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A user with 57 edits. Account created on 1 September 2006.
30 May 2023
- 18:0118:01, 30 May 2023 diff hist +2 m 1980–81 Dumbarton F.C. season →Overview: changed '''may''' to '''might''' for gr\mmatical accuracy ~~~ current
13 December 2022
- 18:2618:26, 13 December 2022 diff hist −12 m Theresa May removed an unecessary duplication ('''succeeded by''')
7 December 2022
- 15:0015:00, 7 December 2022 diff hist −4 m Christopher Cradock →Command and flag rank: deleted an otiose '''to'''
16 May 2022
- 14:5814:58, 16 May 2022 diff hist +91 Irvine, North Ayrshire →Notable people
10 March 2022
- 12:5412:54, 10 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Anti-Lebanon mountains →Geology: Removed unnecessary 'a' from ;lying'. ~~~~
6 March 2022
- 16:5516:55, 6 March 2022 diff hist +356 m Bishop Burton →The Gee and Watt families of Bishop Burton
26 November 2021
- 17:5817:58, 26 November 2021 diff hist +6 m Braveheart →Plot: corrected Latin in Wikipedia reference
29 April 2021
- 19:2219:22, 29 April 2021 diff hist +15 m Thomas Dyche →Major works: linked to Nahum Tate
30 March 2021
- 02:5202:52, 30 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Ancien régime Pedantically improved apostrophization - 'Hapsburg' as plural takes s' in the possessive
24 March 2021
- 14:5814:58, 24 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Ancien régime →Peasants: Corrected gender of the 'third estate' shown in the cartoon
21 March 2021
- 20:4820:48, 21 March 2021 diff hist +1 m Ancien régime →Administration: inserted missing 's' into 'as'
12 March 2021
- 20:0620:06, 12 March 2021 diff hist +6 m Breast-shaped hill →Europe: Pedantically made reference to North Berwick Law more accurate
- 20:0120:01, 12 March 2021 diff hist 0 m Breast →Anthropomorphic geography: translated 'teton' as 'nipple', rather than 'breast'
7 March 2021
- 15:3315:33, 7 March 2021 diff hist −1 m User:P macauslan/Jack Kaye No edit summary current
- 15:3115:31, 7 March 2021 diff hist +916 N User:P macauslan/Jack Kaye ←Created page with '{{Userspace draft|source=ArticleWizard|date={{Subst:March}} {{Subst:2021}}}} {{Subst:Nul|<==do not change this line, it will set the date automatically}} '''Jac...'
- 15:3015:30, 7 March 2021 diff hist +23 The Avenues, Kingston upon Hull →History: Pedantically removed two comma splices, and tidied grammar.
- 15:2215:22, 7 March 2021 diff hist 0 m The Avenues, Kingston upon Hull Pedantically unspliced a comma.
26 February 2021
- 17:5317:53, 26 February 2021 diff hist 0 George Talbot, 6th Earl of Shrewsbury →Personal life, illness and death: Pedantically replaced, with ; (comma splice), and - after 'between' and replaced it with 'and'
22 February 2021
- 17:1017:10, 22 February 2021 diff hist +9 m Peter H. Wilson Pedantically smoothed the grammar around 'chair' and 'professor'
3 February 2021
- 18:4618:46, 3 February 2021 diff hist +23 m Kite →Underwater kites: Added ref to paravane
- 18:4118:41, 3 February 2021 diff hist +211 Kite →Underwater kites: Added a note about minesweeping kites.
- 12:2512:25, 3 February 2021 diff hist −1 London Scottish F.C. →Founding (1878): pedantically correcte 'miss-reported' to '''mis-reported'''
20 December 2020
- 16:0116:01, 20 December 2020 diff hist 0 m Alexander (surname) added death date to Ann Dunlop Alexander (from her article in wikipedia)
6 December 2020
- 14:2714:27, 6 December 2020 diff hist +1 m Archibald Hill →Biography: Corrected 1945 to 1935 tor the birth of radar (ODNB); added '-s' to scientist - obviously a plural meaning
- 14:1214:12, 6 December 2020 diff hist +2 m Radar →Just before World War II: Amended grammar - 'might have' for 'may have'
20 November 2020
- 14:3614:36, 20 November 2020 diff hist +1 m Operation Seagull II →Military context: Pedantically inserted apostrrophe in 'Abwehrs'
18 November 2020
- 18:3718:37, 18 November 2020 diff hist 0 m Thomas White (Australian politician) →First World War: fixed typo (] for |)
20 September 2020
- 16:1716:17, 20 September 2020 diff hist 0 m Serbia and Montenegro →Yugoslav Wars: Corrected typo ('recognised' for 'recogisned')
- 15:4715:47, 20 September 2020 diff hist 0 m Serbia and Montenegro →Foundation: Avoided comma splice with ', however'
- 15:3715:37, 20 September 2020 diff hist −3 m Serbia and Montenegro Pedantically mproved grammar of 'comprise' - see http://hull-awe.org.uk/index.php/Comprise_(grammar)
16 September 2020
- 14:2514:25, 16 September 2020 diff hist +2 m Stefan Uroš V →Reign: Pedantic improvement of grammar - balancing 'becom<u>ing</u>' with 'replac<u>ing</u>' rather than 'replac<s>e</s>'
11 September 2020
- 16:1016:10, 11 September 2020 diff hist 0 m Serbian Chetnik Organization improved punctuation - ; for , to avoid comma splice.
2 September 2020
- 18:2018:20, 2 September 2020 diff hist +3 m Chetniks in the interwar period pedantic - inserted'''-l-''' into 'singe', and added an indefinite article.
11 August 2020
- 11:2211:22, 11 August 2020 diff hist −2 m Talk:Méric Casaubon →Untitled
- 11:1911:19, 11 August 2020 diff hist +190 Talk:Méric Casaubon →Untitled
- 11:1411:14, 11 August 2020 diff hist −1 m Méric Casaubon →Life: removed accent from Meric, to be consistent.
21 July 2020
- 17:1717:17, 21 July 2020 diff hist +1 m Brambling →Description: Closed a [comma] parenthesis
12 July 2020
- 16:1716:17, 12 July 2020 diff hist −3 Serbia →Ottoman and Habsburg rule: Deleted otiose 'it' after a passive verb (established')
11 July 2020
- 20:0420:04, 11 July 2020 diff hist +258 m Zakonopravilo →Content of Zakonopravilo: I've begun to modify the English of this page, and add some links. Others I can't.
- 16:2116:21, 11 July 2020 diff hist −3 m Namesake →Usage: Deleted otiose 'is' before 'usually refers to'
10 July 2020
- 17:2817:28, 10 July 2020 diff hist +3 m Serbia →Arrival of the Slavs and state formation: Grammar: inserted '''to''' into 'Serbian state stretched the Adriatic Sea' (makes more sense; I trust it's true).
6 July 2020
- 17:2317:23, 6 July 2020 diff hist −1 Ustaše →Ideological roots: Changed malapropism 'aggravated' to '''irritated''' (see http://hull-awe.org.uk/index.php/Aggravate)
- 14:3014:30, 6 July 2020 diff hist −3 m 6 January Dictatorship →History: pedantically removed unnecessary 'to' from '''renamed''' (ditransitive verb)
1 July 2020
- 17:3317:33, 1 July 2020 diff hist +103 Ustaše added '''Ustashe''' to 'anglicized version<u>s</u>'
27 June 2020
- 01:5401:54, 27 June 2020 diff hist −1 Yugoslavia and the Allies →Contact with Yugoslavia: Grammatical pedantry - changewd'''him''' to '''he''' as subjective form.
20 June 2020
- 15:5515:55, 20 June 2020 diff hist +351 Talk:Josip Broz Tito →Protected edit request on 20 June 2020: new section
- 15:4615:46, 20 June 2020 diff hist −1 m Death and state funeral of Josip Broz Tito Improved grammar of 'translation' '''lay''' for 'lai' (see http://hull-awe.org.uk/index.php/Laid_-_lay_-_lie_-_lied)
19 June 2020
- 15:0815:08, 19 June 2020 diff hist −1 m 54 (novel) →Historical context and plots: Corrected spelling of 'Marshall' to 'Marshal', as a rank. (See http://hull-awe.org.uk/index.php/Marshall)
17 June 2020
- 20:2420:24, 17 June 2020 diff hist +1 World War II in Yugoslavia →Italian capitulation and Allied support for the Partisans: pedantry - took comma away from a defining relative clause
11 June 2020
- 17:4417:44, 11 June 2020 diff hist +2 m Early Slavs corrected typo - replaced 'habitants with 'habitation'