User contributions for Fcmq
A user with 99 edits. Account created on 25 November 2023.
17 December 2023
- 23:4723:47, 17 December 2023 diff hist −24 W. C. Fields →Illness: tone
- 23:4423:44, 17 December 2023 diff hist +2 W. C. Fields →Fields versus "Nibblers": broke up wall of text
- 23:4323:43, 17 December 2023 diff hist −106 W. C. Fields →Fields versus "Nibblers": fixed atrociously bad grammar and poor tone
- 23:3723:37, 17 December 2023 diff hist −74 W. C. Fields tone
- 23:3523:35, 17 December 2023 diff hist −53 W. C. Fields rewrote incoherent, non-neutral sentence
- 23:3323:33, 17 December 2023 diff hist −3 W. C. Fields →Alcohol, dogs, children, and his red, bulbous nose: write neutrally
- 23:3123:31, 17 December 2023 diff hist +11 W. C. Fields Undid revision 1155333103 by 24.44.73.28 (talk) not an improvement Tag: Undo
- 23:3023:30, 17 December 2023 diff hist −19 W. C. Fields No edit summary
- 23:2923:29, 17 December 2023 diff hist −29 W. C. Fields Undid revision 1156621326 by SalClements (talk) Tag: Undo
- 14:3514:35, 17 December 2023 diff hist −52 Afternoon Delight →Background and writing: encyclopaedic tone
- 14:3414:34, 17 December 2023 diff hist −693 Afternoon Delight removed vague subjective statements, and a table of chart positions suffices; one does not need to write such data out in a list
16 December 2023
- 19:3819:38, 16 December 2023 diff hist −112 2006 Dublin riots improved tone, which was very much not neutral
- 17:5317:53, 16 December 2023 diff hist −10 Vanessa Bayer lead sentence was awful. just state facts.
- 14:4014:40, 16 December 2023 diff hist −71 Vincent D'Onofrio →Acting and filmmaking: nonsense. source says nothing of the kind.
- 13:5413:54, 16 December 2023 diff hist −147 Mongolian gerbil →Behavior: removed more unencyclopaedic "advice"
- 13:5313:53, 16 December 2023 diff hist −982 Mongolian gerbil →Reproduction: much of this text was simply incoherent. rewrote.
- 13:4713:47, 16 December 2023 diff hist −5,437 Mongolian gerbil Removed a lot of unencyclopaedic text - Wikipedia is not a pet-keeping guide
- 12:4012:40, 16 December 2023 diff hist −9 Jenna Ellis improved awful writing in lead, repetitive and ungrammatical
15 December 2023
- 10:1210:12, 15 December 2023 diff hist +18 1965 Roxburgh, Selkirk and Peebles by-election fixed error-strewn lead section
14 December 2023
- 08:4908:49, 14 December 2023 diff hist −404 Baltasar Garzón fixed atrocious writing, removed absurd material from lead
- 08:4608:46, 14 December 2023 diff hist +12 Operation Garzón article is about the operation, not the name of the operation
- 08:1508:15, 14 December 2023 diff hist −83,922 Operation Garzón →Torture testimony: removed totally unencyclopaedic material Tag: Replaced
13 December 2023
- 09:1509:15, 13 December 2023 diff hist 0 Chatham Islands →Climate: fixed atrocious grammar
- 09:1309:13, 13 December 2023 diff hist −140 Chatham Standard Time Zone →External links: no encyclopaedic value in this link
- 09:1309:13, 13 December 2023 diff hist −330 Chatham Standard Time Zone tidied up fragmented and poor writing
- 00:3900:39, 13 December 2023 diff hist −12 Frindle redundant
12 December 2023
- 23:0623:06, 12 December 2023 diff hist −20 James E. Webb →Legacy: writing two identically-structured sentences is very poor writing. presenting them as individual "paragraphs" is yet worse.
- 22:5522:55, 12 December 2023 diff hist −153 Vera Rubin removed jarringly illogical sentence
- 22:4822:48, 12 December 2023 diff hist −38 Vera C. Rubin Observatory →Name: fixed poor writing and style
- 22:2622:26, 12 December 2023 diff hist −4 2012 National Reconnaissance Office space telescope donation to NASA →Background: edits for accuracy and style. "soon" is meaningless. current
- 22:2122:21, 12 December 2023 diff hist −37 Nancy Roman removed useless text with irrelevant link
- 09:0809:08, 12 December 2023 diff hist −23 Rabies →Europe: accuracy
- 08:3708:37, 12 December 2023 diff hist −18 Rabies →Signs and symptoms: write objectively
- 08:3708:37, 12 December 2023 diff hist 0 Nipah virus Undid revision 1187061135 by 98.24.117.152 (talk) Tag: Undo
11 December 2023
- 00:3700:37, 11 December 2023 diff hist −1,845 TR/ST →Timeline: removed weirdly written, totally out of place paragraphs
- 00:3600:36, 11 December 2023 diff hist −193 TR/ST improved some really dreadful writing
- 00:3100:31, 11 December 2023 diff hist 0 Screamadelica →Background, music, influences and recording: fixed glaring grammar error
10 December 2023
- 18:4118:41, 10 December 2023 diff hist −82 Thích Quảng Đức →Precedents and influence: fixed poor writing and a glaring grammar error that has been in the article since 2013
- 13:2313:23, 10 December 2023 diff hist −28 Craig Parkinson removed completely pointless subjective waffling
9 December 2023
- 23:5923:59, 9 December 2023 diff hist −32 m Attractor someone really did not know when bold face is supposed to be used
- 23:2123:21, 9 December 2023 diff hist −102 Chantilly, Oise rewrote promotional text
- 23:1923:19, 9 December 2023 diff hist −857 Chantilly, Oise this is English Wikipedia. links to articles in French are useless to most readers.
- 23:1523:15, 9 December 2023 diff hist −357 Chantilly, Oise →Geography: removed unencyclopaedic and outdated text, replaced links that are useless to most readers
- 21:0321:03, 9 December 2023 diff hist −144 Chas Smash tone
- 17:0217:02, 9 December 2023 diff hist +11 Bangalore →Geography
- 17:0117:01, 9 December 2023 diff hist −50 Bangalore →Geography: coordinates appear at top and in infobox and have no place in a paragraph of normal text
- 16:5016:50, 9 December 2023 diff hist −2 m Madagascar →Etymology: removed pointless bold face
- 14:0814:08, 9 December 2023 diff hist −205 Montemilone →Main sights: not encyclopaedic current
6 December 2023
- 22:3022:30, 6 December 2023 diff hist −301 The Money Pit →Plot: improved very poor text
- 20:2820:28, 6 December 2023 diff hist −630 Marcus Miller removed poorly written advertising and several subjective statements of no encyclopaedic value
