User contributions for PlanetCare
A user with 1,546 edits. Account created on 4 March 2017.
3 July 2023
- 17:4017:40, 3 July 2023 diff hist +132 Talk:Uhuru (satellite) →Mission names: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:1517:15, 3 July 2023 diff hist +94 Talk:Uhuru (satellite) →Untitled: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:1117:11, 3 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Uhuru (satellite) →Naming: minor edit to clarify Tag: Visual edit
29 November 2022
- 19:1319:13, 29 November 2022 diff hist −23 m Effects of climate change on oceans →top: Edited to avoid beginning the article with the "deadwood" word "There." Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1019:10, 29 November 2022 diff hist −38 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: deleted duplication of point about 1.6 inch hail. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0819:08, 29 November 2022 diff hist −35 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: general editing to clarify points the author wants to make. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0519:05, 29 November 2022 diff hist −87 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5918:59, 29 November 2022 diff hist −81 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: deleted the phrase "in living memory" and edited so that the point about wheat, rice and maize prices followed directly after the assertion that prices were higher. Added a "citation needed" because that point was unsourced. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5418:54, 29 November 2022 diff hist −379 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: The last paragraph was unsourced and offered an opinion ("something to worry about"). I favor deleting the paragraph as I think the same factual points have already been made. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5118:51, 29 November 2022 diff hist +8 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: Shortened the opening sentence to get to the point sooner. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 18:4818:48, 29 November 2022 diff hist −16 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: Clarifying the meaning of the sentence about sustainable food systems. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:4218:42, 29 November 2022 diff hist +33 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: This paragraph had long sentences that were hard to follow. I have shortened sentences without omitting any content. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:2918:29, 29 November 2022 diff hist +31 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: split a couple of sentence into two sentences to improve readability. Tag: Visual edit
30 May 2022
- 19:3319:33, 30 May 2022 diff hist +17 Emma Lou Thayne completed unfinished sentence with "Mormon poets," Tag: Visual edit
15 May 2022
- 13:3713:37, 15 May 2022 diff hist +74 Chase N. Peterson →top: reversed the sequencing, to reflect chronology of events Tag: Visual edit
1 April 2022
- 22:5522:55, 1 April 2022 diff hist +89 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion about improving the article
- 22:3922:39, 1 April 2022 diff hist +386 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion about improving the article
- 22:1122:11, 1 April 2022 diff hist −1 Sustainability →Government action: took out the parentheses, as the sentence is just as important as the one that it follows, Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0622:06, 1 April 2022 diff hist −3 m Sustainability →Decoupling economic growth from environmental deterioration: very minor. deleted a period in the middle of a sentence and change environmental to environment,. Tag: Visual edit
31 March 2022
- 23:3023:30, 31 March 2022 diff hist +3 m Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
- 23:2723:27, 31 March 2022 diff hist +1 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
- 23:2523:25, 31 March 2022 diff hist +327 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Sustainability
- 23:2123:21, 31 March 2022 diff hist +923 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
- 23:0823:08, 31 March 2022 diff hist +1,130 Sustainability →Economic dimension: inserted info about research disproving theory that government participation/intervention is needed. Changed "intervention" to "participation" as per Talk page. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3816:38, 31 March 2022 diff hist +1 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3716:37, 31 March 2022 diff hist −10 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2516:25, 31 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Microplastics →Humans Tag: Visual edit
30 March 2022
- 21:4421:44, 30 March 2022 diff hist −2 Sustainability →Environmental economics: readability edits in the first paragraph Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4021:40, 30 March 2022 diff hist +309 Sustainability →Economic dimension: inserted an example of an "Externality" to make it more clear to the average reader what an "externality" is. Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2721:27, 30 March 2022 diff hist +33 Sustainability →Economic dimension: attempt to improve clarity of the explanation of what decoupling is Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2021:20, 30 March 2022 diff hist −21 Sustainability →Economic dimension: readability edits Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1221:12, 30 March 2022 diff hist −2 Sustainability →Measuring human impacts on the environment: making sentences a bit shorter and easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2120:21, 30 March 2022 diff hist +122 Talk:Microplastics →WikiProject Sanitation & Readability
- 20:1920:19, 30 March 2022 diff hist −19 Microplastics →top: The study reported mentions human blood, but not human tissue, so I deleted "human tissue" Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1220:12, 30 March 2022 diff hist +6 Microplastics →top: Corrected a fact: plastics found in the blood of 17 of the 22 volunteers Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1020:10, 30 March 2022 diff hist +371 Microplastics →top: Added 3 sentences about the 2022 study that detected polymers in human blood, which was referenced in the lead. Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3616:36, 30 March 2022 diff hist +435 Microplastics →top: adding exact citation. (should we remove the newspaper citation?) Tag: Visual edit
21 March 2022
- 23:1123:11, 21 March 2022 diff hist −5 Sustainability →top: readability issues Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0823:08, 21 March 2022 diff hist −79 Sustainability →top: I deleted "also" from the phrase "Furthermore, the report also" --unnecessary. Looking for small ways to make sentences shorter by simplifying language. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 23:0323:03, 21 March 2022 diff hist +8 Sustainability →top: clarifications and some rephrasing. Split one long sentence into two. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5722:57, 21 March 2022 diff hist −16 Sustainability →top: calling the "three dimensions" a concept is not an accurate use of the term "concept" (in my book). Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5422:54, 21 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Sustainability →top: capitalized "The" Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5222:52, 21 March 2022 diff hist +12 Sustainability →top: attempt to make the section headline more clear. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5022:50, 21 March 2022 diff hist +25 Sustainability →top: clarifications Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4722:47, 21 March 2022 diff hist −4 Sustainability →top: clarifications and reducing some wordy phrases Tag: Visual edit
8 February 2022
- 13:2513:25, 8 February 2022 diff hist −1 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit
5 February 2022
- 19:2519:25, 5 February 2022 diff hist +716 Talk:Sustainability →A proposed new structure
- 19:1819:18, 5 February 2022 diff hist +201 Talk:Sustainability →A suggestion for major culling and condensing
- 19:0819:08, 5 February 2022 diff hist −3 m Sustainability →Relationship with the concept of sustainable development Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5018:50, 5 February 2022 diff hist +185 Sustainability →top: I was tempted to delete the uncited reference to TAHK because it is not comparable to the Paris agreement and the SDGs. Instead I edited it for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
