Talk:Climate change in Belgium
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Paris agreement
[edit]“Hello! We are three students from the Ecological Effects of Climate Changes course at Uppsala University. We're working on updating the paris agreement in some of the climate change articles as part of our coursework. We're learning and welcome any feedback. “
Suggestions
[edit]Hi there! I just wanted to offer a few suggestions on improving this page. First off, I think a longer lead that describes the sections of this article would draw more attention to the topics that you discuss. I would check out Global warming in Antarctica for an example on a similar potential lead. All of the contents are relevant to the topic of this article. However, I would look at a similar page about Global Warming in Norway for more ideas about possible sections to add. For example, this would be a better page if it included information about the loss of biodiversity in Belgium and short term and long term effects of this problem. In addition, I liked how you maintained a neutral tone and a good balance of ideas throughout the article. However, I would consider relying on a broader selection of sources to create a more complete, detailed page. I would also add images, especially one to the Lead, to contribute to the visual component of the article. Additionally, I would add a few more citations and footnotes throughout your work, especially at the beginning of the Agreements section. Nevertheless, all of the information that you presented was detailed and was backed up with data which added to your credibility. Additionally, your sources were reliable, and your structure was clear. I hope you consider my suggestions. Happy editing! - Prashanth314 (talk) 04:16, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
Suggested changes to headings and structure
[edit]I suggest to change the headings and structure of this article to be in line with the template that has been proposed here for all articles of the nature "Climate change in Country X": https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Climate_change/Style_guide (see also discussion on that page's talk page). Anyone has any objections? If not, who's got time to give it a go? I am slowly working away at this for all the countries but would love some collaborators. EMsmile (talk) 03:32, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
- Done. EMsmile (talk) 00:46, 24 February 2021 (UTC)