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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 05:28, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this one, comments to follow. Zawed (talk) 05:28, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • "...plan many Air raids on Japan...": lower case a for Air.
    • Fixed 04:27, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

Background

Photo reconnaissance sortie

  • wikilink California, Oahu, Kwajalein, Brigadier General, 47th Sentai? If no link for the latter, maybe a note to explain what it is - I assume a squadron or wing?
    • I think California would be over-linking given the relevant location there is linked, but I've linked the others.
  • "...American airmen took 7000..."; for consistency with the presentation of numbers in the rest of the article, shouldn't it be 7,000?

Other stuff

Overall, this article reads well, is fully cited and neutral in tone, and has reasonable coverage of the subject. I will check back on progress in a few days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 06:20, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the review - I'll follow up on your comments tomorrow or over the weekend Nick-D (talk) 10:40, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I think that I've now responded to all your comments. Nick-D (talk) 04:27, 4 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Yep, looks good Nick, passing as a GA now. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 09:01, 5 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again Nick-D (talk) 09:16, 5 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]