User contributions for BK2146
A user with 72 edits. Account created on 6 May 2007.
8 August 2019
- 00:2100:21, 8 August 2019 diff hist −7 Think and Grow Rich Edited first two paragraphs for style. Tag: Visual edit
8 November 2015
- 12:2412:24, 8 November 2015 diff hist 0 John Bates Thurston →Political life in Fiji: style fix
30 September 2013
- 17:4917:49, 30 September 2013 diff hist +24 The New York Times Errant grammar- little more than a minor edit, but I did re-word a sentence to move it from passive to active voice.
- 01:5601:56, 30 September 2013 diff hist +5 Norfolk, Virginia Editing out some passive voice statements. Grammar edits only.
29 September 2013
- 13:2913:29, 29 September 2013 diff hist 0 m Wells Theatre No edit summary
- 13:2913:29, 29 September 2013 diff hist −4 Wells Theatre A few more wiki links, removed stub notice.
- 13:2513:25, 29 September 2013 diff hist −98 Wells Theatre Edited for style. Added wiki links. Removed weasel words (e.g. replaced "legitimate" with "theatrical.")
- 13:0413:04, 29 September 2013 diff hist +27 David P. Dobkin Removed passive voice in first two paragraphs. No content changed.
18 September 2013
- 21:4521:45, 18 September 2013 diff hist +4 m Sesquicentennial of Japanese Embassy to the United States No edit summary
- 21:4421:44, 18 September 2013 diff hist 0 m Sesquicentennial of Japanese Embassy to the United States No edit summary
- 21:4321:43, 18 September 2013 diff hist −105 Sesquicentennial of Japanese Embassy to the United States Edited (some) for grammar, changed verb usage to past tense.
- 21:2921:29, 18 September 2013 diff hist −2 Sketches for My Sweetheart the Drunk Cleaned up passive voice in summation paragraph
- 18:4018:40, 18 September 2013 diff hist −14 Larchmont-Edgewater Removed passive voice in final sentence
5 September 2013
- 14:1014:10, 5 September 2013 diff hist +29 Larchmont-Edgewater Linkage fixes
- 14:0514:05, 5 September 2013 diff hist +9 Larchmont-Edgewater Added reference list, removed link to non-existent Hampton Boulevard page.
- 13:5713:57, 5 September 2013 diff hist +175 Larchmont-Edgewater Added reference, removed stub template. Removed non-existent Hampton Boulevard link. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 13:4113:41, 5 September 2013 diff hist +5 Larchmont-Edgewater Wording/clarification Tag: Visual edit
26 July 2013
- 11:1911:19, 26 July 2013 diff hist +139 United States Armed Forces School of Music Changed header paragraph to reflect "deconsolidation" of Army & Navy schools in 2010. Tag: Visual edit
- 11:1211:12, 26 July 2013 diff hist +54 Ghent (disambiguation) No edit summary
10 September 2010
- 00:2900:29, 10 September 2010 diff hist +3 m Bunka Fashion College corrected comma placement, cleaned up style
- 00:2600:26, 10 September 2010 diff hist +54 United States Armed Forces School of Music NAB Little Creek merged with Ft Story in October 2009; the base was given a Virginia Beach address in February 2010.
4 November 2008
- 14:4014:40, 4 November 2008 diff hist +8 m United States Armed Forces School of Music fixed link to official site
- 14:3914:39, 4 November 2008 diff hist 0 United States Armed Forces School of Music The name of the school was changed in a ceremony in April 2004 to "Navy School of Music" from the former "Armed Forces School of Music." Refer to the official website.
27 June 2008
- 12:4312:43, 27 June 2008 diff hist −8 Moe Berg removed some passive voice constructions.
25 June 2008
- 12:3912:39, 25 June 2008 diff hist +3 Iloilo eliminating passive voice in opening paragraph
8 April 2008
- 08:5408:54, 8 April 2008 diff hist −23 Green Run, Virginia removed stub notice
30 May 2007
- 18:2718:27, 30 May 2007 diff hist −13 m Virginia Beach, Virginia →First landing, Adam Thoroughgood: grammar, unnecessary prepositional clause "from England"
- 18:2318:23, 30 May 2007 diff hist +77 Virginia Beach, Virginia →Museums and cultural arts: Sandler Center info, cleaned up Cayce section to neutral POV.
- 18:1318:13, 30 May 2007 diff hist −63 Virginia Beach, Virginia →Virginia Beach: growth of a resort: Removed passive voice in opening paragraph, also deleted sentence about Seatack name- that's what the link is for
- 18:0718:07, 30 May 2007 diff hist −12 Virginia Beach, Virginia →Films: eliminated weasel words "Good films"
- 18:0618:06, 30 May 2007 diff hist +1 Virginia Beach, Virginia →Military bases: deleted Langley AFB from list of bases- it's located in Hampton! Also listed NAB Little Creek as a neighbor due to it's Norfolk address. Cleaned up BRAC info to neutral view
- 17:5217:52, 30 May 2007 diff hist +1 m Virginia Beach, Virginia →Education
- 17:5117:51, 30 May 2007 diff hist −3 m Virginia Beach, Virginia →Education
11 May 2007
- 11:1911:19, 11 May 2007 diff hist −11 m People Power Revolution →More Defections: eliminated unnecessary clause "in the Philippines."
- 11:1811:18, 11 May 2007 diff hist −15 People Power Revolution →Rising mass support: case agreement, removed non-neutral language (surprisingly, e.g.)
- 10:3010:30, 11 May 2007 diff hist +4 m Common raven No edit summary
10 May 2007
- 12:3612:36, 10 May 2007 diff hist −10 Ramon Mitra Jr. →Personal life: style edits
- 12:3312:33, 10 May 2007 diff hist +1 m Ramon Mitra Jr. →Political life
- 12:3212:32, 10 May 2007 diff hist +54 Ramon Mitra Jr. →Political life: added martial law link, clarified language
- 12:2612:26, 10 May 2007 diff hist +3 m Ramon Mitra Jr. →Early life and career: grammar, style fixes
9 May 2007
- 00:0600:06, 9 May 2007 diff hist −8 m 2007 Philippine general election →[[Genuine Opposition]] (GO)
- 00:0100:01, 9 May 2007 diff hist +3 m 2007 Philippine general election →Official candidates
- 00:0000:00, 9 May 2007 diff hist −38 2007 Philippine general election Clarified language in the "Official Candidates" section
8 May 2007
- 19:2919:29, 8 May 2007 diff hist +23 User:BK2146 No edit summary current
- 14:0514:05, 8 May 2007 diff hist +220 So What chord added reference info
- 03:5603:56, 8 May 2007 diff hist +16 m Nueva Ecija →Economy: Cleaned up sentence fragments
- 03:4803:48, 8 May 2007 diff hist −18 m Western Visayas edited Filipino usage to conform to standard American usage
- 03:4603:46, 8 May 2007 diff hist −22 m Iloilo grammar, style edits
- 03:3903:39, 8 May 2007 diff hist +22 User:BK2146 No edit summary
- 03:3803:38, 8 May 2007 diff hist +12 User:BK2146 No edit summary
