User contributions for CRobClark
A user with 91 edits. Account created on 11 October 2007.
22 December 2023
- 03:4103:41, 22 December 2023 diff hist +2 m Appendicitis In the "Diagnosis" section, I replaced "emesis" with "vomiting", since a search on emesis is redirected to vomiting. I personally (not being a Doctor) have never heard of the word emesis.
20 December 2022
- 19:0519:05, 20 December 2022 diff hist +9 m Inferior temporal gyrus Change of wording in Extrastriate Body Area (EBA) under [Object recognition].
20 August 2022
- 21:2221:22, 20 August 2022 diff hist −1 Gelato Removed unneeded coma (brought, his grandfather) in the History section.
18 November 2021
- 18:1518:15, 18 November 2021 diff hist −40 m Amphetamine Remove unnecessary repeated reference in first paragraph.
30 July 2021
- 18:0718:07, 30 July 2021 diff hist −3 m Genesis flood narrative Changed "…finally stop up." to "…finally stop.".
- 17:4617:46, 30 July 2021 diff hist +4 m Noah's Ark Changed "…only in 12th century…" to "…only in the 12th century…".
14 March 2021
- 20:2920:29, 14 March 2021 diff hist +2 m Modern art Typo: no space between two artists names.
19 September 2020
- 02:3302:33, 19 September 2020 diff hist +1 m Tuberculosis Spelling: Epidemiology [At-risk groups] -indor- air pollution, to indoor.
28 August 2020
- 19:2319:23, 28 August 2020 diff hist +1 Committee for Skeptical Inquiry Fix Typo in Mission statement: "inquiry ow more than" to "inquiry now more than". Since it's a quote, can't tell if it should be [sic].
21 August 2020
- 23:1423:14, 21 August 2020 diff hist −13 m Vacutainer Corrected "needle are" under Principles heading. Also a little rewording.
28 May 2020
- 15:2415:24, 28 May 2020 diff hist +4 m Advertising Added missing "the" to …some of [the] most… under the Heading 'On the radio from the 1920s'.
14 July 2019
- 16:2616:26, 14 July 2019 diff hist −131 Hearing test Just a general rewrite of the first paragraph under "In-situ audiometry using mobile application".
16 February 2018
- 20:0520:05, 16 February 2018 diff hist +9 Hypokalemia Visual: Added <Line Breaks> under the Urinary loss (alkalosis) entry to separate the three sub-types.
27 December 2017
- 19:2519:25, 27 December 2017 diff hist 0 Synovial fluid →Composition: Fixed typo, Capitalized first word of sentence. Author missed the period before in all the debris. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
1 January 2017
- 03:4703:47, 1 January 2017 diff hist −8 Nimrod →Islamic narrative: Just added some "missing" punctuation and words, although I can't tell what parts should be quotes. (Seems to have been written by someone with English as a second language.)
17 November 2016
- 17:4817:48, 17 November 2016 diff hist +1 m Quality of life (disambiguation) Changed line for consistency with the previous two.
17 October 2016
- 17:2017:20, 17 October 2016 diff hist +20 Potemayo Added an [External Link] to Anime News Network's Potemayo "Anime" page. {I had to reverse engineer the manga entry; that's one hell of a "shortcut"!
5 September 2016
- 21:3421:34, 5 September 2016 diff hist +7 The War of the Jewels Added <Publication Date> after <Title> in first paragraph (from "The History of Middle-earth" page)…because it was missing.
18 December 2015
- 22:5622:56, 18 December 2015 diff hist +4 Humani generis Changed the text from Bishops to Bishops because someone created a Redirection Page for "Bishops" that points to "Bishops (genus)", an extinct genus.
16 December 2015
- 00:4200:42, 16 December 2015 diff hist +1 m Risperidone Typo under _Side effects_: "aswell" to "as well". {Why aren't Wiki pages sent though a basic spellchecker before accepted?}
13 December 2015
- 19:5319:53, 13 December 2015 diff hist +54 Doctor (title) Removed the duplicate entry of "M.D." from the opening because both point to "Doctor of Medicine (Redirected from M.D.)" (I don't know what the original distinction was suppose to be).
12 December 2015
- 23:5423:54, 12 December 2015 diff hist +8 Non-invasive ventilation Changed small and large under Terminology to lowercase and Uppercase; I think Readers know the words. (The U is just to call attention.) The use of sanserif for body text isn't helpful.
4 November 2015
- 21:0921:09, 4 November 2015 diff hist +448 Talk:Personal digital assistant Just my $.02 forth.
28 October 2015
- 20:1120:11, 28 October 2015 diff hist −48 Loneliness Deleted the "Total Perspective Vortex" entry as a failed/bad joke. It points, though a redirection page, to "Technology in The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy". To depressing.
13 September 2015
- 02:0002:00, 13 September 2015 diff hist −1 m WebRTC Changed "an plug-in" to "a plug-in".
10 August 2015
- 23:0623:06, 10 August 2015 diff hist +155 Psychosocial For "The Journal of Psychosocial Studies": removed internal link markup (page doesn't exist!), and added an external link under...External links.
- 22:4022:40, 10 August 2015 diff hist 0 Psychosocial Correction of defective Internal link: didn't like "[[The Association for Psychosocial Studies"
5 August 2015
- 20:1920:19, 5 August 2015 diff hist 0 Symptom (disambiguation) Fixed two typos in entry for Alanis Morissette song. Added comma after Symptoms (film). Italicized song title "When It Was Now".
- 19:1419:14, 5 August 2015 diff hist +18 Signs and symptoms Changed diagnosis to diagnosis. (The "Diagnosis" page looks like a Disambiguation Page in disguise!)
1 August 2015
- 01:5101:51, 1 August 2015 diff hist +2 Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead Punctuation: For King Claudius under Characters, added commas, especially between Denmark and Hamlet (…Denmark, Hamlet…) for clarity.
31 July 2015
- 20:1920:19, 31 July 2015 diff hist −4 Bargaining Removed the internal link status for "stages of dying" at the end of the introduction, because it just points to "Kübler-Ross model (Redirected from Stages of dying)".
- 04:0004:00, 31 July 2015 diff hist −2 Mucous membrane Replaced "germ layer|endodermal" with "endoderm|endodermal " in first sentance. I think "germ layer" is to general. If the viewer is interested, the first sentence of "endoderm" does point to "germ layer".
- 02:4602:46, 31 July 2015 diff hist +10 Sinusitis Replaced "poor smell" with "poor sense of smell" in the first paragraph. Since page deals with an infection, on first reading I thought of both "poor sense of smell" and "smells bad"; ambiguous.
10 July 2015
- 22:0722:07, 10 July 2015 diff hist +16 Altered level of consciousness Changed "morbidity (disability)" to "morbidity (sickness)", and pointed it to [Disease#Morbidity]; because "morbidity" means more than just "disability".
24 June 2015
- 19:4219:42, 24 June 2015 diff hist +63 Electronic paper Do you know what "PVDF" is, 'cause I sure don't. Edited in the full name and link.
22 June 2015
- 17:1817:18, 22 June 2015 diff hist +11 Zeitgeist Added full name and link for "Durkheim" (Émile Durkheim). {Psy. major, and never heard of him...fail!}
18 June 2015
- 20:0120:01, 18 June 2015 diff hist +37 Whey Four Cite Errors (List-defined references not used) were showing at the end of the References section, so I commented them out, per "Help page" reference.
11 June 2015
- 19:3819:38, 11 June 2015 diff hist +27 Xara Designer Pro+ Changed the formatting in the Version column. Was having trouble sorting out the &s and ANDs with the line wrap.
25 May 2015
- 18:0118:01, 25 May 2015 diff hist −7 Visceral fat At least coming from 'Abdominal obesity', I think 'Obesity' is the better subheading for the redirect. It even has "See also: Abdominal obesity" within it.
12 May 2015
- 18:3418:34, 12 May 2015 diff hist +4 m Kvasir Although link heavy, I add a link to "Snorri Sturluson", authors need their due.
9 May 2015
- 16:2116:21, 9 May 2015 diff hist −9 Breathing →Cultural significance: Fixed grammar Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
- 16:0216:02, 9 May 2015 diff hist −2 Pneumotaxic center Fixed typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
27 July 2014
- 18:5018:50, 27 July 2014 diff hist 0 Acetazolamide Changed "apnoea" to "apnea". Apnoea is British English, but it points to "Sleep apnea". {Do they pronounce it the way they spell it?}
21 May 2014
- 05:5505:55, 21 May 2014 diff hist −28 The Kawai Complex Guide to Manors and Hostel Behavior Removed extraneous wording from Plot entry. {Not sure why entry is using "Dormitory" when it's an apartment house with non-school residents.}
15 March 2014
- 19:4619:46, 15 March 2014 diff hist −7 Expansion of the universe Typo: “objects to be become separated”. Removed “become” because this part of the sentence is talking about the present.
3 January 2014
- 00:4300:43, 3 January 2014 diff hist 0 m Removable User Identity Module Typo: 'And' changed to 'and'.
23 December 2013
- 01:3101:31, 23 December 2013 diff hist +14 Hypopnea Problem: 'Wikipedia does not have an encyclopedic article for Lethargy. You may want to read Wiktionary's entry on "lethargy" instead'; so I am substituting.
- 00:4800:48, 23 December 2013 diff hist +1 m Central sleep apnea Fixed typo: [Polysomnography]] - missing a left square bracket.
22 December 2013
- 19:3019:30, 22 December 2013 diff hist −1 Hypoxemia Changed 'Whilst' to 'While'. Just a personal reaction to its use; but from Wiktionary: "…may be considered archaic, pedantic or pompous." (would add, poetic). YMMV.
29 November 2013
- 06:4006:40, 29 November 2013 diff hist 0 Non Non Biyori Just a release update to the Manga section for the sixth volume.
