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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 03:19, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • "name - Type" replace hyphen with dash
    • Sure.
  • Replace "U.S.S.R." with "Soviet Union" no links
    • Sure
  • Are there any reason why "4" shouldn't be spelled out in full?
    • MOS for infoboxes is to use the digits in all cases.
  • "Lavochkin Design Bureau (OKB)" --> "Lavochkin Design Bureau (OKB)"
  • Please spell "150", "152", as "La-150"
    • Using 150 etc. is my attempt to bypass nomenclature issues dealing with the bullshit La-X or the proper Izdeliye name as used by the OKB. I've reluctantly used La-152 in the lede and in references to other articles, but won't use it again.
  • Does this use Am Eng? If yes, cancelled should be canceled.
    • Fixed
  • "In the meantime" --> "Meanwhile"
    • Good idea.
  • "versions of the RD-10 in an effort to increase the engine's power."
    • Done.
  • "340 kilograms-force kgf" please standardise throughout article
    • This is an issue with the template which is set up only for kN. Do you want me to manually convert them all to kN?

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: