff hist +231‎ Byron Drury ‎ Drury, New Zealand is named after him. As captain of HMS Pandora, he surveyed the nearby Manukau Harbour in 1853. + citation
• 13:1113:11, 13 February 2019 diff hist +232‎ Drury, New Zealand ‎ Add →‎Name: section. Drury is named after Commander Byron Drury, captain of HMS Pandora (1833), who surveyed the Manukau Harbour in 1853. with citation nzhistory website.
• 11:4511:45, 13 February 2019 diff hist +1,936‎ HMS Pandora (1833) ‎ Add information about HMS Pandora surveying New Zealand while under the command of Commander Drury between 1850 and 1856. Add notes where dates and citations needed for precision and where further explanation needed.

10 February 2019

• 07:4707:47, 10 February 2019 diff hist +1,578‎ Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Dates and numbers ‎ →‎When should we include the day of the week when writing a date?: Before the date, but only if the day of the week is notable for some reason, such as a change in calendar or celebration on a particular day of the week, rather than the specific date.
• 05:2105:21, 10 February 2019 diff hist +1,134‎ Wikipedia talk:Statistics ‎ →‎Including policy about Statistics in articles: new section
• 03:5403:54, 10 February 2019 diff hist +602‎ Wikipedia:Combining sources ‎ →‎Trivially simple interpretations.: Further explanations and citations needed for second paragraph and the difference between simple calculations and original synthesis of data.
• 03:1803:18, 10 February 2019 diff hist +2,932‎ Wikipedia talk:Combining sources ‎ Supplementary question about →‎Combining different statistical collections: using a recommended methodology and whether it is original research or not. Creates issues with Open Data. current
• 02:0102:01, 10 February 2019 diff hist +3,888‎ N Wikipedia talk:Combining sources ‎ →‎When are additional calculations made upon existing data or statistics considered original research rather than trivial calculations?: new section

9 February 2019

• 13:3813:38, 9 February 2019 diff hist +1,314‎ Speed limits in New Zealand ‎ →‎History of speed limits in New Zealand: post war history - using Transport Dept. Report from 1945 and 1948 found in A to J's from Papers Past

8 February 2019

• 22:4122:41, 8 February 2019 diff hist +2,494‎ Speed limits in New Zealand ‎ Mine Road User Rule: Setting of Speed Limits 2017 for more information. See previous contribution for reference citation

5 February 2019

• 12:5312:53, 5 February 2019 diff hist +59‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎See also: Add 2 more apparently crime related "... in New Zealand" articles to see also list. Rating is Start class of High importance.
• 12:4212:42, 5 February 2019 diff hist +305‎ Alcohol in New Zealand ‎ Lead paragraph is inconsistent and not supported by rest of article. Captain Cook first brewed beer in 1773, and sealers and whalers were in New Zealand, with alcohol shortly afterwards. Missionaries didn't arrive until the 19th century. Minors needing parental consent to consume is inconsistent with no minimum consumption age...

3 February 2019

• 11:4611:46, 3 February 2019 diff hist +530‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎See also: Add 15 apparently crime related "... in New Zealand" articles to see also list. Rating is from B class to Stub, any importance.
• 11:0511:05, 3 February 2019 diff hist +139‎ Talk:Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Plan for Crime in New Zealand article: Note that Introductory section is called (Basis for New Zealand criminal law)
• 10:5910:59, 3 February 2019 diff hist +1,145‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ Add new lead sentence: Crime in New Zealand has its origins in English criminal law, that the New Zealand parliament initially codified in statute in 1893. (This statement is verified in the body of the article in a new first section. →‎Basis for New Zealand criminal law: )
• 06:4106:41, 3 February 2019 diff hist +5,684‎ Talk:Crime in New Zealand ‎ Add new section proposing an →‎Article plan: as the existing article is turning into a mess as it is poorly structured, with no thought being given to what it should contain.
• 03:5303:53, 3 February 2019 diff hist −4‎ Talk:Speed limits in New Zealand ‎ Update from Start class to C class article, still Mid importance
• 03:2603:26, 3 February 2019 diff hist +1,350‎ Speed limits in New Zealand ‎ Tag Lead that contains lots of information not in the body of the article. Tag places where citations may be needed, with reasons why. Focuses on current speed limit issues about increasing to 110 km/h. Does not cover historical limits before 1975. E.g. Traction engines, tractors.
• 01:2001:20, 3 February 2019 diff hist +228‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Law enforcement: Need citations for who is responsible for cybercrime - needs a definition, if it is not crime.
• 01:0901:09, 3 February 2019 diff hist +1,039‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Addressing the drivers of crime: Better sources needed for links to content on the Ministry of Justice website because the website has been restructured and the content no longer exists. May be better as citations of official documents or media releases. Undue weight to enacting Alcohol legislation.

2 February 2019

• 23:4723:47, 2 February 2019 diff hist +800‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Gender: Tag improper synthesis that the vast majority of crime is committed by males because most offenders who are apprehended for those crimes are male, even though most crime is not solved and most offenders are not apprehended. Gender only known for certain after offender apprehended. Compare Schrodinger's Cat paradox.
• 11:2311:23, 2 February 2019 diff hist +3,447‎ Talk:Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Crime rates: new section
• 09:3909:39, 2 February 2019 diff hist +771‎ Crime in New Zealand ‎ →‎Crime statistics: Original research for Crime Rates because a different population estimate has been used than the one in the cited source to calculate rates which are not in source and inconsistent with rates in sources