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8 May 2013
- 02:2402:24, 8 May 2013 diff hist +9 Wood ash →Variability in assessment: Formatting and phrasing were unclear, so I clarified the sentence.
10 April 2013
- 02:0902:09, 10 April 2013 diff hist +1 Human power →Survival radio
3 April 2013
- 21:4021:40, 3 April 2013 diff hist −4 Car Allowance Rebate System →Economic effects: Corrected use of italics in place of quotes.
1 March 2013
- 00:1000:10, 1 March 2013 diff hist +2,190 Talk:Plastic recycling →Segment reads like advertisement: new section
- 00:0700:07, 1 March 2013 diff hist −1,658 Plastic recycling →PET: Added citation needed tags where appropriate, and moved a section that read like an advertisement to the talk page.
17 February 2013
- 04:3204:32, 17 February 2013 diff hist −88 Shanty town →Development: Previous version of sentence had superfluous emphasis and, more noticeably and jarringly, stated that living conditions had not improved at the end of a LONG list of ways that they have, which was downright nonsensical.
14 February 2013
- 02:2102:21, 14 February 2013 diff hist +18 Entrainment (biomusicology) →Beat induction: Probably needs more citation needed tags, but those are the most glaring.
9 December 2012
- 02:0102:01, 9 December 2012 diff hist +14 Methanethiol →Uses: Rewrote paragraph for more encyclopedic tone. Still needs refs, as noted. Also linked relevant words.