Talk:Jaden Schwartz/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: XR228 (talk · contribs) 06:01, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 19:30, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Hi, I will complete a review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 19:30, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Ok. Thanks! XR228 (talk) 19:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

@XR228: Sorry for the slight delay, I'll be doing this review later today... tomorrow. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:48, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

• Ref. 2 is not needed, the information is already cited in the body.
• Schwartz finished fifth in SJHL scoring with 34 goals and 42 assists in 46 games. Remove the word "with"
• His 47 points was highest on the team. Change to "His 47 points were the highest on the team."
• ...four of his 15 goals were recorded as game-winning goals and five of his goals came on power plays. Add a comma after "game-winning goals"
• The change made as a tribute to his late sister, who wore the number playing hockey at Yale before being diagnosed with leukemia. Add "was" after "change"
• On July 28, 2021, Schwartz was signed by expansion club, the Seattle Kraken, agreeing to a five-year, $27.5 million contract. Add "an" before "expansion"
• Schwartz was born in Melfort, Saskatchewan and grew up in Wilcox, Saskatchewan... Add commas after both "Saskatchewan"s
• and now plays for the Kassel Huskies of the German Deutche Eishockey Liga 2 (DEL2), Add "as of 2024, plays for the..."

2. Verifiable
Passes Copyvio check. Spot check: 5, 6, 14, 18, 21, 24, 29, 31, 35, 37.

• Out longer than expected, he was activated from the injured reserve on March 5. Source?
• He would also play at the World U-17 Hockey Challenge in 2009, with a fourth-place finish. The source given doesn't note they finished fourth.
• More sources are needed for the Awards and Honors section.
• Sportskeeda is considered unreliable per Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources
• Refs. 13, 15, and 28 need archived links. I noticed 13 says it's a permanent dead link, is there another source that could be used?

3. Broad

• What happened during his year with the Peoria Rivermen (2012-13)?
• How did he play during the 2014-15 and 2015-16 seasons?
• There's a big gap in information from the 2016 contract until 2019.

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
The article is stable.

6. Illustrated
The images are free use and have relevant captions.

• Could the image in the Collegiate section be right-aligned?

@XR228: Okay, I've completed the review. My suggestions are in the bullet points. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:16, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Thanks. I'll complete these soon. XR228 (talk) 03:53, 9 July 2024 (UTC)