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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:32, 30 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "who had many valuable old books" probably unnecessary.
  •  Done


  • "States. His library included" merge.
  •  Done


  • "included... including" repetitive.
  •  Done



  • US not USA in infobox.
  •  Done


  • "Harvard College" link?
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  • Cambridgeport (article) or Cambridge (infobox)? Be consistent.
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  • "His English ancestor, John Livermore, who emigrated from Ipswich, England to " (heh, I was born there...) + comma after England.
  •  Done = no wonder your English is so good!


  • "United States. [3]" no space before ref.
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  • "public and private elementary" links because they mean different things in different countries.
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  • "poet Oliver Wendell Holmes" should there be a Sr there?
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  • "in 1827-28, when" en-dash.
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  • "some eight miles away" convert.
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  • "the later part" curiously I normally say "latter".
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  • "visited President" he just visited the US Pres?!
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  • "In this business he did a lot of traveling" bit colloquial, could be "He traveled extensively for work." or similar.
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  • "1834-35, " en-dash.
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  • "He enjoyed books ... He enjoyed books..." repetitive.
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  • "States.[10] [11]" no space between refs
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  • "the "Christian Examiner"' " italics and not in quotes.
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  • "the "Cambridge Chronicle"" is that another publication which should be in italics?
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  • "time.[10] He wrote hymns for Sunday school children." can you merge this to reduce repetition.
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  • " Cromwell's Soldiers' Pocket Bible" again, check italics.
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  • "of Coverdale's Bible" our article is called The Coverdale Bible.
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  • Link Vulgate.
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  • "given to Queen Elizabeth by" Elizabeth I.
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  • "were own by Livermore. He owned a copy " owned by Livermore, but need some reword to avoid the quick repeat.
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  • "single leaf on vellum" links?
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  • "Historical Research - self published (200 pages)." etc, en-dash, not hyphen, check whole list.
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  • "at that time he was elected a member of the Phi Beta Kappa Society." you already said that.
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  • "He was also a member of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences" and that. Suggest you look at consolidating the Societies and Legacy...

sections.

  •  Done


  • "It included ancient copies of the rare Bibles" you've already covered this adequately.
  •  Done