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25 May 2023

24 May 2023

  • 18:5218:52, 24 May 2023 diff hist −9 Sermon on the MountRemoved unnecessary quotation marks. Also removed the word "long" to account for possible disputes regarding the sermon being given in a single event (even if such a dispute doesn't exist, this word is unnecessary anyways so better to remove it).
  • 18:4518:45, 24 May 2023 diff hist −994 Mount of BeatitudesRemoved section on Significance due to lack of citations on the claims being made as "consensus", thereby bringing up MOS:WEASEL and WP:CITENEED concerns. The section also currently reads like WP:OR, as it makes conclusions regarding Betz's research without these conclusions themselves being cited.

1 April 2022

  • 04:0004:00, 1 April 2022 diff hist +68 Millions (2004 film)If you read the CNS review in context, it makes no claim that those scenes, "marred [the film's] religious underpinning." This particular review simply lists out those scenes as a guide to help individuals (e.g., parents) decide whether it's appropriate to show the film to someone, based on personal disposition (e.g., they might judge that they can show it to adults, but not young kids). I've rephrased this portion of the article accordingly to avoid WP:OR

15 November 2021

  • 20:2620:26, 15 November 2021 diff hist −42 Software regressionRemoved unreliable sources tag as there doesn't seem to be any concerns with the edit, and I think the issue's been sufficiently addressed (although the article as a whole could certainly still be expanded)

8 November 2021

24 October 2021

  • 22:5322:53, 24 October 2021 diff hist +21 Balut (food)Where it’s commonly sold is a distinct piece of info from what language/country its etymology is associated with, so added a sentence in accordance to this. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

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31 January 2021

  • 21:2121:21, 31 January 2021 diff hist −4 Abby Johnson (activist)→‎Resignation from Planned Parenthood: “revealed” -> “said” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
  • 18:4818:48, 31 January 2021 diff hist −13 Norma McCorveyMade additional changes as per WP:NPOV. The first sentence is redundant wrt the next few sentences that come after it. As for the last sentence, the essence of my previous edit was to strip the paragraph of any interpretations regarding personal intent, which we cannot infer to begin with. So it’s best to stick to the raw facts. Note also that like the abortion-rights movement, the anti-abortion movement is not a “single body”. So made changes clarifying this. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

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