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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 01:58, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 01:58, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • I feel like the synopsis is a bit lacking, and seems pretty cut and dry. Was there more to the story then that? If not that's ok, since only 22 minutes survived so there might not be much.
  • The source only gives a short summary of the events, and I'm afraid that I cannot find anything else, probably because so little of this film remains.
  • "in the house of a priest named Moreira, the location of the Jorge-Eliécer-Gaitán theatre." This part is worded oddly and I'm not sure what the end is trying to say; reword.
  •  Done
  • "The theatre was crowded during the seventeen showings of the film, but it was not very successful financially." Why was it not successful? The two point seem to almost contradict themselves, so I was wondering if there was more to that.
  • I'm not sure, and am unable to find further information about this. The source simply says 'Pero según Gonzalo Acevedo Bernal, hijo de Arturo, "el éxito económico fue poco".'

Overall I didn't find many issues. I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 14:14, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Wizardman: I've responded above. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:37, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 19:33, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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