User contributions for Gcrannell
A user with 29 edits. Account created on 14 October 2013.
15 November 2023
- 07:1907:19, 15 November 2023 diff hist +20 m Rapeseed oil part 2 of my last edit 1185206805. found more things that could be improved.
- 07:0107:01, 15 November 2023 diff hist −21 m Rapeseed oil touched up the grammar/syntax to be more readable and concise
15 December 2022
- 00:2400:24, 15 December 2022 diff hist −51 m Eye in the sky (camera) modified the syntax of the sentence to make the meaning more clear. the previous syntax/punctuation implied that card counting was a strategy for past-posting or for playing roulette, neither of which is true.
30 October 2022
- 22:3122:31, 30 October 2022 diff hist −20 Geometric mean changed "THE central tendency" to "A central tendency"... a geometric mean is one of several "central tendencies" of a set of numbers. It's a minor word change, but this is *not* a "minor" edit. This change affects the meaning of the first sentence (to be more correct, hopefully)
29 June 2022
- 08:5608:56, 29 June 2022 diff hist +3 m Hirshhorn Museum and Sculpture Garden "situated" is much less clunky than "sited"
23 June 2022
- 16:2616:26, 23 June 2022 diff hist −121 Art in Paris the first sentence is both redundant and syntactically confusing. removing it improves the flow and readability of the article.
11 June 2022
- 02:4502:45, 11 June 2022 diff hist 0 m Halo: The Fall of Reach →Reception: -- changed preposition to be grammatically correct
21 March 2022
- 17:0117:01, 21 March 2022 diff hist −15 User talk:Gcrannell ←Blanked the page current Tag: Blanking
- 17:0017:00, 21 March 2022 diff hist +43 N User:Gcrannell ←Created page with 'Personal wiki page for me, Graham Crannell.' current
- 17:0017:00, 21 March 2022 diff hist +15 N User talk:Gcrannell ←Created page with 'Graham Crannell'
- 16:5716:57, 21 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Apéritif and digestif added the acute accent diacritic
- 16:5316:53, 21 March 2022 diff hist −3 m Apéritif and digestif fixed the grammar on the pic caption. there are multiple aperitifs, not just one.
- 16:4916:49, 21 March 2022 diff hist −19 m Designated hitter grammar/syntax fix for the first sentence
8 February 2022
- 19:4419:44, 8 February 2022 diff hist +24 Travis Stever No edit summary
20 July 2021
- 16:2016:20, 20 July 2021 diff hist +14 m Apéritif and digestif added "breadsticks" to the caption
14 July 2021
- 16:0016:00, 14 July 2021 diff hist +9 m Abigail Thorn →YouTube: -- updated the subscriber and view-count numbers to be current as of July 2021. (the previous edit with the same changes was made by me, but i was not logged in. i wanted to undo and redo to maintain accountability) Tag: Manual revert
- 15:5615:56, 14 July 2021 diff hist −9 m Abigail Thorn Undid revision 1033582329 by 2601:143:8100:86B0:351A:45FC:BFBB:CCE0 (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
25 February 2021
- 15:4515:45, 25 February 2021 diff hist +10 m Qi added "literally" to the translation information. clarifies the difference between the literal and figurative translations
4 February 2021
- 19:1619:16, 4 February 2021 diff hist 0 m District of Columbia statehood movement syntax - "a currently" to "currently a"
3 November 2020
- 20:0420:04, 3 November 2020 diff hist +449 Girl Scout Cookies added "storefront cookie booths" to the common selling platforms in the intro. i've linked documentation for support. the syntax for integration into the rest of the intro paragraph may need re-work, but i do think the booths are worth mentioning
9 October 2020
- 18:0218:02, 9 October 2020 diff hist +22 m List of largest office buildings moved the "2" to a superscript on the Pentagon's square-meter numbers
6 October 2020
- 20:0220:02, 6 October 2020 diff hist +100 Cube steak →Bucket steak: - there's no source given for the bucket steak section. Seems a bit outlandish and should be cited properly.
26 September 2020
- 20:1320:13, 26 September 2020 diff hist +2 Stephen Tobolowsky The "Action" in Jack Barker's name should be in quotations, as it's a nickname that the tech community gave him (in the show's lore). The "List of Silicon Valley Characters" wiki page uses the same quotation style, so I believe it's a warranted change. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 December 2018
- 18:5218:52, 12 December 2018 diff hist +9 m John F. Kelly Changed "soldier" to "military officer". John Kelly is a former Marine, and as such should not be referred to as a "soldier". Soldiers are members of the US Army.
30 October 2015
- 02:0802:08, 30 October 2015 diff hist −4 m Star Trek: Nemesis →Reception: 'Critical Response', 2nd paragraph, last sentence -- Removed "Picard" and changed tense of quote to make the subject/meaning of the sentence more clear.
