User contributions for Paroberts
A user with 29 edits. Account created on 31 October 2010.
28 August 2023
- 00:4000:40, 28 August 2023 diff hist +4 m Michael K. Williams changed "subject to" to "the subject of"
12 February 2023
- 22:3722:37, 12 February 2023 diff hist −1 m Hart Senate Office Building →Atrium: Changed "the" to "to" at beginning of sentence - "The enhance the building's efficiency . . ."
15 October 2022
- 14:4514:45, 15 October 2022 diff hist +9 m Our America Initiative →Suit Against Presidential Debate Commission
28 March 2021
- 04:5704:57, 28 March 2021 diff hist +3 m Edward Abbey Add the article "an" before "iconic work" in the first paragraph.
12 September 2020
- 03:0103:01, 12 September 2020 diff hist +32 m Mind's Eye (The X-Files) Broke up the sentence at the end of the first paragraph to make it clear that the Emmy nomination refers goes to the actor Taylor, not the character, Glenn.
- 02:5702:57, 12 September 2020 diff hist −1 m Mind's Eye (The X-Files) Removed extra quotation mark.
29 April 2020
1 January 2020
- 13:3113:31, 1 January 2020 diff hist +143 1987 World Series →Game 1: Revised the section describing the Cardinals' defensive struggles, adding specificity and context (none of their miscues led to Twins runs); I deleted "fast Astroturf" as a contributing factor for Cardinals' miscues since the Cardinals themselves played all their homes games on Astroturf.
10 October 2019
- 04:5404:54, 10 October 2019 diff hist +576 1987 World Series →Aftermath: I've moved the section about Twins employee admitting he adjusted the air conditioning fans while the Twins were at bat, emphasizing that this only emerged long after the 1987 World Series, and that he acted on his own initiative, not as instructed by "administration" as this page previously stated.
- 04:4304:43, 10 October 2019 diff hist −481 1987 World Series →Summary: This reference to a technician turning on the air conditioning did not as this article suggests, emerge as a controversy *during* the World Series. It only emerged as sideline story some years later. Thus, I am moving it to the aftermath section of this article. Also, the cited article makes reference only to a lone technician acting on his own behalf. There is no corroboration for the article's assertion that employees were instructed by "administration" to turn on the fans.
- 02:2502:25, 10 October 2019 diff hist +1 Gethsemane (The X-Files) Undid revision 920481000 by Paroberts (talk) Tag: Undo
- 02:1102:11, 10 October 2019 diff hist −1 Gethsemane (The X-Files) →Reviews
- 01:5501:55, 10 October 2019 diff hist +362 1987 World Series →Aftermath: The article ended by listing Al Michaels theory, presented without evidence, that the Twins pumped crowd noise into the Metrodome. I've given space for the Twins to respond to this allegation.
23 September 2019
- 00:2400:24, 23 September 2019 diff hist +17 m Marriott Wardman Park Added link to Milton Young Wikipedia page
1 September 2019
- 16:5016:50, 1 September 2019 diff hist +1 m Kennys Vargas Substituted "called up" for "ascended" under Career/Minnesota Twins - 5th paragraph
25 April 2019
- 15:3915:39, 25 April 2019 diff hist +12 m Wendy Williams →Early life
24 March 2019
- 21:5021:50, 24 March 2019 diff hist −1 m H. Jon Benjamin No edit summary
- 21:3221:32, 24 March 2019 diff hist +5 Lüshunkou, Dalian No edit summary
17 November 2017
- 07:2907:29, 17 November 2017 diff hist −21 Michelle Monaghan →Career: "Was reported to have joined" changed to "joined." Since the film did appear with her in it, there is no question that she joined the cast.
- 07:2007:20, 17 November 2017 diff hist +9 Claire Danes →Early life and education: "Went to" Yale University is not very precise - what is being described here is the fact of her beginning studies at Yale. "Went to" is usually used when someone has completed studies at a particular university.
- 07:1607:16, 17 November 2017 diff hist −37 Claire Danes →Early life and education: Deleted "during its first year of existence" as a referent for her junior high school. "Junior high school" is usually more than one year so the referent does not make sense in its current form.
- 06:5506:55, 17 November 2017 diff hist −49 Mandy Patinkin →Personal life: Deleted description of his participation in the book inspired by Christopher Reeve as prior to his death as irrelevant to this sentence.
18 October 2017
- 16:2216:22, 18 October 2017 diff hist +212 Marriott Wardman Park →Residents
5 September 2014
- 11:3611:36, 5 September 2014 diff hist −30 Carrie Coon Removed "on a full tuition scholarship," as it does not make sense appended after "earned her M.F.A in Acting."
- 11:3211:32, 5 September 2014 diff hist −8 m Carrie Coon Removed "Chicago" because she appeared in some of these shows in Madison, WI.
- 11:2811:28, 5 September 2014 diff hist +4 m Carrie Coon →Career
- 11:2611:26, 5 September 2014 diff hist +4 m Carrie Coon →Career
- 11:2611:26, 5 September 2014 diff hist −4 m Carrie Coon →Career
