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15 February 2013
- 02:3202:32, 15 February 2013 diff hist −2 Duping (video games) →Effects: grammar
9 November 2012
- 20:4120:41, 9 November 2012 diff hist −7 Organizational culture →Aggressive/defensive cultures: grammar/punctuation
14 October 2012
- 21:3321:33, 14 October 2012 diff hist +6 Information warfare →Overview: grammar (fixed broken preposition chain)
13 October 2012
- 22:2722:27, 13 October 2012 diff hist −10 Star Wars: Dark Forces →Development: got rid of "duck" and "jump" because you could, in fact, crouch and jump in Doom,
8 October 2012
- 23:5623:56, 8 October 2012 diff hist −362 Ram Bahadur Bomjon →Feats of inedia: THERE IS NO GUINESS BOOK WORLD RECORD ENTRY FOR SURVIVAL WITHOUT WATER. 18 DAYS WITHOUT WATER IS NOT POSSIBLE. THIS IS AN UNSOURCED REFERENCE (16) WHOSE LINK GOES TO A JAPANESE PLACEHOLDER PARKED PAGE
- 17:1017:10, 8 October 2012 diff hist 0 Garden District, New Orleans tree is in the foreground relative to the streetcar--not the background
12 September 2012
- 00:4900:49, 12 September 2012 diff hist +19 Encephalization quotient No edit summary
18 August 2012
- 22:1122:11, 18 August 2012 diff hist −1 Ram Bahadur Bomjon →Feats of inedia: correction: world record for inedia is 18 days without "food," not "water." There is no documented case of a human going 18 days without water.
8 August 2012
- 17:5717:57, 8 August 2012 diff hist +58 Portland, Oregon →Nicknames
23 July 2012
- 19:4819:48, 23 July 2012 diff hist −36 Natural Born Killers copycat crimes →Shooting of William Savage and Patsy Byers: grammar/flow
30 May 2012
- 06:0306:03, 30 May 2012 diff hist −1 Desert pavement →Formation: removed extra line break
- 06:0206:02, 30 May 2012 diff hist −114 Desert pavement →Formation: removed overly flowery/non-encyclopedic tone prose from end of paragraph; probably a direct copypaste from original text
17 May 2012
- 01:0401:04, 17 May 2012 diff hist +667 Talk:Plain language →pirates of the Caribbean example: new section
20 April 2012
- 19:3919:39, 20 April 2012 diff hist −107 Glossary of anime and manga →Y: removed line about BPD; most borderlines are not violent; this sentence unfairly slanders BPD sufferers
20 December 2011
- 21:1221:12, 20 December 2011 diff hist +356 Talk:Adult learner →meaningless statement in "Special Characteristics..." section: new section