User contributions for Black Walnut
A user with 1,806 edits. Account created on 29 November 2006.
24 July 2024
- 06:4606:46, 24 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Infrasound →Sources: ce: fix HTML error: extra closing angle bracket in "ref>><ref"
- 01:1001:10, 24 July 2024 diff hist −1 m Schleswig-Holstein →lead: ce: grammar: "on the other hands" -> "on the other hand" current
23 July 2024
- 07:5607:56, 23 July 2024 diff hist +2 m Numerical Recipes →Content: ce: syntax current
- 07:5107:51, 23 July 2024 diff hist +12 m Numerical Recipes →Overview: "Each version" -> "Each variant of the book".
- 06:3706:37, 23 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Changing All the Time →lead: ce: syntax: "original band's name" -> "band's original name". Clearly, the band changed its name, not its members. current
21 July 2024
- 06:3806:38, 21 July 2024 diff hist −7 m Antifa (United States) →lead: ce: syntax
19 July 2024
- 07:2007:20, 19 July 2024 diff hist −3 m Dune (1984 film) →Plot: ce: grammar: "the Harkonnens" -> "the Harkonnen". The plural form does not append an "s".
- 07:1407:14, 19 July 2024 diff hist −8 Dune (1984 film) →Plot: changed: "could jeopardize spice production forever" -> delete "forever", to match what is actually stated by the characters in the film. Even in the books, this possibility isn't revealed to the reader until much later.
26 June 2024
- 07:3807:38, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Minix →top: ce: spelling: repeat same correction to additional instances, which I missed in my last edit.
- 07:3407:34, 26 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Minix →top: ce: spelling "BSD-3-clause license" -> "BSD 3-clause license"
10 June 2024
- 06:2106:21, 10 June 2024 diff hist +8 m Allura Red AC →lead: ce: split long sentence, to improve clarity.
6 June 2024
- 05:5205:52, 6 June 2024 diff hist +119 m Royal Navy →Splendid isolation: added anchor to fix broken link from article "Anglo-German naval arms race".
- 05:1405:14, 6 June 2024 diff hist +22 m Royal Navy →Splendid isolation: ce: syntax: use parenthese to clearify that the sentence contains 4 locations, not 5.
- 04:5904:59, 6 June 2024 diff hist +30 N Caitlyn De Ville this page catches a likely spelling error to redirect to the correct article: Caitlyn De Ville -> Caitlin De Ville. There is no other article by the misspelled name, so this page causes no ambiguity, so far. current Tags: New redirect Uncategorized redirect
- 04:4004:40, 6 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Help:Edit summary →lead: ce: syntax
- 04:3604:36, 6 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Anglo-German naval arms race →top: ce: syntax: added missing comma at end of main clause ("that, while") and replaced pair of commas to parentheses. Reasons: in this context, the text "the inconclusive battle..." was syntactically unexpected by the reader. Thus, the comma tended to be interpretted as introducing the subordinate clause ("the commerce raiding strategy..."), which the reader *was* expecting. The parentheses make it clear that this is a parenthetical sentence.
5 June 2024
- 19:5119:51, 5 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Victoria Falls →During independence movements: ce: spelling
2 June 2024
- 16:4716:47, 2 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Zapatista Army of National Liberation →Religion: ce: spelling
- 08:0908:09, 2 June 2024 diff hist 0 m User:Vincecate →Next 50 years is critical time for life in our galaxy: ce: syntax current
- 08:0408:04, 2 June 2024 diff hist +1 m User:Vincecate →Has to be something better than General Relativity: ce: spelling, syntax
19 May 2024
- 11:3111:31, 19 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Alaska →top: ce: reduce verbiage: "largest .. by area size" -> "largest ... by area" When speaking of "largest area" we are by definition, speaking of the area's size.
- 11:2811:28, 19 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Alaska →top: ce: rewrite sentence to improve clarity: Yukon isn't a province but, like BC, it is part of Canada. Reorder, placing the longer border (Yukon) first.
- 11:1611:16, 19 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Western United States →Subregions: ce: rearranged to linear georgraphic order: "Idaho, Montana, Oregon, Washington" -> "Montana, Idaho, Oregon, Washington"
17 May 2024
- 11:4411:44, 17 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Alaska →Colonization: ce: syntax
- 11:3611:36, 17 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Finnish Declaration of Independence →top: syntax: "the Russia" -> "Russia" current Tag: Manual revert
9 May 2024
- 06:4806:48, 9 May 2024 diff hist −93 Phone connector (audio) →TRRS standards: ce: reduced verbiage. split long sentences.
- 04:1404:14, 9 May 2024 diff hist +9 Talk:Second Italo-Ethiopian War →End date again: changed to more descriptive title: "End date again" -> "End date - edit warring" Tag: Reverted
- 03:2403:24, 9 May 2024 diff hist −54 m USB-C →Power issues with cables: ce: reduced verbiage
6 May 2024
- 03:5603:56, 6 May 2024 diff hist −87 Line Islands →Time zone realignment: ce: reduced verbiage
- 03:5203:52, 6 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Line Islands →Time zone realignment: ce: grammar, syntax
- 01:3901:39, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Claudia gens →lead: ce: fix grammar: "at ancient Rome" -> "in ancient Rome" Tag: Reverted
2 May 2024
- 08:3608:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Postal codes in Sweden →Format: ce: spelling: "any more" -> "anymore".
1 May 2024
- 11:3611:36, 1 May 2024 diff hist −3 m Gemini (protocol) →Protocol: ce: split long sentence.
30 April 2024
- 19:1719:17, 30 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Talk:January 6 United States Capitol attack →What is a "method"?: ce: fix 1 typo.
25 April 2024
- 23:1423:14, 25 April 2024 diff hist +21 m Part number →Significant versus non-significant part numbers: ce: clarify
- 23:1223:12, 25 April 2024 diff hist −5 m Part number →Significant versus non-significant part numbers: ce: better wording
- 23:1023:10, 25 April 2024 diff hist −138 m Part number →Significant versus non-significant part numbers: ce: syntax, reduce verbiage, adjust to encyclopedic tone
- 22:4922:49, 25 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Part number →Significant versus non-significant part numbers: ce: "length of shank" -> "shank length", to be consistent with rest of sentence
21 April 2024
- 07:3907:39, 21 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Talk:Second Italo-Ethiopian War →Pyrrhic Ethiopian Victory + Dates: ce: remove certain newlines from awkward locations.
20 April 2024
- 20:2720:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist −75 Eurasian eagle-owl →Longevity: ce: reduced verbiage. fixed awkward wording. corrected syntax.
- 20:1320:13, 20 April 2024 diff hist −13 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: split paragraph in 2: name; appearance. reduced verbiage; split long sentences.
- 20:0820:08, 20 April 2024 diff hist −213 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: reduced verbiage, corrected syntax. Moved "bird", which was verbiage, to the first sentence, where it can aid non-native speakers.
- 19:4219:42, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: semantic intent: "or"->"and".
- 19:3319:33, 20 April 2024 diff hist −33 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: reduced verbiage
- 19:2619:26, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: moved count of spp to 1st paragraph. split one more paragraph in 2: diet; reproduction
- 19:2019:20, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Eurasian eagle-owl →lead: ce: split into 2 paragraphs: habitat; diet & reproduction.
- 19:1419:14, 20 April 2024 diff hist −39 m Eurasian eagle-owl →top: ce: reduce verbiage
18 April 2024
- 21:1921:19, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Australia →States and territories: ce: syntax Tag: Reverted
- 17:4217:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist −4 m R. J. Rummel →top: ce: syntax
- 17:3117:31, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Barents Sea →top: ce: syntax
