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23 July 2024
- 15:3215:32, 23 July 2024 diff hist +43 United States →Post–Civil War era (1865–1917): More details helpful, with Philippine independence moved from footnote to parentheses. Philippines is the only non-U.S. territory discussed in this summation of territories. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 July 2024
- 22:0022:00, 21 July 2024 diff hist +12 Van Jones →Commentary: Punctuation, indicate proper interpolation in brackets. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2115:21, 21 July 2024 diff hist +14 CrowdStrike →2024 incident: Follow text style for share pricing, not Dow Jones feed style. Tense fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:3314:33, 21 July 2024 diff hist −7 United States Undid revision 1235775112 by Astropulse (talk) -- RV unnecessary "fill word", rejected in discussions. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 July 2024
- 21:0621:06, 20 July 2024 diff hist +26 Sonny Mehta Should match the text lede: a British and American publisher born in India. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4315:43, 20 July 2024 diff hist +6 Johnny Weissmuller Jr. →Biography: Punctuation; "stepson" as in 1st paragraph. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4115:41, 20 July 2024 diff hist +14 Johnny Weissmuller Jr. Punct. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3915:39, 20 July 2024 diff hist +37 Johnny Weissmuller →Personal life: General syntax fixes. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3315:33, 20 July 2024 diff hist 0 Johnny Weissmuller Hyphen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3115:31, 20 July 2024 diff hist 0 Johnny Weissmuller Hyphen: "-born" is hyphenated before a noun (even when preceded by a hyphenated expression). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
19 July 2024
- 23:1323:13, 19 July 2024 diff hist −4 CrowdStrike →2024 incident: Avoid repetition of same dateline. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0115:01, 19 July 2024 diff hist +9 CrowdStrike →2024 incident: Specify. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0115:01, 19 July 2024 diff hist −5 CrowdStrike →2024 incident: Syntax fix. Lowercase "blue screens" (per its WP link). This is a generic term, not a trade name. Avoid repetition of vocabulary ("affecting/affected"). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:4514:45, 19 July 2024 diff hist +250 Wikipedia:Templates for discussion/Log/2024 July 19 →Settlement infobox templates Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 July 2024
- 15:5815:58, 18 July 2024 diff hist 0 Rob Delaney →Political views: Noun (hyphen) in this case. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:1700:17, 18 July 2024 diff hist −9 Wiley (publisher) →Publication of "Paper Mill" generated papers: Symtax, WP style, punctuation current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 July 2024
- 23:2623:26, 17 July 2024 diff hist +13 Contiguous United States →Puerto Rico: Syntax: punctuation fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3816:38, 17 July 2024 diff hist −87 United States Undid revision 1235017729 by IvanScrooge98 (talk) -- RV -- redirect not pertinent or helpful. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 July 2024
- 21:4021:40, 16 July 2024 diff hist +351 Talk:United States →Should the national anthem in the infobox have vocals?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 20:2820:28, 16 July 2024 diff hist +345 Talk:United States →Should the national anthem in the infobox have vocals?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 15:2715:27, 16 July 2024 diff hist +445 Talk:United States →Should the national anthem in the infobox have vocals?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
14 July 2024
- 19:1119:11, 14 July 2024 diff hist +102 Contiguous United States →Hawaii: Added editorial footnote (efn) for info and clarity. Avoid awkward "halfway to Asia." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:0319:03, 14 July 2024 diff hist +24 Contiguous United States →Hawaii: Better syntax without intrusive parentheses; name the one exception: Midway. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:5318:53, 14 July 2024 diff hist +8 Contiguous United States →Alaska: Replace awkward phrasing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4615:46, 14 July 2024 diff hist −31 Languages of the United States Undid revision 1234400996 by 223.233.65.104 (talk) Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 July 2024
- 21:3321:33, 13 July 2024 diff hist −7 Mark Slade WP format. No "present." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:2921:29, 13 July 2024 diff hist −1 Linda Christian Delete comma current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3516:35, 13 July 2024 diff hist +1 Savannah, Georgia →Books and literature: For clarity: italicized work is a novella; the one in quotation marks is a short story. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4415:44, 13 July 2024 diff hist +87 West Coast of the United States Clarity, and to de-emphasize. "West Coast" rarely includes Alaska and Hawaii outside occasional bureaucratic usage. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2515:25, 13 July 2024 diff hist +2 Contiguous United States →Hawaii: Fix syntax. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2215:22, 13 July 2024 diff hist +4 Contiguous United States →Alaska: Link in section. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2115:21, 13 July 2024 diff hist +1 Contiguous United States →Alaska: More basic info; territory became a state. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1615:16, 13 July 2024 diff hist +33 Contiguous United States →Hawaii: Such basic info that must be included. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 July 2024
- 22:1022:10, 12 July 2024 diff hist +14 Atlanta →Cityscape: Fix run-on syntax, add hyphen per WP style. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:0316:03, 12 July 2024 diff hist −26 Lake Charles, Louisiana Deleted. There is no official (or unofficial) French name for Lake Charles. The city is 100% English-speaking and its history is not Cajun or Creole. It was founded after the Civil War. No need to invent or rewrite history. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 July 2024
- 22:3622:36, 11 July 2024 diff hist −235 Atlanta Deleted trivial factoid. Most U.S. cities have the similar areas that use the adjacent large city as a civic address. Interrupting Atlnta's lede text with a useless factoid lowers the quality of the article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1921:19, 11 July 2024 diff hist +20 United States →Post–Civil War era (1865–1917): Added year and WP link Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0721:07, 11 July 2024 diff hist +96 United States →Post–Civil War era (1865–1917): Moved Philippines to an editorial footnote (efn). It isn't a U.S. territory like the others (gained full independence in 1946). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0117:01, 11 July 2024 diff hist +8 United States →National government: Best to follow consistent (lowercased) treatment of these terms in same section; def. article "the" better stylistically. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 July 2024
- 17:0817:08, 10 July 2024 diff hist +385 Talk:United States →What countries does the U.S. border?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 16:5616:56, 10 July 2024 diff hist 0 United States Capitalize "State of" (WP-EN manual of style). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
9 July 2024
- 23:1023:10, 9 July 2024 diff hist 0 Pharaoh ant →Nest demographic: lowercase current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:3321:33, 9 July 2024 diff hist −4 Wilson Pickett →Legal problems and drug abuse: Usage; delete preposition. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:3021:30, 9 July 2024 diff hist 0 Alice Munro →Sexual abuse complicity allegations: Hyph Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4716:47, 9 July 2024 diff hist −5 Savannah, Georgia →Books and literature: Collective plural, fix italics, add period for complete sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3916:39, 9 July 2024 diff hist +118 United States Any mention of the 48 contiguous states should precede, not follow, discussion of the territories. Also, Lower 48 can't be discussed in lede without also calling out Alaska and Hawaii. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 July 2024
- 22:0922:09, 7 July 2024 diff hist +62 Talk:United States →Lead is shockingly biased Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:0522:05, 7 July 2024 diff hist +446 Talk:United States →Lead is shockingly biased: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 18:0018:00, 7 July 2024 diff hist +292 Talk:United States →Lead is shockingly biased: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 17:4717:47, 7 July 2024 diff hist −121 Carlo Maria Viganò The caption is entirely too long and cumbersome. Shortened, accent added. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit