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A user with 685 edits. Account created on 19 December 2005.
28 May 2024
- 13:5813:58, 28 May 2024 diff hist +39 m Larry Newton →Career: rephrase the recording/trains/overtime bit. Now the busy schedules of the artists pops in parenthetically, but the poor quality is the main point.
20 May 2024
- 17:3217:32, 20 May 2024 diff hist −2 Moodle Move UK usage bits to Adoption, from Development.
- 17:3017:30, 20 May 2024 diff hist +3 Moodle Undid revision 1224821685 by Matt Whyndham (talk) Tag: Undo
- 17:2917:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist −3 Moodle moved UK usage notes from Development to Deployment Tag: Reverted
- 17:2217:22, 20 May 2024 diff hist +39 Blackboard Learn →Criticism: copy edit, and closer report of CUNY criticisms current
5 April 2024
- 11:4511:45, 5 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Violin Concerto No. 1 (Prokofiev) →History: tweak position of parenthetical clause on violinist Darrieux experience current
- 11:3811:38, 5 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Gil Shaham →Discography: typo
30 January 2023
- 18:0618:06, 30 January 2023 diff hist −7 Lunar Gateway →Negative reactions: "on the other hand" implies support for what was being argued against, but the quotation (of Aldrin) was about support for something else.
- 11:0211:02, 30 January 2023 diff hist +4 m Automotive Industry Action Group link to WP page on APQP
- 10:4910:49, 30 January 2023 diff hist +394 Talk:Advanced product quality planning →Relation with AIAG: new section Tag: New topic
10 January 2023
- 12:0512:05, 10 January 2023 diff hist +1 m Europe, the Middle East and Africa fix own typo
- 12:0412:04, 10 January 2023 diff hist +1 m Europe, the Middle East and Africa copy ed ("vastly"? : too much!)
13 July 2022
- 09:4009:40, 13 July 2022 diff hist 0 Hyperloop abstraction of system concept (and avoid "component" = low level element)
17 June 2022
- 13:3813:38, 17 June 2022 diff hist +34 m Fremantle Arts Centre →History: correct link to Marquis of Anglesea (i.e. to the ship, not the title)
6 June 2022
- 08:0508:05, 6 June 2022 diff hist +68 m Telecine →Telecine judder: copy edit
8 April 2022
- 17:0717:07, 8 April 2022 diff hist +1 m Dragon NaturallySpeaking →History: copy ed, mostly to clear odd punctuation.
28 March 2022
- 14:1114:11, 28 March 2022 diff hist +6 California wine →Modern era: tidy report of 2010 retail market
11 November 2021
- 10:5310:53, 11 November 2021 diff hist +4 m Colonization of the asteroid belt →Challenges for human habitation: copy ed
11 October 2021
- 09:2309:23, 11 October 2021 diff hist +22 Incremental game →Rapid growth: copy ed, and NPOV
27 September 2021
- 10:1710:17, 27 September 2021 diff hist +7 m Space Fence →History: repair 1 sentence
13 July 2021
- 07:5007:50, 13 July 2021 diff hist −21 m 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake and tsunami →Thailand: copy edit, mostly in Phi Phi Islands
22 June 2021
- 14:5714:57, 22 June 2021 diff hist −5 m Cimetière parisien de Pantin →Notes: tiny copy edit
21 June 2021
- 15:2315:23, 21 June 2021 diff hist +492 Talk:Royal Gorge Route Railroad →Commercial basis of rivalry?: new section
- 15:1915:19, 21 June 2021 diff hist +18 Royal Gorge Route Railroad →History: copy edit
- 15:1715:17, 21 June 2021 diff hist +1 Royal Gorge Route Railroad →History: canon --> canyon in (English) expression "Grand Canyon of the Arkansas"
6 May 2021
- 14:0014:00, 6 May 2021 diff hist −3 m Shannon-class lifeboat copy edit : commas
23 April 2021
- 13:4813:48, 23 April 2021 diff hist −1 m List of Falcon 9 first-stage boosters →Block 5: B1059 footnote: it's --> its
15 April 2021
- 15:4815:48, 15 April 2021 diff hist +2 m Template:Wey River correct spelling of Holmbury St Mary (was "Holbury") current
2 March 2021
- 12:1912:19, 2 March 2021 diff hist +1 m Greenspan put →Powell put: typo
21 February 2021
- 16:0016:00, 21 February 2021 diff hist +12 m Techniques d'Avant Garde →Motorsport: copy edit
20 January 2021
- 08:3708:37, 20 January 2021 diff hist +52 m PanCam →Overview: link to MSSL, part of UCL current
23 November 2020
- 12:1112:11, 23 November 2020 diff hist +20 m American Public University System →Academics and finances: link to Open admissions (page)
15 July 2020
- 12:3512:35, 15 July 2020 diff hist +8 m Microsoft Power BI →Key components: Copy edit. Power BI Service : clean up ( ), e.g. uneven number of (), and replace the FKA bit with an explanatory following sentence.
30 April 2020
- 11:4211:42, 30 April 2020 diff hist −1 m Space settlement →NASA concepts
8 January 2020
- 09:5209:52, 8 January 2020 diff hist +294 Talk:British Rail Class 450 →Formation code following 2017 refurb: new section
12 November 2019
- 16:4316:43, 12 November 2019 diff hist +6 m New Routemaster →Ownership: applicability ...TO (or it could be utility ... IN)
29 October 2019
- 16:4616:46, 29 October 2019 diff hist −3 m Honor Oak grammar
21 October 2019
- 09:1309:13, 21 October 2019 diff hist +22 Sustainable Development Goals Consistent caps in bullets. Rephrase to avoid "Key to X is Y" construct.
3 October 2019
- 16:1716:17, 3 October 2019 diff hist +13 m Handpan Clean up sentence with no verb, defining the Hang and its influences. Remove "countless".
16 September 2019
- 12:5312:53, 16 September 2019 diff hist +35 Anaconda (Python distribution) →Overview: rework, changing sentences using the second person "you"
5 September 2019
- 15:3615:36, 5 September 2019 diff hist +85 ExoMars rework introduction, putting mission overview first, followed by descriptions of the two main components
- 15:3015:30, 5 September 2019 diff hist +8 m ExoMars →2016 first spacecraft launch: grammar correction
30 August 2019
- 10:3510:35, 30 August 2019 diff hist +42 Alipay →History: minor cleanup, & 1 citation required tag
29 August 2019
- 12:4812:48, 29 August 2019 diff hist +10 Regional arts board clarify that RDD was within ACGB, and not e.g. a Govt' Dept.
- 10:4910:49, 29 August 2019 diff hist +74 CSS grid layout copy editing
28 August 2019
- 10:2010:20, 28 August 2019 diff hist +13 Regional arts board →History
23 August 2019
- 11:5111:51, 23 August 2019 diff hist −4 Bank of China improved wording around granting of official status as Central Bank in 1912.
- 11:4811:48, 23 August 2019 diff hist +5 Bank of China →History
22 August 2019
- 12:4112:41, 22 August 2019 diff hist +32 m Byzantine fault No edit summary
- 12:3612:36, 22 August 2019 diff hist +17 m Two Generals' Problem No edit summary