User contributions for 84.212.132.95

8 January 2024

• 23:4023:40, 8 January 2024 diff hist −41‎ Talk:Brazil ‎ →‎Hy Brasil: Tidy up after not being allowed a preview.
• 23:3923:39, 8 January 2024 diff hist +766‎ Talk:Brazil ‎ →‎Hy Brasil: new section Tag: New topic

7 January 2024

• 14:2214:22, 7 January 2024 diff hist +5‎ BOP clade ‎ Phrasing. current

20 October 2023

• 19:4419:44, 20 October 2023 diff hist +7‎ Zoo ‎ →‎Enlightenment Era: Guessing at obviously missing word.
• 19:4419:44, 20 October 2023 diff hist +7‎ Zoo ‎ →‎Enlightenment Era: Include the first half of his forename.

15 October 2023

• 22:4822:48, 15 October 2023 diff hist −15‎ John Monash ‎ →‎Commander of the Australian Corps: shred a badly-constructed over-long sentence into two, hopefully more intelligible, sentences.
• 22:4122:41, 15 October 2023 diff hist +10‎ John Monash ‎ →‎Commander of the Australian Corps: Punctuation to clarify sentence structure.
• 22:3722:37, 15 October 2023 diff hist +21‎ John Monash ‎ →‎Commander of the Australian Corps: First mention of Birdwood should at least be linked to "who the **** is that ?"
• 22:2422:24, 15 October 2023 diff hist −1‎ Peaceful penetration ‎ →‎Requirements: Spurious comma. current
• 20:1220:12, 15 October 2023 diff hist +1,611‎ Talk:Quasithin group ‎ →‎Unintelligible gibberish.: new section Tag: New topic

17 September 2023

• 14:4114:41, 17 September 2023 diff hist −5‎ Richardson Maturity Model ‎ →‎Level 3: Hypermedia controls: Phrasing.
• 14:3914:39, 17 September 2023 diff hist +15‎ Richardson Maturity Model ‎ →‎Level 2: HTTP verbs: Phrasing
• 14:3714:37, 17 September 2023 diff hist −7‎ Richardson Maturity Model ‎ →‎Level 1: Resources: Cleaner wording.

20 August 2023

• 07:3507:35, 20 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ Talk:Market (economics) ‎ →‎Meaning of "free market": fix mark-up
• 07:3507:35, 20 August 2023 diff hist +848‎ Talk:Market (economics) ‎ →‎Meaning of "free market": new section Tag: New topic

15 August 2023

• 22:4122:41, 15 August 2023 diff hist −10‎ Empire ‎ →‎Modern period: Skip duplicate "history"

8 August 2023

• 21:5721:57, 8 August 2023 diff hist +1‎ Quil (instruction set architecture) ‎ →‎Underlying quantum abstract machine: I take it the Hadamard gate does not depend on parameters, rather than *being* a parameter that a gate mustn't depend on.

6 August 2023

• 16:0916:09, 6 August 2023 diff hist +2‎ Émilie du Châtelet ‎ →‎Illusions and happiness: A balance would imply that each opposes the other; but she proposed illusion and morality in parallel, not in opposition.
• 16:0116:01, 6 August 2023 diff hist −2‎ Émilie du Châtelet ‎ →‎Translation and commentary on Newton's Principia: No need for the 's after when you have "of" before.
• 15:5515:55, 6 August 2023 diff hist +64‎ Émilie du Châtelet ‎ →‎Advocacy of kinetic energy: The kinetic energy, not the speed, is proportional to the height from which the balls were dropped.

30 July 2023

• 23:3523:35, 30 July 2023 diff hist +7‎ Samaritan's Purse ‎ →‎Controversy: It's a question, it deserves a question-mark.
• 23:3123:31, 30 July 2023 diff hist 0‎ Samaritan's Purse ‎ →‎Controversy: eh, the "quoted" part was longer, let's be honest.
• 23:3023:30, 30 July 2023 diff hist +9‎ Samaritan's Purse ‎ →‎Controversy: oops - missed a word.
• 23:2923:29, 30 July 2023 diff hist −1‎ Samaritan's Purse ‎ →‎Controversy: Phrasing. passive -> active
• 23:2423:24, 30 July 2023 diff hist +1‎ Samaritan's Purse ‎ →‎Ukraine aid: har De ingen grammatik - i dine egen språke ?
• 22:2422:24, 30 July 2023 diff hist +25‎ Alvin Hellerstein ‎ →‎World Trade Center: Linkify 9-11
• 09:3309:33, 30 July 2023 diff hist −1‎ History of Vietnam ‎ research ... has (the plural archaeologists are not the subject of the verb)

14 June 2023

• 19:2819:28, 14 June 2023 diff hist +541‎ Talk:Rolling shutter ‎ Suggest mention of its use in crypto attack.

11 June 2023

• 19:3719:37, 11 June 2023 diff hist 0‎ Commedia dell'arte ‎ →‎History: Relocate misplaced comma
• 19:3619:36, 11 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ Commedia dell'arte ‎ →‎History: Close actual parenthesis.
• 19:3119:31, 11 June 2023 diff hist +1‎ Commedia dell'arte ‎ →‎History: grammar fix; end the parenthetical clause.

14 May 2023

• 19:2219:22, 14 May 2023 diff hist −9‎ Iron Curtain ‎ remove redundant "republic" before USSR

23 April 2023

• 19:5919:59, 23 April 2023 diff hist 0‎ Whooping cough ‎ either/or nesting fix

11 April 2023

• 20:2320:23, 11 April 2023 diff hist −4‎ John Peel (huntsman) ‎ If he died first, then his friends that helped pay off the debts were really helping his heirs or estate to do so; he wasn't involved, to be helped.

7 April 2023

• 23:3823:38, 7 April 2023 diff hist +530‎ Talk:Peck ‎ →‎Peter Piper: Critique the objection to Peter Piper. Mention one other reference.

26 March 2023

• 12:3812:38, 26 March 2023 diff hist 0‎ Kilogram ‎ →‎Acceptance of the Giorgi system, leading to the MKSA system and the SI: fix usage of "both"

16 November 2022

• 22:3322:33, 16 November 2022 diff hist −4‎ Mathematical logic ‎ Grammar glitch.

8 October 2022

• 21:2321:23, 8 October 2022 diff hist 0‎ Genetic drift ‎ →‎Time to loss with both drift and mutation: Misplaced spacing mistake in previous.
• 21:2221:22, 8 October 2022 diff hist +5‎ Genetic drift ‎ →‎Time to loss with both drift and mutation: If the preceding formula is to believed the time is 1/m (which is much greater than N_e), not 1/N_e (albeit this is indeed much less than 1/m).
• 21:0321:03, 8 October 2022 diff hist +33‎ Genetic drift ‎ →‎Time to fixation or loss: Failed to specify meaning of N (without suffix e)

2 October 2022

• 20:2920:29, 2 October 2022 diff hist −6‎ Auguste Comte ‎ →‎Comte's positivism: Use proper ordered-list mark-up rather than inline bracketed numbers...

9 September 2022

• 19:2619:26, 9 September 2022 diff hist +3‎ Resplendent quetzal ‎ Grammar fix; missing subject (preceding clause's subject was "its diet" rather than "it")

16 June 2022

• 20:5520:55, 16 June 2022 diff hist −3‎ Harold Shipman ‎ →‎Trial and imprisonment: Removed stray "by"

22 January 2022

• 12:1912:19, 22 January 2022 diff hist +238‎ Betzy Kjelsberg ‎ →‎Legacy: Mention the statue

14 November 2021

• 11:0211:02, 14 November 2021 diff hist +1‎ Campanian Ignimbrite eruption ‎ →‎Phlegraean Periods: Missing comma, to terminate a sub-clause.

24 June 2021

• 20:3620:36, 24 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Adrian Belew ‎ →‎Talking Heads, GaGa and The Tom Tom Club (1979–1982): punctuation

23 June 2021

• 20:0320:03, 23 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ Chaeronea ‎ Corrected distance from Delphi: OSM shows it as a 37km bike-ride away, less than half the distance claimed.

15 June 2021

• 09:3709:37, 15 June 2021 diff hist +34‎ Row- and column-major order ‎ →‎Transposition: Reading in the wrong mode is far more broken when the matrix isn't square !

20 May 2021

• 16:1116:11, 20 May 2021 diff hist +2‎ Parallel postulate ‎ →‎Equivalent properties: Phrasing.

15 May 2021

• 10:4910:49, 15 May 2021 diff hist +1‎ Silicone ‎ →‎Synthesis: If it's an acetate, one of the H is bound to the COO, only two to the other C.