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18 July 2019
- 04:5004:50, 18 July 2019 diff hist −696 Peggy Guggenheim →Portrayal in popular culture: ce; several more "Peggy"s; prune much irrelevant detail about the radio play
- 04:3404:34, 18 July 2019 diff hist −22 Peggy Guggenheim →The collection, after World War II: ce; rmv two more "Peggy"s
- 04:2604:26, 18 July 2019 diff hist −30 Peggy Guggenheim →Plans for a museum: rmv five more instances of "Peggy"
- 04:2204:22, 18 July 2019 diff hist +4 Peggy Guggenheim →Early life: inheritance, involvement in the art and writing community: link
- 04:1904:19, 18 July 2019 diff hist −4 Peggy Guggenheim →Early life: inheritance, involvement in the art and writing community: puffery; surname
- 04:1604:16, 18 July 2019 diff hist −6 Peggy Guggenheim →Early life: inheritance, involvement in the art/writing community: correct slash in section title to "and"; correct "Peggy" to "Guggenheim"; correct meaningless "in today's currency" to the specific year; prune editorial flourishes
- 03:5103:51, 18 July 2019 diff hist −22 Peggy Guggenheim ce; link
- 03:4503:45, 18 July 2019 diff hist −2 Max Ernst ce
- 03:2903:29, 18 July 2019 diff hist −22 Dock Ellis →Retirement: puffery
- 03:2603:26, 18 July 2019 diff hist −28 Dock Ellis →Personal life: euphemism
- 03:1903:19, 18 July 2019 diff hist +28 Julián fix Julián Retegi entry
17 July 2019
- 19:2419:24, 17 July 2019 diff hist +1 G-suit ce
- 18:3218:32, 17 July 2019 diff hist −73 African clawed frog →As pets: replace unnecessarily wordy and unencyclopedic "The astute pet owner will recognize the difference, however, because of the following characteristics:" w/ "Identifiable differences are:"
- 08:0608:06, 17 July 2019 diff hist −7 Lakshmi (disambiguation) →People: puffery
- 07:4607:46, 17 July 2019 diff hist +162 Daminozide →Current views: biased reference source
- 07:3507:35, 17 July 2019 diff hist −4 Daminozide →Backlash: ce; rmv unjustified italics
- 07:3207:32, 17 July 2019 diff hist +1 Daminozide →Backlash: contraction
- 07:2307:23, 17 July 2019 diff hist −18 Starfleet Academy rmv unnecessary and inappropriate self-reference "(see image below)": the reader doesn't have to be told to look at an image, it's inappropriate and presumptuous for WP to instruct the reader to do ANYTHING, and if the image were ever changed or moved, the instruction would be in error—anyway, I looked at the image before reading the article, and most other readers would do the same
- 06:3306:33, 17 July 2019 diff hist +1 Everything Is Illuminated →Historical background: typo ("4,00" should be "4,000")
- 06:3206:32, 17 July 2019 diff hist −1 Everything Is Illuminated the correct idiom is "in search of", not "in search for" ("searching for" WOULD be correct)
- 00:2600:26, 17 July 2019 diff hist +4 Arletty →Early years: italicize book title
- 00:2400:24, 17 July 2019 diff hist −6 Arletty →Early years: puffery
- 00:2100:21, 17 July 2019 diff hist 0 Arletty →Collaboration: relocate ref from beginning to end of quotation, where it belongs
16 July 2019
- 15:0015:00, 16 July 2019 diff hist −3 Weekend Update correct biased "claim" to neutral "say"
- 08:0808:08, 16 July 2019 diff hist −10 Abyssinia (disambiguation) →Places: instruction
- 07:4307:43, 16 July 2019 diff hist −1 Invictus (film) comma
- 07:1307:13, 16 July 2019 diff hist +5 Interstate Commerce Commission →Abolition: ce
- 00:3000:30, 16 July 2019 diff hist +3 Snoopy →Rerun van Pelt: ce
15 July 2019
- 06:0606:06, 15 July 2019 diff hist +1 Aquaculture →Mariculture: ce
- 04:1004:10, 15 July 2019 diff hist +5 -hou ce
- 04:0704:07, 15 July 2019 diff hist +1 Name of Jersey →Historic mentions: correct "both ... or ..." to "both ... and ..."
14 July 2019
- 23:5923:59, 14 July 2019 diff hist −4 Ivan Bunin →Private life: correct unencyclopedic flourish "dying day" to "death"
- 23:5423:54, 14 July 2019 diff hist +14 Ivan Bunin →The war years: add caption to image
- 23:4923:49, 14 July 2019 diff hist +138 Ivan Bunin →Emigration: the caption needs to identify which two of the six identifiable people in the photograph are the Bunins
- 23:2423:24, 14 July 2019 diff hist +10 Nobel Prize in Literature missing word
- 21:2721:27, 14 July 2019 diff hist −1 Neanderthal →Microbiome: correct "along-side"
- 21:2621:26, 14 July 2019 diff hist −1 Neanderthal →Evolution: ce
- 21:2321:23, 14 July 2019 diff hist −37 Neanderthal →Name and classification: rmv editorial analysis ", at least in 'layman's American English'", not supported by the cited reference, which makes no such comment about that pronunciation
- 18:5518:55, 14 July 2019 diff hist +156 Koi →Etymology: ce; correct {{cquote}}, which is only for pull quotes, which this isn't, to {{quote}}; tag this quotation for clarification: a quotation in Chinese (or whatever language this is) is not only useless but highly distracting and annoying in an ENGLISH encyclopedia unless it is translated into English. It should be translated or removed.
- 18:2018:20, 14 July 2019 diff hist −30 Mike Piazza →Retirement: rmv unencyclopedic editorializing "were also afforded the immense honor" and tempering associated verbiage, to let the facts speak for themselves and readers determine their significance
- 11:3811:38, 14 July 2019 diff hist −5 The Little Mermaid →Debate over ending: rmv "that", which is used to introduce an indirect quotation ("He says that she will come") but NOT to introduce a direct quotation ("He says, 'She will come'" is correct, but "He says that, 'She will come'"—like "Andersen wrote to a friend that, 'I have not...'"—is incorrect)
- 05:0405:04, 14 July 2019 diff hist +57 Egyptian Mau →Origins: need to spell out what "ndf" means
- 01:4201:42, 14 July 2019 diff hist −20 Iguazu Falls rmv infobox image caption "View of Iguazu Falls", which adds no information
- 00:1900:19, 14 July 2019 diff hist −4 Students for a Democratic Society (2006 organization) "New" is not part of the organization's name
13 July 2019
- 23:5723:57, 13 July 2019 diff hist −15 Minnie Mouse →Voice actors: ce
- 23:5623:56, 13 July 2019 diff hist +12 Minnie Mouse →Mickey, Donald, Goofy: The Three Musketeers: ce
- 23:5423:54, 13 July 2019 diff hist +4 Minnie Mouse →Television: ce
- 23:5023:50, 13 July 2019 diff hist −27 Minnie Mouse →Contemporary appearances: ce; italics, not quotes, on album, series titles; rmv unencyclopedic "such illustrious names as"
- 23:4223:42, 13 July 2019 diff hist −19 Minnie Mouse →Minnie's Yoo-Hoo: quotations should not be italicized; ce
- 23:3923:39, 13 July 2019 diff hist +4 Minnie Mouse →Origins of the character: italics