User contributions for 38.49.72.163

1 September 2024

• 07:1807:18, 1 September 2024 diff hist +1‎ Buxus ‎ correct "or" to "and" connecting elements in a list of alternatives Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:5206:52, 1 September 2024 diff hist −6‎ Steve Kazee ‎ →‎Personal life: update verb tenses; correct euphemistic "welcomed" to "had" per MOS:EUPHEMISM; add missing commas current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:0903:09, 1 September 2024 diff hist +9‎ Ricky Pearsall ‎ →‎Personal life: correct several instances of "Ricky" to "Pearsall" per MOS:SURNAME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 August 2024

• 12:4412:44, 31 August 2024 diff hist −6‎ The Day the Clown Cried ‎ →‎Historical controversy and praise: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 August 2024

• 01:4201:42, 30 August 2024 diff hist +45‎ Apartment (disambiguation) ‎ →‎Film and television: add Apartment 7A current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:3601:36, 30 August 2024 diff hist −69‎ Apartment (disambiguation) ‎ →‎Bands and albums: rmv red link: dab pages exist to disambiguate existing WP articles, not to request new articles Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 August 2024

• 21:5121:51, 27 August 2024 diff hist +314‎ Talk:Sambucus ‎ →‎What kind of plant?: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 21:2521:25, 27 August 2024 diff hist −15‎ Eunice aphroditois ‎ →‎Life-cycle: rmv editorial "Unfortunately," per MOS:OPED: "Wikipedia should not take a view on whether an event was fortunate or not" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4215:42, 27 August 2024 diff hist −5‎ Al Franken ‎ →‎2008 elections: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:3815:38, 27 August 2024 diff hist −10‎ Al Franken ‎ rmv peacockish "prominent" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:5806:58, 27 August 2024 diff hist −4‎ Shooting brake ‎ words-used-as-words can be in quotes or italics, but not both, per MOS:WAW current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:5006:50, 27 August 2024 diff hist +8‎ Genesis Motor ‎ →‎Stand-alone brand: link shooting brake current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 August 2024

• 13:1713:17, 26 August 2024 diff hist +258‎ Talk:Near letter-quality printing ‎ →‎Needs illustrations: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 11:5111:51, 26 August 2024 diff hist −14‎ Leta Powell Drake ‎ →‎Contemporary accolades: rmv unencyclopedic puffery and verbosity "found herself becoming an internet sensation" per MOS:PEA, etc; tag weaselly "Many have noted ..."; clean up grammar; need reliable refs for "greatest interviewer of all time" quote, which likely was sarcasm, not an "accolade" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:3311:33, 26 August 2024 diff hist +1‎ Leta Powell Drake ‎ →‎Career: correct "Leta" to "Drake" per MOS:SURNAME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:3011:30, 26 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Leta Powell Drake ‎ rmv errant comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:1306:13, 26 August 2024 diff hist +154‎ Springfield Gardens, Queens ‎ →‎History: What was the community's previous, presumably less elegant name, before it was changed to Springfield Gardens in 1027? The cited ref doesn't say—in fact, the ref doesn't even mention the name change current
• 01:4601:46, 26 August 2024 diff hist −21‎ Pat Trammell ‎ correct euphemistic "lost a six-month battle with" to "died of" per MOS:EUPHEMISM current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:5000:50, 26 August 2024 diff hist +2‎ City Investing Building ‎ correct grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 August 2024

• 02:2402:24, 25 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Don't Cry for Me Argentina ‎ →‎Background and development: rmv comma from restrictive appositive: Rock Follies wasn't the only British musical television show, so naming it isn't optional current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1402:14, 25 August 2024 diff hist −19‎ Chesebrough Manufacturing Company ‎ rmv inappropriate quotation marks and italics from brand names and "so-called" from "rod wax"; rmv errant comma current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 August 2024

• 05:3405:34, 24 August 2024 diff hist −31‎ King's College London ‎ rmv two link pipes that obfuscate and ambiguate rather than clarify their subjects Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 August 2024

• 03:2203:22, 23 August 2024 diff hist −13‎ Silvie Paladino ‎ →‎Career: rmv peacockish "the smash hit" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 August 2024

• 05:0205:02, 22 August 2024 diff hist −15‎ Robert Stigwood ‎ rmv peacockish "the successful" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 August 2024

• 22:0222:02, 21 August 2024 diff hist −9‎ CODA (2021 film) ‎ update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:1611:16, 21 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Silver Linings Playbook ‎ another comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:1511:15, 21 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Silver Linings Playbook ‎ rmv errant comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:0308:03, 21 August 2024 diff hist +358‎ User talk:38.49.72.163 ‎ →‎August 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
• 07:4207:42, 21 August 2024 diff hist +710‎ User talk:38.49.72.163 ‎ →‎August 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
• 07:1607:16, 21 August 2024 diff hist −3‎ Fellow Travelers (miniseries) ‎ →‎Development: update verb tenses Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:0207:02, 21 August 2024 diff hist −1‎ Thomson, Georgia ‎ →‎History: correct ambiguous "was home to minor league baseball" (which implies that this is where it originated) to "had a minor league baseball team" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3306:33, 21 August 2024 diff hist −2‎ Zebedee Armstrong ‎ →‎Life: correct euphemistic "passed" to "died" per MOS:EUPHEMISM current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 August 2024

• 07:2907:29, 20 August 2024 diff hist −8‎ Mike Brewer (musician) ‎ rmv peacockish "popular" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3105:31, 20 August 2024 diff hist +320‎ User talk:38.49.72.163 ‎ →‎August 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
• 00:1500:15, 20 August 2024 diff hist −11‎ Pat DiCicco ‎ rmv peacockish "well-known" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 August 2024

• 15:5015:50, 19 August 2024 diff hist +68‎ Jay Kay ‎ 26 million copies of what kind of product? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 August 2024

• 08:3908:39, 18 August 2024 diff hist +3‎ Stuyvesant Town–Peter Cooper Village ‎ →‎Demographics: clarify "a change" to "an increase" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:3608:36, 18 August 2024 diff hist +1‎ Stuyvesant Town–Peter Cooper Village ‎ →‎2015 sale: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:3408:34, 18 August 2024 diff hist +1‎ SL Green Realty ‎ update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:3308:33, 18 August 2024 diff hist +1‎ Stuyvesant Town–Peter Cooper Village ‎ →‎2015 sale: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:4707:47, 18 August 2024 diff hist −6‎ Tracy Morgan ‎ →‎Health issues: correct euphemistic "struggled with alcoholism" to "been an alcoholic" per MOS:EUPHEMISM current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:0907:09, 18 August 2024 diff hist −6‎ Alexander Skarsgård ‎ →‎Personal life: correct euphemistic "welcomed" to "had" per MOS:EUPHEMISM: Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a fan magazine Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3805:38, 18 August 2024 diff hist +8‎ Jennifer Lien ‎ →‎Career: correct and clarify caption Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 August 2024

• 05:4205:42, 17 August 2024 diff hist −5‎ Bill Kristol ‎ →‎Opposition to Donald Trump: correct ambiguous "would replace" to "replaced" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 August 2024

• 17:2917:29, 16 August 2024 diff hist +195‎ Talk:Hartford–Springfield ‎ →‎Map?: new section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
• 07:0907:09, 16 August 2024 diff hist +2‎ Retractable hardtop ‎ update verb tense current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3806:38, 16 August 2024 diff hist −567‎ Walter Chrysler ‎ →‎Later years: rmv unjustified quotation marks from name of house; rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA; rmv irrelevant, trivial and ambiguous "which it remains today" per MOS:RELTIME; rmv irrelevant paragraph about his son's horse dealings after Chrysler's death, which belongs in the son's article if anywhere; correct euphemistic "succumbed to" to "died of" per MOS:EUPHEMISM current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2306:23, 16 August 2024 diff hist +23‎ Walter Chrysler ‎ →‎Ancestry: need to cite reliable references for "Old Stock" statement Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0706:07, 16 August 2024 diff hist −6‎ Corey Lewandowski ‎ rmv "Corey" per MOS:SURNAME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 August 2024

• 20:5520:55, 15 August 2024 diff hist −5‎ David Shuster ‎ →‎Early and personal life: correct euphemistic "welcomed" to "had" per MOS:EUPHEMISM: this is an encyclopedia, not a fan magazine current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit