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Good articleArizona State Route 347 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
March 10, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Arizona State Route 347/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 03:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]


Thank you for nominating this article. No disamb. links or invalid external links.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    "where the a farm appears" - delete "the"
     Done. --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    "about 33,000 vehicles used the route on an average day." - can you say at what point on the route?
     Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    What about adding Harrah's casino to the route description?
    What evidence do you have of this? Harrah's casino seems to be in San Diego. --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
     Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Official website and map shows address as 15406 Maricopa Road, Maricopa, AZ 85239.
    Please add to the route description the at grade rail crossing just before W Maricopia Casa Grande Hwy.
    Where? Can you give me a source? --PCB 04:16, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Ref #3.
     Done --PCB 04:29, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    No edit wars.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    This article represents significant work by its author. Putting review on hold for you to address concerns. Racepacket (talk) 04:09, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you. I believe I have fixed all errors. --PCB 04:31, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your quick responses. One final point and we are done — why does the lead paragraph say 40,000 vehicles per day, but the highest total in the body of the article is only 33,000 vehicles? Thanks! Racepacket (talk) 04:32, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I want the lead to be less specific. In addition, the AADT is higher elsewhere. --PCB 04:35, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the explanation and congratulations on another Good Article. Racepacket (talk) 04:43, 10 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]