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4 February 2023
- 06:4306:43, 4 February 2023 diff hist +1 Darkest Hour (film) comma
3 February 2023
- 21:4721:47, 3 February 2023 diff hist −11 Athena (1954 film) redundancy
- 20:4820:48, 3 February 2023 diff hist −14 Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas then-upcoming is redundant; unnecessary; written for the film; you don't write songs for past films
- 20:4520:45, 3 February 2023 diff hist +1 Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas commas
- 17:1317:13, 3 February 2023 diff hist −69 Ramin Ganeshram →Work as a nonprofit director and novelist: writing around unsourced praise Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 February 2023
- 20:1520:15, 1 February 2023 diff hist −8 Sweet Liberty general consensus is redundant
- 20:1220:12, 1 February 2023 diff hist +1 Sweet Liberty comma
31 January 2023
- 02:4302:43, 31 January 2023 diff hist −16 Zorba the Greek (film) "titular," you never need.
30 January 2023
- 21:0421:04, 30 January 2023 diff hist 0 East of Eden (film) lends; the verb is lends
26 January 2023
- 05:2605:26, 26 January 2023 diff hist +5 Jonah Goldberg You graduate from high school.
- 04:2604:26, 26 January 2023 diff hist −14 Duel (1971 film) intentionally waiting is redundant
23 January 2023
- 03:4203:42, 23 January 2023 diff hist +1 Dennis Morgan comma
- 01:4801:48, 23 January 2023 diff hist −3 Jack Warden You never need "the former."
22 January 2023
- 18:0018:00, 22 January 2023 diff hist +1 List of Academy Awards ceremonies two commas in dates
- 06:5306:53, 22 January 2023 diff hist −10 Christopher Walken →Legacy and popularity: you never need "the latter." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:4806:48, 22 January 2023 diff hist +1 Pennies from Heaven (1981 film) →Box office: commas Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 January 2023
- 20:3720:37, 21 January 2023 diff hist −11 Waterloo Bridge (1940 film) removing the illogical "belatedly."
20 January 2023
- 04:2404:24, 20 January 2023 diff hist +1 Sid Caesar two commas on appositives, people
- 03:2803:28, 20 January 2023 diff hist −3 Bowery You never need "eponymous." Tag: Reverted
19 January 2023
- 19:5719:57, 19 January 2023 diff hist −26 Quincy, Massachusetts →Post-Revolution: delete illogical statement that this Quincy is one of the subsequent cities named Quincy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5519:55, 19 January 2023 diff hist +1 Quincy, Massachusetts →Post-Revolution: comma Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 January 2023
- 14:4414:44, 18 January 2023 diff hist +9 Lillian Gish You never need "the former" or "the latter." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:3614:36, 18 January 2023 diff hist +2 Brian Donlevy →Paramount: You never need "the latter" or "the former." Just use your words. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 January 2023
- 17:4017:40, 17 January 2023 diff hist 0 Atonement (2007 film) You never need "the latter" or "the former."
16 January 2023
- 21:1721:17, 16 January 2023 diff hist −2 Sinking of the Titanic you never need "eponymous" -- just give the title of the film
- 16:4516:45, 16 January 2023 diff hist −22 432 Park Avenue →Apartment selling prices: still no penthouses Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4216:42, 16 January 2023 diff hist −2 432 Park Avenue →Interior: Highest units, or top-floor units, as this building has no penthouses (rooftop apartments with a different outer shape). Salespeople often misuse the term "penthouse" to pump up prices. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 January 2023
- 19:4019:40, 14 January 2023 diff hist −15 Martha Reeves →Career: reordered paragraphs to get rid of the awkward "referenced in the following paragraph"
- 18:5718:57, 14 January 2023 diff hist +1 The Ladies Man (2000 film) there's revolve around, or center on, but there's no center around
- 03:0403:04, 14 January 2023 diff hist −1 Glenda Farrell age 66, not aged 66
13 January 2023
- 21:3521:35, 13 January 2023 diff hist −122 Jesse Jackson Jr. →Early life, education, and early political career: fixed garbled sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 January 2023
- 01:3501:35, 12 January 2023 diff hist −4 Amistad (film) no need for "admit"; fixing spelling as well
- 01:3501:35, 12 January 2023 diff hist −7 Amistad (film) trying to clean up this garbled writing
- 01:3401:34, 12 January 2023 diff hist −2 Amistad (film) wept
- 01:2701:27, 12 January 2023 diff hist +1 Joseph Cinqué appositives get two commas
10 January 2023
- 04:4304:43, 10 January 2023 diff hist −23 Tony Curtis no reason to mention Kansas Raiders in the first paragraph
- 02:2502:25, 10 January 2023 diff hist +1 Boston Strangler comma
8 January 2023
- 20:4020:40, 8 January 2023 diff hist −9 Reeve Lindbergh comma, and no one knows what an eponymous aunt might be
- 19:2619:26, 8 January 2023 diff hist +1 Charles Lindbergh comma
7 January 2023
- 23:1923:19, 7 January 2023 diff hist 0 Dirty Mary, Crazy Larry no hyphen with ly
3 January 2023
- 21:3821:38, 3 January 2023 diff hist 0 Lana Turner no hyphen with -ly
- 21:3421:34, 3 January 2023 diff hist +1 Lana Turner comma
- 03:1603:16, 3 January 2023 diff hist −26 Sacco and Vanzetti it's clear; you never need "respectively."
- 03:0903:09, 3 January 2023 diff hist −11 Leopold and Loeb of course they grew up with their own families; you never need "respective."
- 03:0803:08, 3 January 2023 diff hist +2 Leopold and Loeb "compared with" to show difference, "compared to" shows similarity.
- 02:5702:57, 3 January 2023 diff hist +1 John T. Scopes two commas in dates
31 December 2022
- 20:4320:43, 31 December 2022 diff hist −36 David O. Selznick Unsupported statement removed
- 17:5417:54, 31 December 2022 diff hist −1 Adley Rutschman →Professional career: canceled Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 December 2022
- 19:3919:39, 28 December 2022 diff hist −45 Robert Morris (financier) None of these "ironically" phrases refer to ironies.
- 02:2402:24, 28 December 2022 diff hist −10 Jonah Goldberg A false claim, not a suggestion, according to the references cited.